Monday, February 4, 2013

Khwaish Part 31

( huggss  heer for the beautiful creation ....................Love you )



They were sleeping peacefully cuddling in each other’s arm. shaan woke up after some time only to find her still sleeping by his side. He smiled lovingly, moved closer to her and placed a soft kiss on her forehead. He turned around to see the little one, who was also sleeping on her swing bed peacefully, he got up, moved towards her, ……… got tempted to kiss and cuddle her too while she is sleeping, ………as she looks like a angel, but resist the temptation as she will starts crying if he woke up her from her deep sleep and then he had to hear the khanak’s wrath too. He sighed deeply and moved towards his wardrobe to take out his towel and headed towards the bathroom to take shower.

He opened the tab of the bath tub and let it to get filled and moved towards the wash basin to shave till the tub gets filled up. After finishing up his shaving he laid down on tub to relax himself in steamy water. It’s just few minutes till he laid , he heard the sound of khwaish , he immediately get up fearing that if she tries to get up from her swing , she might fall and got hurt . He wrapped his bath robe around himself and came out hurriedly and found her cuddling to khanak , who was swaying and consoling her, while roaming around the room to stop her crying .

He heaved a sigh of relief and moved towards them. Khwaish looked towards him taking a break from her crying mode, shaan smiled seeing her and extend his arms as if asking her to come to him , while khanak back was towards shaan , so she couldn’t able to see shaan , she too took a sigh of relief when she didn’t heard the crying sound anymore and lovingly hugged  the little one tightly and starts talking to her .

Khanak : itna roya mera baby ?

Khwaish didn’t heard her mom and was busy in staring at her papa , shaan  smiled seeing her and flew a flying kiss towards her , khwaish cooes seeing it and waved her both hands towards him as if asking him to hold her immediately . Khanak understood the reason of her happiness suddenly and her change of mode from crying to jolly now. So in order to tease him, she starts her little game.

Khanak : aww ! mera baby darr gaya tha ? Haa ?

While saying it, she taps khwaish’s head lovingly ……………. khwaish  makes the puppy face remembering the reason of her cry a few seconds ago and placed her head back on khanak’s shoulder. khanak   laughed little seeing  the changing reaction of her little daughter in just the few seconds . While shaan was confused and still trying to understand ………..

Khanak : Hai na ? itna darr gaya tha ,………….. mera chota baby ………. Aww ………….. yeh khwaish ke papa  na ………bahut badmaash hai , …………….khwaish ko jhule pe sula diya aur khud aaram se bed pe so gaye ,………. Hai na ?

Khwaish raised her head again and looked at shaan hearing ‘ Papa ‘ and shaan  fumed with anger hearing his praise from Khanak , who now find her  new partner to gossip about him. Khanak giggled silently knowing very well about his temper now, but she loves to look him at angry mode as much as his love.

Khanak : abhi na ………apan dono papa se katti ho jayenge ,……… hai na ?

Khwaish was looking at him with expected eyes and again raised her hands asking him to take her, least showing interest on her mumma’s talk, he moved towards them and softly hold her from below her shoulders to take her in his strong hold, while khanak prepared herself to face his anger now . she too turned herself acting shocked as if she didn’t know he was there .

Khanak : shaan tum kab bahar aaye ? Sorry who mein ………..

Khanak didn’t able to finish , when shaan took khwaish in his arms and kissed her cheeks wiping her little drops of tears which were still there on her cheeks

Shaan : I m so sorry beta ,………. meri guddiya pyari si ……….papa ne rulaya itna ?

Khwaish hugged him and placed her head touching his neck and he too leaned towards her caressing her back lovingly, ………….the sight to hold …………… to feel ……………. Khanak was looking at them  ……………smiled ……….. Prayed god to keep the evils away from her little world… And keep showering blessing on her family always . She moved towards them ……..

Khanak : Gudiya , let papa get ready , then you play as much as you want , otherwise you will caught cold

Khanak took her from shaan and shaan moved towards his cupboard to take out his clothes, without talking or even seeing towards her . She understood that his temper is hot now, just like him, who seems to be the most hottest guy when being wrapped in just towel  after taking bath ……….

Khanak kissed khwaish’s temple and started chatting with her again to keep her busy and also to cool down her hotty’s temper ……..

Khanak : khwaish ko bore ho raha hai na aaj ghar pe ? ………..Papa ko bolo khwaish ko ‘ghummi ‘, ‘ghummi’  jana hai

Khwaish cooes hearing the word ‘ghummi’,’ ghummi’  as she just loves to roam different places , just like her mom …………..shaan smiled hearing the little one’s ecstatic voice , and moved towards her finishing up his work , took her again from khanak’s arms ………….kissed her forehead

Shaan : gudiya  ko ghummu jana hai ? …………… chalo phir jaldi se papa meri gudiya ko ready kar dete hai …………… apan long drive pe jayenge , ice-cream bhi khayenge , aur ballons bhi layenge khub sarre …………………… mumma ko nayi leke jayenge ………….mumma papa se katti hai toh thik hai………….papa bhi katti ab mumma se  ………….. chalo abhi jaldi jaldi ready ho jate hai  ...........

Khanak was stunned hearing it and how her plans backfires  and she herself got hurt in it , she was now  shocked to see the duo entering into washroom , ignoring her totally , stunned she kept standing there itself and soon tears started flowing down her cheeks , she wiped her tears , but it didn’t stopped and keep flowing ,…………. She moves towards her bed and laid down on her tummy cuddling her pillow and keep on crying , …………….while shaan least aware of her state , was happy as he too got the chance to balance the score with her , ……………and then started giving bath to the little one , after she finishes up with her freshens up session .

He came out of the washroom taking the little one in his arm after wrapping her in her little  pinky bath robe ,………..her most of the things are of pink colour with either Cinderella or Barbie print on it as  she gets ecstatic to see the sweet dolls .

He found her laying on bed, and wondered what made her to lay down again …….. he heard the sniff sound and  got alert ………. Is she crying?
He immediately moved towards her side, placed khwaish on bed beside her and hold her hand, shaking her little  ….. to see her eyes …..

Shaan moved to see her red eyes , he immediately hugged her tightly in his embrace , while she broke down again ……

Shaan : why are you crying ……….sweetheart ?

Khanak : shaan , I can’t live without you both , please don’t say about leaving me ever ……..

Shaan was moved to hear her and found the droplets forming in his own eyes too blurring his vision , he tighten the hold and placed the feather light kiss on her hair

Shaan : how can you think that we both can live without you ? Have you gone mad? Why are you crying like this ?

Shaan detached her slowly from his hold and wiped her tears ………..and looked at her with questing look

Khanak :  You only told to her just now that you both will go today for outing , without taking me

Shaan hit his head and gave her stern look

Shaan : stupid , that was to irritate you , just as you did it to me

Khanak pouted and moved closer to him …..Just to hug him tightly and he hugged her back with equal compassion

Little one who was sitting silently till now, moved towards them ……… climbed on khanak’s thigh………. Holding the shirt of shaan ………..they detach themselves from their hug and looked at her

Shaan :  mera chotu , motu ……….. aap hi ka inezar tha mujhe ………….itni derr takk aap kaise durr the mumma- papa se ?

Khwaish giggled too hearing his father’s words……….. making them laugh too  along with her own sweet voice 

Khwaish : mumma ......... :*
 





P.s. this is for you heer on your birthday .............a small gift from my side ......... hope you will like it :))



2 comments:

  1. wow!!!!khwaish for me Thank u thank u thank u thank u so much for the beautiful gift on my birthday i m so happy u and khwaish make me grin :D n i like it and loved it alot suchi :) i m missing smiley here heheh!!!!!
    this is the best gift from u n from khwaish :D
    i loved it so so so very much :D
    beautiful penned as always :)mwaaaahhhhh!!!!!!!!
    shaan wake up and kissed khanak on her forehead that was so cute :) and then looking at his little one was superb, the way shaan moved to khwaish and wanted to hold her was so sweet but he didn warna khanak use nahi chorti heheh!!! coz she would have woke up
    wah!! shaan savere savere hot bath kya baat hai ;)areh yeh kya khwaish woke up dekha shaan u took bath akele akele dats y lolzz!!! i love caring shaan always, he heard khwaish cry and rushed to see his little princess but yeah kya khanak already pick her n make her calm and talk to her :)
    awwww!!!! khwaish want his papa and raise her little cutie arms, khanak understood shaan is der dats y her angel was calm not crying after seeing his papa
    omgeee!!! khanak teased shaan and her talk with khwaish was amazing, very cute n sweet i loved it to the core :D
    khanak kept teasing shaan heheh!!! aww!! shaan gussa hogaya areh!! shaan khanak was teasing u
    he took khwaish and talked to her and now he paid back by teasing khanak lolz!!! both r burthals love them so much :D
    shaan said he will take only khwaish for outing n wil leave khanak home coz she is katti with him heheh!!!
    shaan make khwaish nai nai awesome :)
    poor khanak took it on heart and start crying
    loved the last part when shaan knew khanak is crying the way he hugged her was very touchy
    and their sweet talk was awesome
    yes khanak shaan wont leave u ever he loves u so much he love u both
    u two r his life
    khanak is burthal heheheh!!!!!!
    areh saab khwaish koh bulgae this is not fair
    dekha khwaish koh khudh ana para to her parents
    loved the scene how she moved to shanak awesome beautiful penned
    i love when shaan called her chotu motu and khanak her gudiya :)
    i loved it so much
    after long read khwaish thanx for an update suchi
    love u <3
    Heer :D

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  2. Wow!!! Outstanding story Suchi!!! I like Khwaish so much just like our ShaNak!!! <3 You ve weaved this story superbly in simple language!!! Just now I completed reading it and I loved this FF!!!

    Coming to this update it was so emotional especially the way how Khanak broke down!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update!!! :)

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