Saturday, August 4, 2012

Khwaish Part 18

( thank you so much deeps for making it on my request, love you )


After having their tea and milk khanak take khwaish inside her bedroom to make her sleep so that she will be fresh to play with shaan after his return from office. Khanak  tried  to make khwaish sleep by patting her forehead and swaying her in her lap but she is just not ready to sleep and was busy in playing with her doll, after few minutes khanak  gave up and took out a magazine to read , letting  khwaish to play along with her doll. Khwaish when saw her busy with reading magazine, she raised her hand and tried to move away magazine which is coming in between her and her mumma , khanak moved  it away and saw khwaish , Khwaish  gave her a wide smile and raised her both arms as if asking her to hold her closely , khanak smiled seeing the acts of her naughty daughter and hold her in her embrace tightly, kissing her all over . 

There beautiful moment was disturbed by a door bell,  khanak slid down from bed taking khwaish in her arms and came out of her room to open the door. She opened the door still wondering who will be there at this hour, but when she opened the door she saw him holding laptop bag in one hand and other holding the keys of his Swift. She smiled widely to see him, and opened the door full for him.

Khanak :  how come you are early today ?

Shaan hold khwaish in his arms after placing his laptop bag on the couch

Shaan : I was missing my cutie – pie so much

Khanak : Really ?

Shaan – ya (kissing khwaish on her cheeks )

Khanak moves towards kitchen for bringing water for him and came back again sitting beside him, while khwaish was still cuddled in his embrace

Shaan : see my cutie-pie is so happy to see me early today, and you instit of being happy was asking reasons , hmph

Khanak whacked him slightly for being so dramatic

Khanak : your cutie-pie is happy as she will get the company  in troubling mumma . Hai na ?

Shaan : no , she is happy as she she can live peacefully for the rest of the day and she wont have to listen your scoldings anymore as her savior is with her now .

Khanak : haww , I m troubling her or she is troubling me whole day , what do I do accept to tell her not to do . see how naughty she is becoming day by day, …………whole day she crawls from here to there and scattered the things from their place, catching the insects crawling in the floor , I literary had to keep her in front of my eyes , otherwise what she will do the next moment we can’t even think it off and also make me run after her for food, and collecting the scattered things, do you know what she did today ? she stood up holding the bucket and started splashing water from it along with the chanting “ chup chup chup “ 

Khwaish giggled seeing khanak and her ranting; as if she is well prepared that mumma is going to do her complain with papa, as always. It was their everyday routine that after shaan coming from office , khanak tells him in details about what all things their little daughter did whole day and how much naughty she is becoming day by day with her acts and how she troubles her. It makes Shaan to forget  all his office tension, worries , everything and just loved to sit with his sweethearts , who are his life and  to hold his little sweetheart  who  become  as elated as him seeing him after so many hours . She cuddled to him and kept holding him. Shaan was laughing hearing his little daughter’s antiques and squeezed her tightly giving her a peck in her hairs.

Shaan : motu dekh mumma kya bol rahi hai meri gudiya ki complain kar rahi hai, ki itni sari badmaashi ki meri gudiya  ne

Khwaish looked at him with confused expression and then towards khanak , she then raised her palm and touch it on her forhead ……………………Shaan laughed loudly seeing her doing this …………………………Khanak gave a confused look to him as if not understanding a bit of what makes him laugh so much 

Shaan after composing himself, tried to speak holding his snigger

Shaan : Do you know , I taught her to do ‘ oh ho ! ‘by touching her forehead  this morning only ………..and see how she used it in appropriate way and in perfect situation to shut you up and spare her for the day.

Khanak again whacked his arm “ Jerk ! hawwwww……… you taught her to do this when I do  her complains :O , ……….give her to me  , I will tell her how to make mumma ‘shut-up ‘.

Khanak took khwaish in her arms and make her stand in her thighs holding her both hands tightly so that she didn’t get slipped “ Badmaash , mujhe ‘oh ho ‘ bol rahi thi , mumma ko , kyun ? Yeh papa sab badmaashiyan sikhate rahtein hai meri beti ko aur yeh gundi , acchi cheezein toh samajhti hi nayi bas badmaashi kaise karni who toh itni jaldi samajh jati hai aur turant seekh jati hai , kyun ? Pitti karna hai khwaish ki ab , hai na ?

Khwaish was looking at her with a naughty smile and giggling crazily as if understood all the accusation done by mumma  and then leaned towards khanak touching her head with khanak’s..............Khanak embraced her tightly again “ Badmaash gudiya meri “ 

She then moves towards the kitchen giving khwaish back to shaan for keeping Khwaish engaged in playing so that she will finish her works for the day .

The days passed and then the weekend came again, it was the day of jai’s arrival to Hyderabad for rakhi ………

Khanak was busy in making his all the favorite dishes and shaan  kept khwaish busy by engaging her in playing with her toys so that she doesn’t trouble khanak while making snacks for her dear brother . Shaan called jai to ask him about the flight details so that they can come in time to pick him but jai refused to do so and asked them not to come, will come by himself in a cab. Shanak insisted him a lot but he refused as it’s not worth to drive one hour to pick him and then again one hour while returning with khwaish , as she will get tired but shaan said that she will enjoy a lot instit as she loves to go for a drive. Jai then gave up to argue further and told them about his flights details which  will arrive by evening as he missed his one flight, so he is coming from the next .

Khanak does the preparation of dinner, so that after they returned she only had to make chapattis, and heat the vegetables. Shaan by that time make khwaish ready by changing her frock and combing her little hair . she looked like a Barbie doll in pink color lace frock with a bow in one shoulder and a thin strap in other , khanak came to the room after completing her work and saw her daughter , she kissed her cheeks and put a black dot  by kajal behind khwaish’s ear , to save her from all the evil eyes . shaan kept looking towards them lovingly towards them and sighed thinking that what makes him to love them more and more and to keep them away from all the worries and to  keep them happy always with every possible ways he can do .

Khanak looked towards him and found him lost in somewhere , she moves near him holding khwaish in her arms , tip-toed and then gave a peck in his lips “ where are you ? “

Shaan’s trance broke with this and he smiled lovingly, snaking his hands on her waist “ you do everything at wrong time , don’t you ? “

Khanak : what I did ?

Shaan : what you did just now  ? If it was not the time to go to the airport for picking up your bro than had done the scores even.

Khanak : You just cant because cutie-pie is still awake *wink*

Shaan : don’t challenge me , I can do anything

Khanak looked deeply in his eyes lost in his deep brown eyes ……….their trance was broken by khwaish’s screaming voice “ Mummaaaaa” , who at last had to screamed loudly after patting enough to both of them but they are just not ready to answer her and were lost in their romantic world . They both laughed loudly and kissed her lovingly “ Badmaash  baccha ………” and detached from each other.  khanak gave khwaish to  shaan and moved towards the closet for changing her clothes.

Shaan : cutie - pie chalein jai mama ko lene ? ......... hmm ?

Khwaish gets elated hearing jai's name , shaan smiled lovingly seeing her cuteness " My little doll ...love you sooo much ".

9 comments:

  1. Suchiiiiiiiiiiiii

    Awesomeness ki Hadh hain yeh wala part toh :) this is super fandooo yaar & supremly cute update :) LOved it sooooooooo much ki i feel like reading it again & again :))

    Shanak Romance & Khwaish ki badmaashiyaan Are the best thing & unki NOk jhok mein khwaish ke antics ka tadka ........Muaaahhhh kya combination banaya hain Awesome ..........LOved it.

    LOL loved khwaish she didnt slept even after soooo much mehnat by khanak, & didnt let mumma read the magzine also .......Sooooooooo cute, I loved the expresssion discribed by you when Khwaish saw papa :) can feel it itna sundar likha hain tune:))

    LOL shanak Nok jhok was super cute, Shaan said khwaish is happy as his saviour is here & khanak imitated khwaish antics while camplaining shaan about his cutie pie :) LOved that part :) THE BEST part of update was whe khwaish did Ohh ho for mumma ......hahahah Soooooooooooooo Cute lol i laughed so much at this, I remember every cute & badmash harkat done by my gundi maau :)) LOL i can so imagine Shanak's expression on it. Superb ..........Beautifully written !!!

    Mumma beti Convo was ubber cute :) LOved it dont have words to discribed it yaar. U are a star suchi :) WOW Jay mama ke aane ki taiyaarian shuru, LOved the way shaan convinced Jay that they will come to pic him up :))

    Shanak Romance was Awesome :) Beautifully written !! Kudosss Suchi jitna beautifully tu Khwaish ki antics likhti hain utna hi beautifully Shanak Romance likhati hain ,,,,,One just feels liek reading it on & on & khatam hota hain toh writer ke gussa aata hain :) That convo loving kiss was awesome & Khwaish perfect timing to scream :P LOL i love my power puff girl :))))

    WOW they are leaving to pick up jay. Superb Ab mazaa aayega. I am waiting to see khwaish expression on seeing her Jay Mama here :))

    Awesome ...........Beautiful Update !!!

    Waiting for mre :) Continue Soon !!!

    Muahhhhhhh ............Love ya

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    1. OMG !! i was feeling so embarressed to read your comments because i personally was feeling that its not up to the mark :(
      but your comments gave me confidence and was feeling ecstatic :D
      so sweet of you :)

      lol, that oh ho wala part even i was laughing like an idiot for that scene and imagined her doing it cutely at the appropriate time :P

      Thanks a ton for loving it and commenting it .

      Huggsss

      Love You :*

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  2. Wonderful part Suchi :))....loved how Khanak and Khwaish were spending their time together and when Shan came back home after work how Khanak was telling him all the details about what Khwaish has done...she was complaining against the cutie-pie...loved the way how she imitated what Shan taught her in the morning "Oh hoo".....so cute it was!!

    So Jai is coming for Rakhsha Bandhan :)....Khwaish would be surprised seeing him there...

    Khanak knows when and how to tease Shan :))......always at galat time :P...can't wait to see what Khwaish is going to do when she meets Jai at the airport :)

    Waiting for next part :)

    Love,

    Cherry

    PS: If you have a baby at home you don't need any TV :)))

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    1. PS: Thanks Deep for makiing this wonderful siggie for Khwaish :) <3

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    2. Thank you so much cherry di for the lovely response :))

      lol, ya this 'oh ho' wala part is mine favourite too and i had a huge laugh while writing it and imagining khwaish doing it and the shanak's response over it

      huggss

      Love u

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  3. Suchi!!!!! i tell u khwaish na din ba din cute hoti ja rahe hai... uske yeh cute harqate are so pretty!! am loving her more and more..!!!!

    lagta hai angel ko pata chal gaya tha ki papa jaldi ayenge... isley madam soye hi nahi!!! aur mummy ko pareshan karna shuru!!! :Pyeh accha combination hai... papa aur unki ladli milke mummy ko pareshan karte ahi...!!!
    i just loved it suchi!!! the interaction of shanak aur usme khwasih ke cuteness!!! cherry on cake tha yeh toh!!! khwaish bacche tum na apne mom dad pe bhi bahri padne wali ho!!!
    and wat a quick learner u are angel!!! ""oh!oh "" wala part was hillarious!! shaan ne sikhaya hai matlab sikna toh tha he... princess is as smart as her dad!!!

    and wow Rakhi ki tayari!! jai is coming!! yipee!!! ab toh dhamaal hai!!! khwaish ke favorite mama jo ayeneg!! and woh receive karne bhi ja rahe hai....

    Shanak ka romance was superb... uske bhi khwaish ne tadka mar diya... kya timing hai beta!!!
    khwaish toh cha gayi thi is baar!!
    bas aise he cute cute update dete rahiyo amma!!!!

    next part soon!!!!

    Thank u!

    love u!! muhhaaaa!!!1
    Deepali

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  4. Thank u deeps

    mein na khwaish ko jaan ke itna shaitan bana rahi hunn ki tum log jaldi jaldi usse bore ho jao ki woh itni badmashi karti rahti hai , kaun oadhe yeh bakwas :P .............lol

    Yup dono papa beti milke khanak ko tang karte hai aur woh badmaash toh mummy papa se bhi chaar kadam aage hai masti karne mein ;)

    yup jai is coming for rakhi :D
    Hope you like it, lol whenever you guys get excited for jai, i feel nervous and cant able to decide what exactly to write :P ........as mujhe bas khwaish ki badmashiyan hi likhne mein mazza aata hai
    Wait for next , then tell me whether it was worth or not :)

    Thanks for the comment

    Love you

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  5. Hey Suchi,

    Finally am here to comment !! I know it is late par kya karu, weekend itna hectic hota hai ki poocho mat :)
    Actually I read it that day itself when you posted but on phone and my phone is ancient model which doesn't let me comment thru it so kept it for Monday !!

    Good that I did it coz I read the whole update again to decide what I actually wanted to write and it was soooooooo soooooothingggg !!!
    Loved the convo of cutie pies so much !!

    I am so excited that Jai is coming for Raksha Bandhan ! It's a treat to read Jai-Khwaish bonding and how Khwaish makes a lobby with both her dad and mama to trouble the cutie mom in Khanak !!
    I love their interactions :)))

    Wow, Khanak tells everything in detail to Shaan once he comes back from office and I can imagine how relaxed he must be to listen to the fun things about his two sweethearts !!
    To be honest, I don't even relate the story to TresPro at all !!
    It is unique, beautiful, lovely story in itself with the major HEROINE as Khwaish !! She is so so so naughty, rightly called 'badmaaash ' by everyone !!!
    I read ur reply to Deeps that u are making Khwaish so naughty so that we get bored :P :P :P
    No Madam, it is making her and the story all the more addicting. I feel like reading it again and again and relate so many things to Ishi's childhood.
    I remember like the one - Oh Ho !!! Part ( My favourite too )..... I had taught Ishi to give surprised expressions with raising eyebrows, opening mouth and placing her palm on mouth saying " Hawwwww !!!!!" This was when she couldn't even speak. And we used to be in splits and fall down laughing when she used to do all expressions with "Hawwwwww !!!" whenever she didn't understand anything or whenever she saw someone doing blunders , like dropping something on floor !!
    So many things of Khwaish remind me of Ishi's childhood :))))))))

    Thank you so much for writing such a cute cute cute Story :))))

    Keep writing :))))

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    1. thank u sooooo much di for the wonderful reply :D

      lol, ya she is badmaash and unique piece, and i know it cant be related to trespro shanak, they are unique in themselves :)

      Hi5, me too thought to make khwaish learn doing "hawww " but then drop the idea and taught her to do "oh ho " as she is tired of listening her own accusation from mom ..........lol

      thank u so much for telling me that it reminds you of ishi's childhood , that itself is a big complement for me :D

      huggsss for reading it and commenting

      Love u :*

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