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Shaan hold her in his arms and take the stairs to get down, khwaish’s
ecstatic has no bound and she was happily chirping and clapping her hands
showing her happiness, shaan too smiled seeing her happiness and gave a sweet
and loving kiss on her cheeks “ gudiya, itni khush ho rahi hai “ , khwaish
leaned on him and curled her arms around his neck, as if to give a bear hug to papa for taking
her out for a walk for the first time .when she was in Delhi jai or her nanaji
used to take her daily for a walk which she loved it and also gets happy to see
the birds and animals around.
They reached down and moved towards the garden, their comes
one old man, who saw khwaish and immediately called out her and came towards
them ………….
Old man : khwaishhhhh………
Khwaish looked here and there to see from where voice is coming,
there she saw him and smiled, old man came near her and pulled out her cheeks
lovingly.
Old man : aaj subah subah kaise aayi gudiya, park mein ja
rahi hai ?
Khwaish just smiled seeing him , Shaan was looking at them
with confused expression as he don’t know the person but his naughty daughter
seems to be knowing him. Old man saw shaan and then smiled, shaan too smiled back
seeing him.
Old man: hello! ahh…….. Her father?
Shaan : hello , ya she is my daughter J
Old man: ohh…. actually, she use to come daily in the park
with khanak , and that is why I know her but I am seeing you for the first time
.
Shaan : ya , I use to
be in office at evening time , so cant able to come here , but today I thought
to take her out and also do walking
along with her .
Old man : great thought, ……………she is such a sweet girl
,hamara toh din hi pura nayi hota ek din bhi agar yeh nayi aati toh , iseliye
hamne khanak beta ko bhi bolke rakha hai ki khwaishh ko roj laya kare woh park ,
nayi toh hum uske ghar aa jayenge ……………….. Oh by the way hum matlab mein aur
meri wife, who sham ko aati hai mere saath
aur mein subah sham dono time aata hoon walk pe , but who subah soti
rahti hai , iseliye mein akela aata hunn subah ke time .
Shaan smiled and asked khwaish to say ‘ jai ‘ to the old man
, which she did it lovingly and cutely
Shaan : aap isse society mein rahte hai ? ( shaan don’t attend
much society gattering or functions , so he don’t know many people there )
Old man: haan , mein yahin rahta hunn, mein retired judge
hunn aur, bas mein aur meri wife hi rahte hai yahan , mere
bacche foreign mein rahte hai ………but
aapse kabhi mulakat hi nayi huyi
Shaan: ya, i get busy
in the office whole day and after coming home, I don’t like to go outside
unless its important or urgent and during weekends we use go outside or to our
home or just spend time at home
Khwaish who was listening to the convo very keenly started
getting bored and then pat shaan’s shoulder “ Pa….Pa “
Shaan and old man both saw her and smiled understanding that
she is getting bored
Old man : aww……… gudiya ko bore ho raha hai ab , hai na ? …………….Ok
gentleman, nice to meet you , have a great day …………..Bye khwaish
Khwaish waved her hands saying ‘bye’ and then they dispersed
from there to move towards the park, as it was just opposite of their building,
but its gate is from other side of the lane, so they have to take long round to
enter into park.
After finishing off
with her shopping of regular needs item , vegetables and fruits……….Khanak use
to take khwaish almost every day to the park, khwaish use to enjoy a lot in the
garden and seeing her cuteness , many people who are regular too gets attracted
towards her and played along with her . she don’t come during weekends and people
who come during weekends , miss khwaish during weekends too and they asks khanak to bring her on weekends too but khanak
being helpless denies it.
Shaan moves further towards park and in between his way he saw
many such people whom even he don’t know but they know her little daughter and
almost everyone was calling her to greet her and some comes near to pull her
cheeks and she too greet them with a big smile, waves hand and saying ‘ jai’ ,
shaan was amused to see it and kissed her cheeks lovingly with a wide smile
Shaan : arrey waah !
papa ko toh pata hi nayi tha I meri gudiya ke itne saare friends hai
Khwaish smiled widely and again hugged him curling her arms
around her. As soon as they reached near the park’s gate, he saw Mrs. Chawala
going along with her black dog. He got reminded of last time fiasco and he chuckled.
Mrs. Chawala came near them and saw shaan , she stopped there and came towards
him with a big and seducing smile on her face which shaan noticed now after
knowing her intentions from khanak , she came near them but at the same time
saw khwaish in his hand , she cursed her luck and now gave a disgusted look instate
of seducing smile, amusing shaan to no
end . he asked khwaish to look back who is there, khwaish looked towards Mrs. Chawala
with no expression , Mrs. Chawala came near shaan with no interest now as she
knows if she goes near , then khwaish would do something or other with her to
make it embarrassing for her in front of shaan . She greets shaan and khwaish
Mrs. Chawala : Hello khwaish
Khwaish didn’t respond and shaan was having hidden smile
throughout seeing khwaish’s reaction towards Mrs. Chawala , but to get
entertain further ….
Shaan : khwaish anty ko hello karo , ……….. shake your hand
Khwaish looked at shaan with a questioning look as if didn’t
understand what he says, mrs. Chwala extended her hand further daringly
thinking that she won’t do anything in front of shaan , thinking that she gets
scared from Mr. Khandelwal , …………..khwaish
looked at Mrs. Chawala’s extended hand and thought that she is trying to take
her in her arm like always as she did forcefully,………….. khwaish immediately jerked
her hand saying “ buppppp ………….”,. ………………..shaan
was looking dumstruck at her response towards Mrs. Chawal , with a hidden
chuckle which he didn’t tried to make it
evident on his face . Mrs. Chawala cursed herself for extending her hand
towards her and immediately excused herself from there
Mrs. Chawal : See you later Mr. Khandelwal , I m getting
late .
Shaan just smiled and then she moved away along with her dog.
Shaan laughed loudly after she went away and kissed khwaish cheeks lovingly
Shaan : gosh ! kitna gunda bacha hai mera , mumma ne itni
saari badmaashi sikhayi hai meri choti si gudiya ko , hmm ?
Khwaish looked towards him with a sweet smile too and extend
her hands towards the park gate as if asking him to move further now and enter
inside, which shaan did .
After entering inside she gets ecstatic to see the children
playing with boll , some people jogging , and oldies doing yoga and some in a
laughter club , laughing out loudly , she too beamed with joy and started
laughing , shaan was amused to see her response,…………… she then extend her hand further
as if asking him to take her towards that direction , he did it and then when
they reached near the spot where she was asking , …………..shaan asked her “ kya hai yahan ? “ ………….. khwaish then tried
to wriggled out from his hold and shaan make her stand on her foot and hold her hands to give her support for walking
and was moving on the direction where she was taking him with her baby steps .
they reached near the small place beside
the huge tree which is made up of wood and in front of it having the wooden
bars , khwaish stopped and sat there, bend down as if trying to peep inside the
wooden bars ,………. it was a dog house
where a small white paumalian puppy is living, whom khwaish knows since long as she was a regular visitor
of that place
Khwaish gets ecstatic to see the little dog inside who was
sleeping till now but seeing khwaish he got up and started moving here and
there with joy too, khwaish then moved further towards the house but shaan hold
her immediately fearing if dog may do some harm to her and immediately took her
in his arm, Khwaish again tried to get down from his hold but failed as he
tighten his grip and asked her to not do it
Khwaish then extend her hand and bend down as if wanted to touch it , seeing her stubbornness ,
shaan kneeled down too holding khwaish in his hand and came near the puppy
house
Shaan : Khwaish janti hai isse ? Kaun hai yeh ?
Khwaish : Huhh ??
Shaan : yeh doggy hai ? Khwaish ka friend hai yeh ??
Khwaish(pointing her little hand towards puppy) : Babu ………..
Khwaish used to tell
it (puppy) as ‘ Babu’ ……….obviously khanak taught her , though its name was ‘
honey’ but as Khwaish cant able to spell it , she called it as ‘babu’
Puppy seeing khwaish take out one leg out of bar as if trying to shake hand
with her , khwaish immediately moved further to touch it too leaving shaan
amazed at her reaction , and he understood that among others , even this small
animal too is her friend , and he smiled lovingly and gave a sweet peck on her
cheeks …………….“ bamaash gudiya “
They played there for a while with puppy, who was moving
here and there, trying to get out of its
house and khwaish gets happy seeing it moving and shaan too was happy seeing
her smile.
Shaan does three round of the park holding khwaish in his
arm and then he make khwaish walk too holding his fingers and she tried too
walking little and then hugged him immediately when she fears that she is about
to fall but shaan didn’t let her fall even once and even if she moves a step further
he encourage her to move further but
after sometime she gets tired and leaned
on him lazily. He understood that she got tired now and also she didn’t have
her morning milk till now so they returned back towards home .

Awesome suchi aabh mein kya bolo heheheh!! hats off u yaar u penned all updates very beautiful
ReplyDeletei loved it to the core mwaaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!
so now papa and daughter are going to the park heheheheh!!!wow!!! khwaish is very happy and shaan kissed her daughter aww!!!meri taraf se bhi shaan kiss her lovingly on her two chubby cheeks heheheh!!!
khwaish is famous yaar lolzz!!! shaan just stared at the old man who knows khwaish and cutie pie smiled at the old man
shaan confused mat ho tum pura din office meh rehteho isiliye tumeh nahi pata keh khwaish ke kitne sare friends hai heheheh!! tum sirf dekhte jao aur phir sare milenge on ur way lolzzz!!
loved little conv betwwen shaan and the old man awesome :D
lovely penned how khanak go to shop and then took khwaish to the park every evening but skip weekends and people at the park missed khwaish
so much
shaan chuckled seen Mrs Chawla lolzzz!! he remembered what happened at his home and what khanak told him lolzzz!!!
aabh ayega mazza Mrs Chawla cursed her self to meet shaan coz khwaish is with him lolzzz
shaan hide her smile seeing Mrs chawla's facialy expression after seen khwaish hahahah!!!
shaan said to say hello and Mrs chawla extent her hand for a hand shake lekin khwaish neh bhau nahi diya Rofl!!!!! omgeeee!!!! Mrs Chawla kah bachka hogaya shaan keh samne lolzzz!!!!
Mrs chawla bhagyai heheh!! khwaish keh darse lolzzz!! love u khwaish
i love shaan's dialogue " kitna gunda bacha hai mera , mumma ne itni saari badmaashi sikhayi hai meri choti si gudiya ko " how sweet kash khanak bhi waha hoti suchi next time trio at the park and mrs Chawla too lolzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!
love the description of park when they enter khwaish beem with joy how sweet shaan was just amused his daughter's response i love this part :)
how cutely khwaish pointed to the direction she wanted to go where she and her mamma roamed, khwaish want to step down from shaan's hold and shaan make her walk holding her hand
khwaish koh ekk puppy dekhna hai how sweet she bent and peeped inside the kennel :D
shaan fearing the dog might bite her cutie pie
shaan tum nahi jante woh puppy khwaish kah dost hai lolzzzzz!!!!!!!!!! the puppy too became happy to see khwaish hehehe!! shaan tum bass dekhteh jao khwaish keh antics and meet her sweety friends heheheh!!
what a cutey name khwaish gave to puppy "babu" hayeee!!!! i love it :D
awwww!! puppy tried to shake hand with khwaish with it's one leg awesome yaar suchi beautiful penned each and every antics of khwaish
i loved it to the core
aww!! khwaish thaak gai walk karte karte aur phir morning milk bhi nahi piya aur papa keh saath park agai morning kah anand uthane
Awesome suchi :D
i m waiting for next update and want to see how khanak will react when she woke up and see where is her hubby and cutie pie heheheeh!!!
thank you thank you thank you ..........heer i am reading your reply again and again
ReplyDeletehuggsss for reading it and making my day by giving back your analysis on each and every line ...........gosh ! unbelievable , i was like , was it rally that much worth ? lol,
seriously after getting such responce, i got charged up to write more and more :P
thank you so much again for your beautiful comment and loving khwaish and her antiques
next time will make trio for outing and then there will land Mrs. chawala and how she will run away again seeing khwaish , hehehehe
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love
waah kya din hain 4 updates ek saath ...aish chal rahi hain .....Suchi madam on roll :)) Loving this
ReplyDeleteThank you Suchi ........huggss for awesome updates ♥
this is a true story. ajkal parents ko nahi pahchante society mein bacchon ko jyada log pahchante hain because of their cuteness & engry & masti ♥ Vrishu ke mamle mein aisa hi hain ...bhaiya toh jab neche paek mein ya cycle leke jata hain vrish ke saath everyone asks Vrish abt him & hje says he is my Spon ...& i tease bhiay "kya naseeb hain tujhe abhi se apse jante hain dont ever scold him be good to him masti kare toh kare he is more famous then you :P proud of my baby" bhaiya & others simply laughs on it. & i say dekha kitne fans hain mere Vrishu ke :P Sorry main apne track se dusari jagah chali gayi :P i am again out of track :P :P
Loved the way shaan took her down & saw how much she is loved :) people loves her & she is an angle they wait to meet her everyday :) loved the way you have discribed the communication between old man & shaan ♥ loved how she is bonded with everyone at Society :)
Mrs Chawla & her expressions were fab ..lol she was scared when she wsaw khwaish there with shaan heheh khwaish scolded her & left the place immidiately :P :P Khwaish eagarness to visit park was cute & she played with puppy ♥ Aweee that was so cute. & loved shaan's concern here the way he was worried abt her playing with dog was truly beautiful ♥
Shaan spend awesome time with khwaish in the morning & took her with him up just to feed her ...Awesome dear
Loving it very much
Off to read next one
Thank u Suchi for awesome updates.... aise back to back updates diya kar.... :) Mera ashirwad hamesha tere sath hai..:P
ReplyDeleteand jis tarah se tune khwaish ki excitment ko bataya hai na... just amazing... i could so imagine khawish all chriping and happy to go to park......
And the old man who was talking to Khwaish was totally unknown to shaan..:P its so common....
aur baccho ke sath he nahi bado ke sath bhi hota hai... sonali ko jithne log jante hai uske 50% log muze, ya mom dad ko nahi jante... batana padta hai yeh mere sis hai...
its all abt the nature.. khWASIH Jjaise cute se gudiya ko koi kyu nahi pehcnaega.....
Oh oh!!! Mrs. Chwala?? yahan pe gayi... lekin khwaish ko dekhte he madam ko danger signal mil gaya ...:P
and khwasih ne kya mazza chakaya inko.. agye se 10 baar sochneg hand shake karu ya nahi... khwaish ki mumma ne bohot kchsikha rakha hai isko......
And now a puppy... yaar khwasih ki fan following badhte ja rahi hai... "babu" is really sweet... shaan was concerned for khwasih playing with babu....
awesome work suchi... loved it to core.....
love
Deepali