Sunday, November 18, 2012

Khwaish Part 23



 
 



khanak pulled her cheeks "bamaash baby "................

Khwaish keep on gigling....shaan looked at her with a satisfied smile and all his tensions, worry, tiredness went out of the window of their room , just seeing the smile of two sweethearts of his life , which makes his life worth living and easy, to go through any hurdles , if any comes in his way .

he was just staring at khwaish and his innocence , when suddendly he felt a tug on his hand , when khwaish pulled his hands , towards herself for drinking coffee from his mug . shaan smriked and then nodded his head saying ....."no.........its so hot sweetie " and then she too nodded her head copying him " nayi ??? ..........." , shaan again nodded his head " no ............ , 'tatta hai ' ..........", khwaish curved her lips too in a oval shape saying : "oohhh...... "

shaan then laughed loudly seeing her , khanak too was busy in admiring and adoring the beautiful relationship between both and the tears started making their way from her lashes which she wiped away before making it evident . she moved towards the kitchen leaving the duo in their own world , and started preparing dinner.

Shaan and khwaish was busy in their daily rituals while having their evening coffee . Khwaish then just kept quite and was just seeing her father drinking coffee, she didnt asked then and just kept staring him, when it was about to end and has become cold enough for her , then shaan placed the mug in front of khwaish asking her to have a sip , she giggled happily and then hurriedly grab the mug and started drinking holding mug from both of her little hands .

after finishing their coffee...........shaan placed her on their bed and opened his laapy to send an official email to one of his client , as he received message from his boss to do it urgently. khwaish moved twards her toys placed on bed and leaned on her pillow , layed down on her side of bed and dragged her small and cute teddy bear above her playing with it , hugging it , licking it and bitting it .

shaan was still engroseed in his work , too busy to notice what she is doing, as he had to do important changes on the figure as asked by his employer . after few minutes when she got boared , she sat back , looked at her father , ..................busy she thought ,............... she knows or they have taught her that whenever they are sitting on lappy then she dont have to disturb them, and now when she starts learning things , she knows that she cant disturb him , she silently slid down from bed , as bed was low height from floor , so its easy for her to climb or slid from it . and then she silently crawled towards the kitchen , without saying any word and silently sat down at the middle of the door , looking hear and there.

at one side of the kitchen there was a bucket filled with water and on the other side there was a cloth placed on the floor where khanak had spread the wet rice to make it dry, she wants to make ' chakali' so she had washed the rice and then placed it on a dry cloth for drying it .

khwaish looked towards the cloth and then crawled with hurried steps towards it and innocently hold one side of cloth and then pulled it towards herself and in a way all the rice got spread on floor and some on her knees . she chirped happily as if she had done a huge task and started spreading the rice on the floor hear and there with her hands, making happy and chirpy sound .........

Khanak looked back hearing her voice, as she was busy in making chappati and also she didnt heared khwaish's voice when she came inside the kitchen , so she didnt know that she is there in the kitchen , and had already done such a mess. Khanak become angry seeing her one hour effort of washing the rice had gone down the drain and is now spread on the floor ........

she shouted at the most angriest and loudest voice " Khwaishhhhhhhhhhhhhhh................."

Khwaish got startled hearing the sound and then she looked towards khanak and then started crying loudly as if get scared hearing the sudden loud voice , khanak realised her mistake that she had scared her little doll , she immidiatly ran towards her , picked her up from the floor and hugged her tightly , consoling her , apologising her , but all in vain , she felt bad at her own behaviour , though she knows that it was khwaish's fault but she cant hold her guilty as she is just so small , and dont know what to do and what not to do , what is right and wrong .......... all this she was consoling herself , as she was feeling guilty for making her chirpy daughter cry and tears again started forming in her eyes too............

 

shaan came inside the kitchen hearing his little daughters voice , she was just not buzzing and keeps on crying , khanak looked towards shaan apologizing , shaan nodded hopelessly seeing her crying too along with khwaish , he holds khwaish in his arms and started consoling her :

Shaan : gosh ! to whom i should console first ?? ............My elder baby ( Looking at khwaish ) or to my younger baby ( looking at khanak ) ??

Khanak took seconds to understand his words and then she wacked his arm , giving him her patent phrase ' jerk ' ,....................... hugged him tightly placing her head on one side of his chest as other was booked by the little one . khwaish who had stopped crying by now saw towards khanak and leaned towards her throwing her both arms , khanak took her immedialty , wiped her cheeks and eyes lovingly and kissed her all over , with a continuos chanting ............" mumma is so sorry , beta... " , khwaish then hugged her tightly too .

shaan : aww! this is so unfair .............papa daate toh bhi mumma ke paas , aur mumma daate toh bhi mumma ke hi paas jana hai , kyun ?

Khanak smiled widely : yes , this is the relationship of a mother and child ..................

Shaan didnt have words except admiring ................'Touchwood' .

 

4 comments:

  1. Awesome suchi ♥♥♥♥♥
    i loved it ♥♥♥♥♥
    pehle coffee wala part so sweet yaar u penned awesomely shaan said no coffee is hot and cutie pie said nahi!!!!!!! i loved it yaar mwaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!
    khwaish koh meri nazar na lage
    khwaish omgee she kept quite not to disturb shaan while he was doing is wrk kitni samaj daar hai yeah choti si guddia
    she understood well not to disturb his dad
    but yeah kya he crawl to the kitchen and wat she did
    spread water on her mom's hard work naughty girl
    khanak washed rice she she spread all over on the floor rofl!!!!!!!!!!! too good
    she giggled n felt happy like she did a big task and passed in it awe!!! Khwaish kih mommy deh shout kiya aur woh darke mare cutie pie ronelagi
    khanak then felt sorry for her little angel
    both cried aur papa ki entry lajawab thi and consoled his choti angel n bari angel
    awesome suchi i loved it to the core
    awe papa ka kaam khatam aur Khwaish want her mommy heheh
    loved shaan complain
    jaab woh dateh to woh mommy keh paas jana chahti ha aur mommy dateh toh bhi mommy chahiye
    truly said khanak yeh mother daughter relation hai
    your updates make me grin and greedy for more each and wish to read many times as i could aur parte parte kaab the end hojata hai patta hi nahi chalta and want more to read
    update soon Suchi :)

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  2. Heyy suchii.. jst few days baq got to knw abt ur blog god Icant tell u hw much Iloved it...
    Khwaish is sooo adorable...Ialways wnted to see dis track in rbo!!!
    Awee loved d way dey take care of dieir daughter....
    Superlike yaar...
    Update nxt soon..

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  3. @ heer - thank u so much for d lovely reply

    loved ur comment

    ya khwaish is a smart girl
    and learns thing fast , they taught her to not disturb them when they are on phone or on lappy, so she knows that and does accordingly, lol

    shaan was complaining as his little one goes to mumma everytime whenever she cries even when he scold her then also , hehehehe



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  4. @ snigdha -

    hey

    thanks for reading and liking it

    m so glad that u want this track in rbo ,
    so atleast through khwaish ur wish fulfilled

    hope u like it in future too

    enjoy and do tell me where to improve

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