Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Khwaish Part 19

( its so cute , thank You deeps for making it )

Khanak was waiting for jai along with khwaish in her arms in the airport looking here and there , as they were already late due to traffic.After reaching the airport , shaan asked her to go inside while he will come after parking the car. She came inside with fast speed wondering whether flight has already been arrived or not, she tried multiple times to call jai but the constant message “the number you are trying is out of coverage area “irritates her more. she was standing in the airport looking for the schedule arrival time of the flight from the screen and there it shows that the flight has already been arrived, she again looked here and there but there is no sign of jai , shaan came by that time , he asked khanak to wait there and he moved away to look jai in different area and waiting room too. Khanak stood where she is looking here and there , then suddenly she heard the khwaish’s  laughing voice , she turned her neck to see khwaish, wondering what makes her to get  so elated ,she saw khwaish laughing widely and jumping with joy looking on the opposite side to her , khanak turned around to see what makes her naughty daughter to laugh crazily and there she saw jai coming towards them with a wide smile on his handsome face, khanak smiled too and went towards him , they both hugged each other

 jai took khwaish “ gudiya , pahchan gayi mama ko ? “

Khanak : aise kaise bhulegi who  apne mama ko , roj yaad karti hai woh sabko

Jai cuddled her in his embrace lovingly and kissed her on her cheeks and forehead. Khanak called  shaan  by that time to come back as jai is with them now . shaan came back where he has left khanak and khwaish  and hugged jai .

Shaan : What type of network you are in , it is showing the constant message that  the number you are calling is out of network area , since last one hour we are trying to call you

Jai : arrey , you know yaar , sometimes network problems do occur while in airplanes and airport too and also due to change in state , maybe there is a problem .

They came out of the airport and moved towards the parking area , Khwaish was in jai’s arms since she met him , khanak and shaan asked her to come to them but every time she turned away signifying that she don’t want to leave mama.

Jai laughed loudly and teased them “ aww, itna pareshaan karte hai mumma – papa , gudiya ko , jo ab woh  unke paas jana hi nayi chahati, …………..poor girl cant able to speak,  nayi toh tum logo ki shikayat batati mujhe , …………….don’t worry sweetie bas thode din aur phir aap bolne lagoge na toh phir batana mama ko agar mumma – papa jyada pareshan karein toh .“

Khwaish giggled more as if understood the tease of mama. Khanak whacked  jai lovingly and shaan laughed loudly .

 They reached their home and khanak showed him guest room, to change and get freshen up , and she moved towards kitchen for making dinner , she was heating the veggies in the microwave and placed the ‘tava’ for making chappati but then shaan came holding khwaish as she is crying due to hunger , khanak took her in her arms and placed  pan for  heating khwaish’s milk. Shaan asked her to take Khwaish in her room and changed her clothes, he will bring her milk by that time.

 khanak moved away towards her room and placed khwaish on the bed, she sat down there and undressed her , khwaish  moved away from khanak and went to lay down putting her head above her pillow,  as if feeling relaxed when that  heavy dress is taken off , khanak smiled lovingly, bend down  and caressed  khwaish’s hair , kissed her on her forehead , applied powder on her body and make her wear a thin cotton frock so that she will feel  easy and relaxed while sleeping .

Shaan came back holding khwaish’s bottle and gave it to khanak who was patting khwaish’s forehead to make her sleep. Khanak took it and placed khwaish on her lap to feed khwaish and shaan by that time changed his cloths too, wearing his Track pant and T-shirt , his favorite outfit of weekends . He moved towards his sweethearts and saw khwaish sleeping peacefully on her mumma’s lap and khanak has almost finished up feeding her and took her in her shoulders to pat her back . Shaan  told her that he is going to arrange cutlery’s on the dining table by the time, she nodded her head as if signifying that she is also coming behind him.

Shaan was arranging the mats and cutlery’s when he saw jai coming out of the room after freshening up and changing into his night wear too. Khanak came out of the kitchen taking two casseroles and placed them on the middle of the table and again went inside to bring chapattis plate.

Jai to shaan : gudiya so gayi kya ?

Shaan : ya, she got tired so she slept early today

Khanak came out of the kitchen bringing chapattis and then she started serving the dishes she made especially for her dear bro. Jai became happy to see that everything is his favorite items – Mutter pannier , bharwa bhindi, Dal fry , pulao, raita , and stuffed chapattis .

Jai : Wow Khanak!  , everything is my favourite

Shaan : she is preparing since morning all your favourite dishes

Khanak : You have to eat everything , even if it doesn’t taste good  :P

Jai : Oh no! This is not fair, now I think I m not hungry anymore. Its looking nice but didn’t have the courage to taste it .

Khanak (whacked his arm): how rude? You don’t have any option other than to eat .Or I will complain to ma , than you see .

Shaan laughed loudly at the convo of the duo

Shaan : Dude, don’t tease my wife , she is a great cook

Khanak looked at him with a wide smile and raised her collar feeling proud that hubby is taking her side. They have their dinner with lots of chatting and teasing each other , and after dinner shaan and jai went to sit at the sofa while khanak went inside kitchen to place the leftover food inside the fridge and then came back with three bowls containing Ice-Cream.
Jai : Aww, I m missing cutie – pie here , last time when we were in delhi we both have done the blast while eating  Ice-cream and ma’s face was worth seeing

Khanak : Haan, you cant able to digest na without doing masti with her, i would have thrown you both out into the balcony if you both  have even tried to do that fiasco today.

Jai and shaan laughed loudly seeing her disgusted face.

Shaan : Why ? What  you both have done to trouble ma ?

Jai: One day, Ma and khanak went to the near market for taking some groceries leaving khwaish with me , but they got late and she started whining by that time , so I went inside kitchen to see what can be done to stop her and there I saw an ice-cream box, I take it out and placed it in a bowl to feed her but she insisted me to give it to her , I gave it to her and she immediately tilted the bowl and all the ice-cream was then on the sofa cover , not only this , see immediately spread it more and with those hand she touched the side table , cushions , and the floor mat too . I was enjoying looking her playing with the ice-cream and beaming with joy, so I didn’t stopped her and kept looking at her acts but then ma came and saw the mess. The look on her face after seeing the sofa and the covers was just like she almost has an  attack. And then she took an half an hour class of mine. I have to listen her scolding of my side as well as on her behalf too.  She can’t tell or scold Khwaish, so I had got from her behalf too.And as if ma alone was not enough that your wife too started scolding me instit of her daughter.

Everyone laughed loudly hearing the antiques of the little girl and her naughty acts while having  their Ice-cream.

Khanak : Why should i scold my innocent baby, its all your fault , why you have given the bowl in her hands

Shaan : no wonder buddy , you have made her more naughty

Jai : Haww, what I have done , she is already very naughty, I should say , she made me naughty and both of you are accusing me for everything

They laughed again and then after having little more talk they moved towards their respective room .



8 comments:

  1. Awesomes Yaar ,..........LOved it

    Firstly Siggie Is fantabulous :)) Deeps tu aisey aisey Siggie banayegi toh mera dyan hatega hi nahi waha se padhungi kab ?? U Rock Bacchu ♥♥♥

    Suchi Superb Update lekin Kitna chotu part tha :(( & Khwaish ko kyun sula diya itni jaldi :(( Humph I hate you for that. But Update was awesome ♥

    Ohh Shanak reached late at airport :( & Both started looking out for Jay. BUT aakhir Gudiyaan ne apne Mama ko Dhund hi liya, WOW i just loved the way u have discribed her expression & she being so enthusiastic with the look from jay. LOved the Bond shared by too ♥ I so love it. yaar iskio har ek antics & expressions mujhe Vrish ki yaad dilate hain :)) beautifully written :))

    LOved the detailing done by you khanak's efficient moves while working in the kitchen was discribed beautifully. Shaan is soooo cute he was with Khwaish but handed her to mumma when he felt she is hungry, I loved the way U discribed Khwaish's moves when khanak removed heavy dress ,.,,,,,It was liek Bang on :)) LOl vrish used to do the same as if usko itna time bandh ke rakha tha & ab khola hain :P

    WOW shaan placed all the cattery on the dinning table such a supportive hubby :) Dining table masti of Trio was awesome......LOL loved the way Jay teased khanak & shaan protected her :))

    Icecream wala bawaal was super duper awesome :) I feel for Ma its so difficult to clean everything & this Mama bhatijee was having fun :P But i loved the way u discribed it i actually imagined it & frankly had same expression like Ma on my face :((

    Shanak & jay masti made this update beautiful :) But gundi ko sulaya kyun itni jaldi :( next update mein aur mazaa aayega as its Rakhi special :)

    Waiting for the next part :)))

    Jaldi jaldi likh amma warna mere funeral se pahle i'll kill you :)))

    Huggssss ♥

    LOve you

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  2. thank you so much pranjal for the reply

    lol, cutie - pie ko jaldi sula diya taki next day ke liye usme energy rahe dhamaal karne ke liye :P

    Lol, i am very poor at describing the things but still you wrote that you like it , it gives and encourage me a lot

    Lol, ya poor ma had a tough time to clear everything and evertime she cleans and scolds jai for making it dirty.

    thank you so much for jhelofying this story

    Huggss

    Love you

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  3. Finally Jai arrived and Khwaish was the first one who found him :))....she is no doubt a real smart cutie pie :) <3....loved how she reacted after spotting Jai at the airport....it seemed so natural.

    Mama-niece bondings were described so nicely....poor Khwaish baby had to fall asleep early.koi baat nahin she is going to catch up with her mama when she wakes up in the morning :))

    Loved the way Khanak described about the ice-cream thing and how baby messed up everything, ma scolded her....so sweet :))

    Wonderful part Suchi :))..loved it to the bits <3

    Thanks Deep for making such an awesome siggie <3 <3

    Saw that part 20 already has been posted.....I am like always late Lateef or Lateefa :D

    Love,

    Cherry

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    1. thank you di for your wonderful comments and saying that you like it :P

      Plssss, kuch bura bhi toh bola karo, i want to here negative views too

      lol, ya everyone has problem with khwaish's early sleep that is why i compensated it in next update
      she slept early as she had to do lots of masti next day

      @ ice-cream part - jai described it to everyone and ma and khanak both scolded poor Jai for the Mess Up , that why he gave the bowl to her ........hahahaha

      Hugggsss

      Love You

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  4. Ufff....so much to catch up :(((

    Suchi, can I have the liberty of posting comments to last 2 parts of Khwaish after I update ?? Please ??

    will come back tonight or tomorrow morning !

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    1. Lol......ya di you have any liberty to do
      Take ur time :))

      Wow! U r updating today ?
      Waitingggggg

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  5. So, am here at the earliest !!

    There was no internet since morning and I was waiting for it to come so that I can read and comment.

    The Update was very very sweet and adorable.....
    Everything Khwaish does is not only cute but so real and so amazing !!

    So Jai has already arrived and Shanak became slightly late. But the best part is that Khwaish recognised Jai and once she goes to him, she doesn't come to poor ma and pa......lol......very cute !!
    Her beaming with joy was well written.

    Detailing about what all they did after coming home.....Especially the food menu......Uffff......aaj Janamashtami ka fast hai and I was reading the mouthwatering menu and thinking - WOW !!!

    The teasings and descriptions after the cutie pie left were cute and explain more about the bond between Khanak- Jai and Shaan

    Overall, very nicely written.....loved it !!

    Off to read next part :))

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    1. thanks di for dropping up here and commenting :))

      lol , i wrote all my favorite dishes in the menu :P

      ya khwaish recognized jai early as she was facing opposite side of khanak and there she saw jai and beamed with joy seeing her partner in crime ;)

      glad that you all find khwaish's act cute and real , it motivates me too that i m just not over imagining her :)

      Love you

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