Friday, December 28, 2012

Khwaish Part 27

( a beautiful and cute siggy from heer for khwaish ,.............. thanks heer for it ...............hugggssss)






It was a beautiful Sunday morning, sun had just risen and as it was the month of October, the cold breeze was flowing. Three  souls are sleeping peacefully and cozily under the quilt, sun rays peeped through the curtains and reached their eyes ,the chirping sound of birds disturbed the little soul and she woke up , stretched herself , and sit on bed looking on her either side and lazily moved and leaned on her papa’s tummy , again closing her sleepy eyes . ……….. after  laying there for few minutes, she again raise up and then looked towards the window where it’s started lighting up due to morning rays, she crawled upwards and sit beside her papa’s face and started patting his arm to wake him up , but shaan was not in a mood to get up so early in the morning , he looked at her through his droopy eyes , raised his one hand and hold her waist to drag her towards him and then took her above him , laid her down above his tummy and started patting her head in order to make her sleep too

Shaan : so ja na mera gudda , itni jaldi thodi uthte hai koi

Khwaish laid there for few minutes looking here and there still in her father’s tight grip and trying to search ’ what to do next ?’ and then again looked upwards , tried to get freed from his hold and then fall down on bed  while wriggling out from his grip on her ………. she again sit back and now started chanting “ papa ………….. pa pa …………. “

Shaan opened his eyes and raised his eyebrows as if to ask ‘what??’

Khwaish looked at him with a sweet smile and clapped her hands to show her ecstatic and then raised her one hand towards window as if asking him to take her there but shaan didn’t understand it and again took her above him and squeezed her tightly in his embrace , kissing her hairs

Shaan : kahan jana hai ?

Khwaish then freed herself from him and sit above him and again raised her hands towards window “ chiya …………..chiya “ ………………. khwaish heard the chirping sounds of the birds and that is why wants to go towards the window and see them , shaan understood her saying birds as ‘chiya’ and then smiled

Shaan : ‘chiya’ dekhna hai meri gudiya ko ?

Khwaish smiled happily and jumped up there as if understood that now papa will take her to show the birds , shaan hold her and sit on bed , kissed her cheeks lovingly and asked her to say first “ jai shree Krishna “ , khwaish lovingly joined her both hands and with her cute voice says meekly  ‘jai’ . shaan smiled again return back her greeting by giving a peck on her cheeks “ jai “.

Khanak was sleeping peacefully on her side least affected by the voice , as she has got habituated with it , but still shaan takes care to make less sound to not disturb her .  khwaish then moved from his lap………..  crawled on bed and tried to slid down , shaan was looking at her confused as if what she is doing but she slid down from bed and moved towards her toys , picked up her bunny and again crawled back taking it in one hand , shaan smiled seeing her action . she hold the bunny in her one hand and again starts crawling and came towards the bed , when she reached , she sat back there and hold the bunny and gave it to shaan to hold it , shaan hold the  bunny and gave her the questioning look as if asking ………‘ what to do with it ? ‘ 

she hold the edge of the bed…….. Stood up, tried to climb back into the bed and get succeeded at last. she moves toward shaan and sat on his lap again, hold the bunny and then again looked towards him with a sweet smile “ chiya ………chiya  “ . shaan was confused seeing her action but it amused him to no end to understand his little sweetheart’s action

Shaan : isko( bunny) kyun leke aayi ? isko bhi chiya dekhna hai kya ?

Khwaish looked at him with wide smile as if telling that ‘yes’ her bunny too would like to see birds along with her and that is why she picked it up and does the whole circus .

Shaan chuckled seeing her smile and kissed her lovingly on her cheeks again squeezing her little , and then took her towards washroom for freshening her up first and then came out and make her stand on the sofa which was placed just beside the window , she immediately stood up holding his hands and tried to move with her little feet towards the head rest to hold it for support , she stood there holding the head rest and shaan kept her bunny on the little space below the window. She jumped up with joy seeing the birds flew in the sky , some of them came and sit on the electric wires  just outside their window , but hearing her loud sound they flew away immediately , she then make sad face and looked back at shaan , he smiled seeing her  disappointment…..

Shaan : gayi ?? chiya gayi  ?

Khwaish then nodes agreeing “ dayi ……….. chiya ……… dayi “ ( she use to call ‘gayi’ as’ dayi’ )

Shaan too sat beside her where she was standing and saw her happiness seeing the outside view early in the morning , he too glanced outside and saw the beauty of the city at early hours of morning , their building was at 2nd floor , he can see some children  are playing in the park opposite to their building ,  few people are  jogging and oldies doing yoga sitting on the grass of the garden , ………he  got reminded of days when he too use to go for jogging , but after khwaish’s birth it reduced as he had to take care of her in morning . As khanak took care of her whole night by changing her nappies, or feeding or when she didn’t sleep then to play with her during odd hours  at night , so he take care of  khwaish during morning so that khanak can sleep peacefully during morning ours and that is why it becomes her habbit , she wake up shaan insist of khanak at morning .

He thought to go on a walk today and to take her too. shaan left her there and moved towards the cupboard , changed his track pant and came holding khwaish’s jacket , socks and hat , so that she didn’t get cold from the cold breeze flowing outside.

He hold her hand and make her sit on the sofa , she looked at him with confused expression as if trying to know what her papa is doing , shaan make wear socks and jacket and hat , she immediately pulled out her hat and throw it on floor , shaan looked at her with confused expression “ what ? “

He again tried to make her wear it , she pulled out again and throws it again , shaan then again picked it up from floor

Shaan : kya kar rahi hai gudiya , kyun nayi pahena ?  yeh acchi nayi hai ? dusri pahnao ?

Khwaish nodded her head with ‘no ‘ and then again looked towards windows and asked “ chiya ………. Chiya “

Shaan : haan apan chiya dekhne hi ja rahe hai , par pahle aap yeh hat jaldi se pahno phir apan chiya dekhne jayenge , neeche garden mein , hai na ?

Shaan again put it on her head but she again pulled it out saying “ nayi ……….”

Shaan then looked at her with stern expression.

Shaan : ab agar aapne nikala toh pitti padegi , jaldi se hat pahno , papa aapko garden leke ja rahe hai na , nayi jana kya ?

Khwaish looked at him innocently and then didn’t take it out again. shaan smiled at her and then gave her a quick peck on her cheeks “ Good girl “

Shaan wrote a note on a paper for khanak and placed it above khwaish’s pillow to let her know that they are going for a walk. And also kept her doll above it, so that paper doesn’t get flew away. Then both father and daughter headed towards the door , khwaish gets ecstatic as she is going out with papa so early in the morning and she chirped happily in anticipation when shaan make her wore her little sandals too .

Shaan : gudiya , aaj papa ke saath walking pe jayegi na ?

Khwaish looked towards him showing her little teeth conveying her happiness and seeing her smile , shaan to got happy and again kissed her cheeks  “ choti si gudiya , papa ki “

To be continued …………………..khwaish at park with her papa :)


6 comments:

  1. superb update suchi.....
    khwaish kya baccha tumne papa ko subeh subhe utha diya?? woh bhi sunday ko?? aur mumma so sone de rahi ho??? :P

    loved how khwasih made shaan get up and hold on to him...aur shaan ulta sulane ki kosish kar raha tha... hehehehehe....
    khwasih toh puri preperation ke sath uthi thi... ab toh papa ko utha ke he saas lunge....:P

    i loved the "chiya" part... khwaish kaise kaise words bolt hai.. its soso soso adorable...... :)

    lolzz!! i loved and got a smile on my face reading "dayi ……….. chiya ……… dayi"... so cute Suchi....

    isko toh mai pakka kidnap karke le aunge ab....
    shaan got her ready.. lekin hat nahi phenne.. i guess sab baccho ko hat pasand nahi ati... nikal ke phek he dete hai... :)
    shaan ke dant ne se chup chap phehen le cap....
    samjhdar hai cutie.. :)


    am waiting to read ab kya dhamaal karne wali hai papa aur baby garden mai.. :)

    update soon..

    love
    Deepali

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    1. lol, deeps tera comment bahut cute hai , mein kitni baar read kiya :)

      yup, she use to tell adorable words ......... aaj dekha do aur add huye isme 'chiya ' and 'dayi' .........hehehehe

      yup sab bachon ko cap pasand nayi pahena aur socks bhi nayi jal;di se pahente koi koi bacche

      yup next update khwaish at park

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  2. Wow!!!Suchi what a beautiful morning u have penned which started by khwaish i loved it to the core brilliant sweety
    i don't know where to start and what to write m speechless
    cutie pie antics in the morning are so cute yaar :D
    she woke early and tried her best to woke her papa heheh! and shaan every time tries to make her sleep but naughty khwaish was on full mood to play and enjoy beautiful morning with sun rise heheheh!! shaan pat her to sleep lolzzz!! utho shaan khwaish want to see beautiful morning lolzzz!!
    how sweety suchi this morning make me grinning i loved the way u penned how khwaish looked at the window and said chiya...chiya..... awwwee!!! i want to see chiysa too with khwaish suchi lolzzz!!
    shaan didn get her first but then she understood her daughter's act how sweety was that :)
    shaan taught her to say jai shree Krishna and khwaish said Jai aww!! so sweet and cute khwaish step down from bed to take her buny lozz!!
    khwiash apni bunny ko kese bhul sakti hai use bhi toh chiya dekhni hai hahahahah!!
    shaan took her to see birds but chiya flew hearing khwaish ecstatic voice aww!!! she became sad and shaan smiled at naughty baby
    how sweet of shaan to let khanak sleep coz she takes care of khwaish the whole night now in the morning he takes khwaish charge heheh!!! wow!! shaan thought to go at park with Khwaish
    he make her wear socks, jacket and hat coz of the cold breeze but our naughty khwaish doesn't want to wear hat heheh!! she remove every time shaan make her wear lolzz!!!really khwaish is very naughty and many babies don't like to wear hat don't know y lolzz!! my niece too she doesn't like to wear hat heheheh!!
    shaan gave her a stern look and poor khwaish then wore her hat lolzz!!
    khwaish and her papa going to the park and left note for khanak heheheh!!!
    khanak is sleeping peaceful and papa aur gudiya going for a walk
    now i m off to read next part heheheheh!! :D

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    1. hugggssss heer for the lovely respnce :)

      i am grinning reading your comment
      thanks for reading and liking it

      yup babies dont like to wear hat, dont know why but i think because they feel tied up as their ear get tied so may be they dont like to wear hat

      lol, ya she wored it when she saw shaan's look because though he loves her a lot but at the same time she is having his fear that papa will scold her , if she does more nautanki , lol

      hope you like further too


      love

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  3. Super Duper cute part Dear :))

    Loved reading it

    Sunday Morning papa usually papa's ke liye badi lazy lazy hoti hain lekin yaha toh poor shaan ekdum subeh subeh utha diya uski gudiya ne use :P but her way of awaking papa was super cute. loved the moment spend by two :) she wantyed papa to get up & papa wanted his sweetioe pie to sleep along taki woh jyada time so sake :P :P
    that was really cute & superbly written by you ♥ ♥ ♥

    She wanted to get up & also wanted papa to join her :) tht was indeed very sweet & finally she pointed towards window & chirping bords :)) Chiyya was ubber cute sach mein :) loved that truely shaan underestanding her refrance & taking her in his arms & showing her birds wow reminds me abt Vrish :) hamare ghar mein bahot kabutar aate hain & when vrish was small he used to say "kabu" to go in a balcony :)) Awesome dear

    Shaan wanted to take her with him down was best :) Sach mein babies bahot natak karte hain for wearing socks & caps ...even they dont like if we put comfertor on them after they sleep. neend mein bhi irritate hoke hata dete hain :) LOved the part simple glare for shaan & khwaish wore itr superb :))))

    Super part ........off to read next one

    Love you ♥

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