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Shaan makes the cutie-pie sit on the passenger’s seat beside
him and tied the seat belt around her, so that she doesn’t get fall down due to
the jerks when the breaks are applied. Khwaish felt tied up with it, and
started pulling it away to get rid of that belt, shaan saw her doing it , he
immediately asked her not to do, but still she does , when she can’t able to pulled
it away enough to get out from it , she
started whining . shaan looked at her and smiled seeing her antics.
Shaan : ghummu jana hai na ? papa aapko godi mein lenge toh
drive kaise karenge ? aur aapne badmaashi ki hai toh ab agar aap mumma ke paas
gaye na toh mumma toh pitti karegi aapki …….
Khwaish looked at him with questioning look as if trying to
understand what he is saying and makes
the terrifying face hearing ‘ mumma pitti karegi aapki’
Khwaish : hmmm ??
Shaan : mumma pitti karegi
Khwaish : hmmm ??
Shaan : hmm……..hmmm……..hmmm ,………….baad mein karna , abhi ghummu
jana hai ki nayi ?
Khwaish pouted and nodded as if saying ‘yes’
Shaan bend forward and kissed her forehead, ruffled her
hairs and smiled cupping her cheeks
Shaan : toh phir chup chap good girl banke baitho ,
understand ? aur mumma ko jaldi se sorry bol dena…………..
Khwaish sat silently after that but her attention was still
on the belt, which she started biting like a little rat as if will cut it into pieces,….
if she continues biting it. shaan looked at her and laughed seeing her act and
thought ‘ khanak is right when she calls
her ‘chuhiya’ ‘………….. He pulled her cheeks lovingly. He took out the car
from the garage where khanak was waiting for them. shaan gave a loving smile
seeing her but she didn’t respond it .
khwaish looked at khanak and become so happy as if seeing
her after ages . She raised both her arms in joy, as if asking mumma to ‘come
inside fast and hold me, then we will go for outing’. khanak’s heart melt just
seeing the innocence of the little one, who is least bothered about what
happens a while ago , ……………what damages she did which makes her mumma angry
with her ,………………… to whom she is hurting
,……………… who is angry with her and for what reason …………..but she just want to enjoy this
moment………….least bothered about the past and future. She is the bundle of joy
and happiness in their life , who made their relation more stronger.
Khanak thought, it’s rightly said that ‘one should enjoy the
life like a child’, then only can he/she can remain happy and enjoy the life. She
was just staring at the little one and her innocence, when shaan stopped car
and opened the door for her to get in and then unblocked the seat belt, took
the cutie-pie in his arms making the place for khanak to get in.
Khanak…….. ‘What he
thinks about himself? hmph ……..now I m not going to talk to him. ‘She
looked at him and again her anger resumed. She stomped her feet, closed the
door and went to sit at the back seat leaving both the soul confused. Khwaish
and shaan both got confused to her reaction; they both looked at each other.
shaan whispered in khwaish’s ear …..
Shaan : motu , mumma ko sorry boldo jaldi se
Khwaish looked towards him with a questioning look ‘hmm???’
Shaan again whispered asking her to say ‘sorry to mumma ‘.
khwaish raised both her hands and placed it above both her ears cutely, looking
towards khanak . shaan smiled too seeing the innocence on her face and he
kissed her temples .
Shaan : khanak , what is this yaar? Itna kya gussa ……….See
how she is saying sorry, without even knowing her fault she is saying sorry. ……….Ab
toh maan jao
Khanak still didn’t looked towards them , though her heart
has already forgave the little one but to hold her side strong too she was
doing acting of being angry at both of them .
Khwaish looked towards them, then she slid down from shaan’s
arms carefully putting her little feet above handle breaks of the car and then
get down on the floor, hold khanak’s top for support to stand though shaan was
holding her from back all this while but still she hold khanak as she wanted to
go to mumma now and placed her little head above khanak’s hands which was placed above her thighs .
khanak looked towards her acts and smiled lovingly. She took out her one hand and
started caressing her hairs.
Khanak : kyun itni badmaashi karti hai ki mumma gussa ho
jaye meri pyari si gudiya se , hmm ?
Khwaish was still leaning on khanak’s thighs, as loving the
mumma’s touch and caress. Khanak hold her from her waist, picked up and kept
her above her thighs, kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly. shaan was
looking at both of them lovingly and smiled seeing the interaction of the duo .
Shaan : papa ko bhi hug chahiye
Khanak : papa ko hug nayi , papa ko punishment milega
Shaan (surprised) : kyun ? Papa ne kya kiya ?
Khanak : papa ne hi saari badmaashi ki hai , itni saari
badmaashiyan sikhayi hai meri choti si gudiya ko
Shaan : papa ne nayi , mumma ne hi sikhayi hai , pura time
toh mumma ke he saath rahti hai woh
Khanak : nayi papa ne he sikhayi hai
Shaan : haan haan , sab toh papa ne hi kiya hai , gudiya bhi
toh papa ki wajah se aayi hai
Khanak (blushing profusely): shut up and drive now
Shaan : oh hello ! M not your driver, ki madam ji back seat
mein baithi hai aur driver aage baith ke drive karega
Khanak laughed loudly and detached the little one who was
comfortably sitting on mumma’s lap, gave her to shaan back to hold her till she
comes at the front seat too .she came and sat on the front seat and hold the
little one, who again leaned on mumma keeping her head above khanak’s chest .
khanak smiled seeing her and continues caressing her hairs which khwaish loves
a lot whenever she goes to khanak or shaan .
Shaan had already booked the
online ticket of the movie at PVR. The show was of 2:40 PM and its 1:30 PM now,
they thought to have lunch before going to the theatre, so that khwaish too
will sleep till then after having her little lunch, otherwise she won’t let
them sit and watch the movie peacefully and one or other had to take her out of
the hall for entertaining her or left the movie in between if she troubles
more. They proceeded to the nearest restaurant for taking their lunch and
khanak took out khwaish’s eating stuff from her bag to feed her till their
order arrives.
They reached theatre on time and sweetie-pie had already
slept by that time on her mumma’s arms clutching her mangalsutra tightly with
her little fingers. khanak didn’t gave it to shaan as she knew that she won’t
sleep if she will be in shaan’s arms . shaan had booked for the last row corner
seat. Khanak was sitting at the corner and shaan beside her. The hall was
totally dark and only the screen light was visible making the atmosphere
perfect.
The movie started ‘Breaking Dawn Part -1’. khanak took a deep
breadth seeing ‘ Edward Cullen ‘ which made shaan turned his neck towards her like ‘really??’ , she chuckled seeing his jealous and frustrated
look. He was continuously staring at her, least interested in watching the
movie now, but just her reaction seeing the reel hero when her real hero was
sitting beside her. Khanak knew that he was looking at her, to tease him more
she continues drooling at the star of the movie like a teenager and sometimes pass
comments too about his sexy looks. Shaan become more frustrated now, he leaned
back at the head rest of the seat, closed his eyes with anger. khanak laughed
seeing his reaction, she leaned sideward to place her head on his shoulder,
slid her left hand on his as right hand is holding the little one who was sleeping
in her arms. She clutched her fingers with his, locking it tightly. He too holds
it tightly as if will never let her go out of his hold, no matter ‘what’. Shaan leaned his head above her, which was on
his shoulders. As the movie was approaching, they both were lost in their own
world remembering the phase of their life before marriage, the apprehension,
various thoughts about the future, their first kiss and all the marriage preparations,
etc. Then the scene came of first night, shaan ruffled her hairs with his cheeks,
she smiled knowingly, raised her neck and look above in his eyes.
Shaan : whats the fun in seeing it ? If we were at home, we
can have more fun by doing it practically.
Khanak blushed profusely and again looked at the screen, while
shaan was teasing her continuously with every passing intimate scene comparing
them with the movie story……... How they always cuddled with each other at every
given opportunity but it’s still continue on their part as if they can’t get
enough of each other and can love and romance throughout their life with each other.
The scene where the ‘Isabella’ touches her tummy as she come
to know about her pregnancy reminds khanak of the day of her own life when she too
came to know about her and then the whole journey during those nine months when
she was carrying the little baby and how much supportive shaan was throughout,
it brings tears on her eyes remembering those period to see shaan struggling in
office and at home, but still he always shown patience.
The tears were continuously rolling down from her pretty
eyes wetting his shirt. Shaan felt the wetness, and then he lifts her chin to
look at her eyes and saw her crying. He was confused to see the tears in her eyes
and gave her the questioning look, she nodded saying ‘nothing’ but still he
urged her to speak.
Khanak : Nothing , was just got reminded of our struggle
days during my pregnancy and how you have to manage everything alone.
Shaan : stupid women ………….it was all worth it when you gave
me this (seeing khwaish) happiness and my struggle was nothing in comparison to
your pain which you suffered .
Shaan curled his arms around her bringing her more closely
in his embrace.
Intermission ………………
The interval came of the movie; they both separated from
each other as the lights gets on. Shaan asked her if she wants anything to eat,
she asks for Pop-corn and corn-chat. shaan goes to take the things while she sees khwaish who was still sleeping
peacefully in her lap curling her fingers in her mangalsutra. Khanak leaned downward
and gave a loving peck on little ones forehead. shaan came bringing the stuff and asked her to
give khwaish to him , but she denies knowing the consequences very well. Shaan too
shrugged ‘as you wish ‘.
Half an hour of movie is still left when cutie-pie woke up
from her deep sleep. She started whining. khanak hugged her tightly to stop her
and to disturb the others . khwaish stopped crying after few minutes when she
was satisfied that she is still on her mumma’s arms. Khanak make her sit on her
thighs and caressed her hairs lovingly “ uth gaya mera gudda, thodi derr aur so
jati toh kya ha jata tera , hmm ?” :* Khwaish
stretched herself cutely just like a little cat squeezing her eyes and raising
her both hands and legs . Both shaan and khanak looked her doing it and smiled
lovingly to see her cuteness. When she is done shaan asked her to come to him
which she does more willingly, sitting comfortably on his thighs. Khanak took
out her water bottle to give it to her. Khwaish hold it carefully with both of
her little hands and sips the water from it. When she is done she gave it back
to khanak and then leaned backward tucking her back with shaan’s chest for few
minutes till she got frustrated sitting at a place without doing anything.
Khwaish again started whining, khanak give her doll which
she brought with her , but khwaish throws it away in frustration. Thankfully it
didn’t hit the person sitting in front of them. They picked up the toy from
floor and turned back to give it to them. khanak says him ‘ sorry’ , he smiled
seeing the little one and gave the toy back to her . khanak narrowed her eyes seeing back on khwaish ……
Khanak : kyun
badmaashi ki ? ‘jhola baba’ ko bulaon ? ( jhola baba- scary person who takes
child with them in their sack, just to scare the little ) ab agar badmashi ki na
toh mein aapko jhola baba ke paas chod ke aa jaungi .
Khwaish got scared and then turned back to hug shaan as if
wanted him to secure her , in case mumma will really go and give her to ‘ jhola
baba’ . Both of them laughed slowly seeing her reaction.
Shaan : aww, mera baby, mumma kaise ‘jhola baba’ ko degi meri pyaari
si gudiya ko ? Papa phir mumma ki pitti karenge .
Khwaish again started whining. Shaan asked khanak to move as
she (khwaish) won’t let them sit peacefully now.
Khanak : shaan , I want to see the end of the movie. You go
and entertain her in games section, its just 15 minutes of movie is left.
Shaan : you are so mean . Why should I go alone?
Khanak : because you don’t want to watch the movie, but I do
and will drool on ‘Edward Cullen’ more in
your absence. Now go and let me watch it peacefully and take her bag
also, feed her till I come.
Shaan : you keep your bag with you , hmph . I will take all
the revenge of your tantrums which you throw on me, at night. You better get
prepared yourself for that.
Khanak :yeah yeah, ..... that will see later but for now you take care of her ;)
Khanak smiled sweetly making him more frustrated while little
one is still whining. Shaan took out khwaish from hall taking her towards the games
section till khanak comes. khwaish gets ecstatic seeing the colorful hall with
different games and little children around . shaan too smiled seeing her
happiness. He squeezed her lightly in his embrace and gave a loving kiss on her
forehead.
Shaan : papa ka motu..........muahhh :*

Awesome Suchi :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful penned <3
shaan and khwaish made a team n khanak is angry heheheh!!! lovely :)
awwww!! how sweet shaan tie a seat belt but cutie pie is very naughty heheh!! she didn want seat belt around her lolzz!! she tired to remove it
loved shaan with his baby talk while tie ing a seat belt
hahahah!! khwaish is very cute shaan said mumma pitti karegi n she made a face and tried to understand what shaan is trying to say heheh how cute u penned suchi :)splendid
khanak melt n left her anger seeing khwaish happy as she wanted to come to her but yeh kya khanak started to play a game and pretend as she is still angry heheh!! khanak shaan se panga mat loh abhi tumari ekk punishment bakki hai ;) dursi punishment koh bulawa maat doh heheh!!
khanak didn sit in front seat n close the door heheh!! shaan n khwaish remain confused lolzzz
she went n sit at back seat
shaan n khwaish again were cute here motu mumma koh sorry boldo lolzzz
awww!! khwaish wanted to go to her mumma so cute
khanak again try to show her anger by not looking at them hahah
nautanki lolzz!! as shaan would say lolzz!!
cutie pie slid down to go to her mumma aww!!! so beautiful written this part its like m watching khwaish doing each n every baby action :)
khanak caresses her cutie pie hairs how lovely and her talk with khwaish was lovely
the way u penned how khanak hold her, kiss her n hug her i was grinning :D beautiful bonding of mother n daughter :)
so now khanak n khwaish kih patch up heheh!!
awww!!! shaan is jealous he wanted hug too lolzz!! shaan u will get punishment not huggie u taught khwaish these badmashi heheheh!!
shanak cute fight is awesome yaar i loved it :) aur yeh kya shaan sidha boldiya papa kih wajase hi khwaish aayi ;) very naughty shaan * blush *
khanak blushed n said to drive poor her she didn have words to reply to his besharam pati lolzz!!
shaan as a drive kesa lagega dekh kar heheh!!
wow!!! movie time after lunch lovely n cutie pie is asleep so now no disturbance while watching movie dekha khwaish mumma n papa r having fun n u r sleeping heheh!!
wah!! shaan last corner kih seat lih tumne kya baat hai ;) enjoy shanak :D
shaan was Jealous when khanak saw 'Edward Cullen' n took a deep breathe heheh!! i love to see Jealousy shaan :)
omgee!! khanak teased shaan by drooling over Edward Cullen rofl!!! like a teen ager awesome yaar i want to see more jealousy side of shaan lolzz!!
poor shaan became more frustrated kya khanak baas karo aabh lolzz!!
loved how khanak leaned on shaan shoulder seeing him angry :)RLbs :D lost in their world lovely part
yes khanak agar ghar par hoteh toh kitna kuch karte tum dono ;) shaan is right
awwww!!!!!!!! khanak became emotional seeing pregnancy track in the movie
i love the way shaan always support her n be with her
pop cone n movie is awesome :D
khanak didn give khwaish to shaan as she knows she will awake on his papa's arm
awww!! khwaish uth gai heheheh!! aur mumma keh lap par beth gai but yeah kya khwaish is bored to sit at the same position lolzzz!!
omgee!! she throw the doll hahah!! thank God kisi koh lagi nahi naughty khwaish
jhola baba omgee!! aabh yeh koun hai khanak y u r scaring khwaish very bad heheh!!
aww!!! cutie pie got scared of jhola baba and hug shaan keh agar mumma leke gai toh muje papa toh hai nah lolzz!! khwaish's acts are adorable :D
khwaish again whines and khanak wanted to see movie
she told shaan to take her out n tease him again about Edward heheh!
shaan didn take khwaish's bag rofl!! i love this dialogue "you keep your bag with you , hmph ." lolzzz
khanak be prepared for punishment ;) shaan will take revenge of all tantrums u throw over him
khwaish became happy at games section lovely
awaiting for next part
thank you so much sweetie for the beautiful comment
ReplyDeleteits been the great support for continuing my writing ..........its always motivational
well what to reply at your comment ........i read it nth number of times :P
thanks for taking effort to comment inspite of your busy schedule
Next part is up ....hope you like it
It will be more sensual and mature :P ........our besharmi wala part , i mean ;)
all credit to you for writing next part and furthur parts .............and your most awaited night punishment for khanak by shaan is due , will make it sizzling hot , i hope it will be upto your expectation but i think i wont able to write it for now , will give next part in june .
Thanks a lot dear and take care :*
awww i m glad u picked up this movie
ReplyDeleteseeing khanak remembering her moments with shan and baby while watching the movie was awesome :)
thanks for liking it , its my favourite movie , so i pick it up for shanak
Deleteglad that you liked it :))