Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Khwaish Part 17

( credit goes to deepali for making it for khwaish :D )

Khwaish’s fever came down slowly by the evening and she was again back to her chirpy self gradually , though not as she always does but enough to make her parents  calm and not to be worried for her .

Khanak and shaan looked after her whole night , though she was fine and didn’t have fever but still they were worried for her , so they thought to look after her whole night . Khanak asked him to sleep and she will take care of her as he had to go office in the morning , shaan insist her to sleep as she already had a tired day due to  khwaish’s illness and said that  he will look after khwaish and will do some project work in his lappy but she was more stubborn then him  , he then had to agreed  but  asked her to wake him up if she needs anything  or if khwaish  wakes up or troubles her . she agreed and he  sets the alarm in his Iphone .

It was  around 5 :00 clock in the morning , when shaan  woke up  and turned to look khwaish and khanak , khanak  had slept too but her hands was  around khwaish , he smiled seeing her  posture  , shaan placed his hand on khwaish’s forehed to see if there is any fever , but she didn’t have any fever. Shaan bend down to kiss her forehead, taking care that she didn’t woke up and then he stepped down from bed and moved towards washroom.

He came back from washroom and saw khwaish sitting on the bed rubbing her eyes innocently, shaan smiled  seeing her but at the same time was worried that now khanak will woke up too hearing their  voice, he moved towards khwaish when he saw khwaish stressing her little hands towards him as if asking him to hold her .

He  came back and  sat beside her , hold her and embraced her  lovingly in his embrace  , bend down to kiss her hairs , khwaish squeezed her eyes , yawned and sat leaning on shaan’s  chest .

Shaan : sweetie  why did you woke up so early , hmmm ?

Khwaish just rubbed her face moving it here and there from  his vest  and  again sat leaning over him, shaan smiled seeing her this cute act and thought that khanak is so right whenever she accused him  for  not letting khwaish sleep and touching or kissing her or caressing her in her sleep as she woke up whenever she feels his touch over her. He sighed and bend down to see her , whether she is awake or slept , as  he bend down to see her face , she looked up at the same time, shaan smiled and hugged her tightly .

He take her out of  the room , so that khanak didn’t get disturbed by them, without creating any noice and  took his iphone along with him so that if it rings she didn’t get disturbed . He moved towards washroom of guest room , for freshening  up his little sweetheart . He let her stand above sink holding her safely  so that she didn’t get slipped from there, and  wiped her face with cold water , she giggled cutely as he opened the tab and placed his hand under it to take water for wiping her face , shaan smiled too  and wiped her face with cold water

Shaan : Badmaash , itna mazza aa raha hai na subah subah pani ka khel kar rahe hai papa toh ?

Khwaish just looked at him still smiling and then leaned over him again and started  rubbing  her face with his T-shirt ,

shaan : mumma ne yeh towel rakha hai na washroom mein , papa ki  shirt se thodi pochte hai , cutie pie :*

After that both father and daughter moved towards kitchen , holding khwaish in his arms , he  puts pan over gas to make coffee for him , and take out biscuit in a plate for khwaish . He simmered the  knob  of gas to let the milk boiled and came out of kitchen moved towards the Dining hall ,  switched on  LCD  and  started surfing the channels but stopped at news channel . He bend down and put khwaish over the mat laid above the floor, with her toys already scattered over it . she moved towards her toys and take her favorite doll  from it, she  started licking and playing with it lovingly and giggling at time. Shaan smiled seeing her , still wondering that how the little kids understands and can differentiate as to which are their favorite things .

Shaan : sweetie , sit here , I m coming back

Khwaish was too busy in playing with her doll, that she didn’t looked up at him , he moved towards the kitchen  to take his coffee . Came back taking coffee and biscuit in a tray and sat infront of her . he dragged her towards him holding her little toes .

Shaan : chalo papa ke saath buiscuit khayegi na khwaish ?

Khwaish looked at him with a sweet smile, turned herself to face him and then hugged him lovingly . she ate biscuit dipped in coffee with him, basically their  daily routine little game of around half an hour and then both were busy in playing  catch catch. Two hours passed  like that, after that she started whining  and chanting “mumma”

Shaan tried hard to console her, take her out towards the balcony to show her birds and animals , she kept quiet for a while but then again she lost interest in everything around her and whined  for her ‘mumma’  again .
Shaan gave up and take her inside their bedroom and kept her on bed , she immediately moved towards khanak , who was still sleeping deeply , khwaish sat beside her and placed her hand above khanak’s cheeks  and then leaned over her face , khanak moved slightly , opened her eyes slowly and found her daughter ‘s face above her, she smiled and put her hands over khwaish , dragged her above her to let her sleep by patting her head . Within few minutes khwaish  slept  peacefully  near her mother.

Shaan brought tea and coffee for them by that time and placed it on centre table and sat on the couch reading newspaper . Khanak  got up from the bed, moved towards the washroom and then came back to sit beside him.

Khank : whats the time ?

Shaan : its 8 :00 clock

Khanak : when did she woke up ?

Shaan : at 5 : 00

Khanak : you must have touched her ?

Shaan : I was checking her temperature

He justified himself and also prepared himself to get nice scolding from her .

Khanak : ya, don’t try to justify yourself , I know you , you just  can’t let her sleep , when you know that she wakes up by your touch , still you do that , you just don’t let her sleep peacefully.

Shaan  : ho gaya ?

Khanak : Kya ho gaya ?  I was not narrating a story of a movie or novel .

Shaan Laughed loudly at her reply , and dragged her towards him and squeezed her sideward.

Shaan : you look more adorable than  khwaish  when you  argue or fights with me

Khanak smiled and moved more closer towards him,hugged him tightly and kept sitting leaning over him , placing her head  above his chest . “ Really ??”

Shaan : no, I was trying to stop you from  speaking more

Khanak whacked him on his shoulder “Jerk”

Shaan laughed again and she kept staring him and  his laughter , she raised her chin upwards and placed her palm on his cheek and then both the lips sought each other finding solace in each other , and the feeling of eternity in each other’s arm, made the kiss more passionate . After few minutes his phone rings, it was from office , he moved to take the call and she moved towards kitchen for making breakfast for him.

They moved to their daily routine life after spending some beautiful moments together with morning tea and coffee

It was evening 4:00 clock …………..

 khanak came to kitchen for making tea for herself and milk for khwaish . she kept her at floor , nd moved towards the slab . Khwaish saw the basket containing potatoes and onion at one side of the kitchen , she immediately moved towards it and started scattering them  one by one from basket to the floor. Khanak looked back to see what she is doing and smiled seeing her act , but didn’t stopped  her and let her do . she was back to adding milk in her tea and filling the mug with milk , when her phone started ringing , she looked the screen it was from ma , she add milk into her tea and simmered the knob to let it boil and take her call.

Khanak was busy in talking to her ma , telling her all the little incidents happened with her in a day . It was her daily routine to talk to savita and madhavi  and tell them  about what all she did ,  how was her day and how much naughty khwaish became with each passing days and some of her naughty acts which makes them laugh. She was still telling her ma that how Jai had taught her playing with water and to splash it from bucket  or tub,  when  Suddenly she heard the noises around , she looked back and found that  khwaish was standing  holding the bucket and  is splashing water from that bucket  chanting “ chap ……chap ……..ahh…..hahah “ . She was giggling and laughing like she achieved greatest thing on earth. Khanak immediately moved towards her screaming “ Khwaishhhhhhhhh………….kya kar rahi hai ? “.  She asked ma to call later as her naughty daughter is trying to show the live demo of her act which she is narrating in her words to ma. She kept the phone down , switched off the knob of gas and moved towards khwaish.

Khwaish looked at her and then again started splashing the water from bucket  “ chap …..chap …..“

Khanak : badmaash ….. pitti khani hai ab aapko , hai na ?

Khwaish looked towards her with blank expression and stared her for few seconds and then screamed loudly towards khanak “ aaahhhhhhh ……”

Khanak was shocked for a while and then laughed inwardly but kept the stern expression over her face to not motivate her acts further

Khanak : Mumma ko daant rahe ho aap ? Kal aapko kitna  fever tha , aur abhi aap phirse kheloge     mum-mum se toh phir se fever ho jayega na ?

Khwaish  just kept looking innocently at her as if trying to understand her  mother’s words , then she leaned towards khanak and hugged her

Khanak smiled  and hugged her back  “ haan mumma ko chup karne ka  acha tarika sikha diya na papa ne aapko bhi ? …… bas pyari kar do , pata hai mumma apne aap shaant ho jayegi , hai na ?“

Khwaish  stood their hugging her , placing her head in her shoulders , khanak took her in her arms and moved towards their room for changing her clothes. She  undressed her , wiped her body with towel and applied powder over her , and then dressed her  with white cotton knee length  frock with frill at the end  , she looked angelic in that frock , khanak  kissed her cheeks and then  came back to the kitchen  holding her in her arms, khwaish looked towards the scattered water and potatoes and onions on the floor , pats khanak’s  shoulder 
Khanak looked back towards her and raised her eyes as if asking “what ? “

Khwaish showed her the messing floor , pointing her fingers towards the water and potatoes in  the floor .

Khanak : haan, pata hai , sab bikhra diya meri choti si gudiya ne , mumma sab sametegi , but before that we will have our tea , hai na ?

Khwaish smiled widely and leaned towards her placing her head in her shoulders.

Khanak squeezed her tightly “ my cutie pie…….I love you so much , muahh “


6 comments:

  1. Suchi

    Muah For this super fundoo part yaar. This was truly cuteness ki Hadh, I loved it to the core, Super Super Super duper Happy by reading Khwish again.

    U know U have a brilliance in writing dear, U have actually created a Cute little Gundi for me, My cute power puff girl. Love the way you write all the cute antics by Khwish. It feels as if I am watching a cute little girl playing & doing mischief in front of me, U are Awesome :)

    Yiippeeeeeeeeee My Gundi is back in action,Yes it feels so nice to see her laughing, playing, whining & demanding attention, Love her like that only. Don’t even try to make her ill again warna teri vaat .,,,,,,,,,Humph., I will hate you for it.

    You have beautifully described the worries of shanak as their cutie pie is not well both argued who will lookafter her whole night & Shaan lost it & khanak stayed awake to look after their angle. Loved the beautiful morning moment described by you. I just loved it, actually Papa ke touch se bhi baby aadhi raat ko jag jaata hain, atleast vrish toh pakka.

    LOLz I loved the posture of Khwaish described by you. So cute sitting on bad rubbing eyes with her little tiny hands & asking ki Godi lo. Aweeee ,,,,,,,,,Such a cute moment. I just loved it, shaan just touched her to check she is ok but on other side khwish was waiting for Papa’s touch & she set their wide awake. Super cute.

    I loved the cozy moment shared by Father & doughter, it was just beautifully described filled with so much of love & affection. Her rubbing face on papas vest was extremely cute & realistic, Shaan took her out of the room so that khanak can sleep for sometime peacefully. Loved the paniwala khel LOL very much like my place. Vrish loves playing in water. This moment was Sooooooooooooo cute.

    WOW their morning ritual is back Coffee with Biscuit, shaan made coffee & Khwaish played till time.both papa beti had fun with each other, I don’t words to doscribed that. Shaan is sooo cute he is an awesome hubby, he tried to pacify Khwaish so that khanak can sleep. But she wanted Mumma & shaan gave up. Loved the way she woke up Khanak & slept beside her,

    Morning moment between Hubby wifey was very beautifully loved the sweet moment of togetherness between Shanak, LOL that was Hilarious too. I loved khanak’s irritation on shaan’s Ho gaya :P hehehe super cute.

    Evening sence took the cake khanak on call & Piche khwaish busy in doing her task :P LOL yeh exactly vrish karta hain jab apni nani key aha jaata hain LOl sab dusari room mein hote hain & yeh kitchen mein aloo pyass phala raha hota hain :P Loved khwish here & Jai mama ka sikhaya hua Chup chup was ubber cute, Soooooooooooo much cute, Khanak didn’t scold her as she was happy to her doing masti as in past 36 hours they waited to see this side of her.

    Last convo was Super duper cute amazing .,,,,,,,,,,Loved it.

    Thank Uuuuuuuuuuuuuu Suchi ……….Muaaaaaahhhhh

    Love you sooooooooo much for writing it.

    Waiting for part 18 :)))))

    Love you

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    1. wow !

      i m so happy to read your comment , more than update , i loved to read your reply on it ;)

      i always feel that kahin kuch jyada hi toh nayi ho raha but tera comment dekhke i feel relief to read that even vrish does same thing :P

      Thanx a ton for commenting and inspiring me :*

      Love you

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  3. Suchi,

    Just read this part again...... Had read it on the mail but reading here is a totally diferent experience.

    Actually reading about Khwaish is a beautiful experience in itself. Such a peaceful, slow paced, leisurely description of each act of theirs takes you to a totally different world. As if the time has come to a stand still and you can now relax and read about the badmaashiyan of Khwaish and affectionate side of Shanak.

    Each and every nuance was so well described that it leaves me in awe. Shanak fighting at night that who will take care of Khwaish - was so realistic and so nicely written. Thank God that the baby didn't have fever, I was worried for her.
    Finally Khanak wins, like all girls do and let's hubby take a nap. However, Shaan ko bhi chain nahi hai.....he woke up at 5.00 and checked temperature.
    It always happens with Ishi and now she is 9 years, but it is still the same that when I pat her, she goes comfortably in sleep but when my hubby touches her, she wakes up immediately. It was so realistic :))))

    Father-daughter quality time was so lovely.....freshening up with cold water, coffee-biscuit routine....so lovely.
    Shaan is sooosooo cute.....Khanak disturb na ho isliye, he takes khwaish away and takes care of her for 3 hours :)))) Finally, he gives up and gives Khwaish to Khanak who knows how to put the baby to sleep.
    Lovely !!

    I liked Khwaish rubbing face with dad's vest, Shanak teasing moments, Khwaish making use of every opportunity and playing with onions, patotoes and water......Issshhhh, water playing thing was taught by Jai ???@@@!!!!
    Very naughty of Jai :))))

    Loved it completely. Thanks for writing it in such a relaxed way, it makes the reader smile and want to cuddle Khwaish !!

    PS - Lovely Sig by Deepali. Kudos....Keep it up :))))))

    Keep Writing.......waiting for more !!!

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    1. Thank you so much di

      I was feeling so happy after reading your comment and the way you connected it with Ishi and yourself :))))
      while writing that part that whenever shaan touches her , she wokes up immediately , i always felt that people will definitely think me crazy, as it cant be true ki father ke touch se baby uth jaye, but i was so happy to read your reply that it actually happens and its not my hyper imagination :P

      yup khwaish is so naughty and never leaves any opportunity to trouble her mom, if she is away from khanak's eyes , she is bond to do some or other mischievous act.

      lol, ya jai mama has taught her to play with water , ........remember i wrote an update where khwaish moves to ma's room and splash water from the earthen pot kept in ma's room and splash all the water in bedroom floor and then ma had stopped filling that pot :P ...........this is what khanak is complaining to ma that jai has made her more naughty

      Thaks a ton for reading and wonderful reply

      Love You

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  4. Suchiiiii!!!!! this was the super cute update.... finally khwasih ka fever down.... and she is back with the bang....
    cuteie pie bolo apne is suchi amma ko ki tumhe mumbai leke aye mere pass.... mere toh sunti nahi yeh...:P
    toh shaan khanak isme bhi argue??? aur khanak wins it like everytime... she has to take care of cutie pie...

    lolz!!! shaan ke touch karte he uth gayi princess.. u knw wen i read it muze laga he khanak kuch na kuch bolege and jab age padaha update toh it was their... lolz!! i was laughing like idiot for my correct guess!!!!

    tu khwaish ke cute acts kitne easily explain karti hai.. i feel as if woh mere samne hai... aur bas jake usko uthau apne ghod mai...
    princess papa ke sath khelene mai mast hui hai... kids love to play in water... lol! 2 hourspass in bliss lekin ab mumma ki yaad agayi princess ko... now cant't handle her...

    she went to khanak... khanak muze laga wahi kiya... shaan ko daant padne he thi...
    hehehe!!! i loved shanak ki nok jhok... they are as cute as khaish... beti apne mom dad pe gayi hai puri tarah se....

    wow!!! khanak ne jo bola phone pe wahi kiya madam ne...
    ohh!! khanak kitna bhi koshsih kar le nahi daant pati.. woh gussa nahi reh sakti princess se...
    she is truely a cute little princess!!!!!
    suchi thank u so much for this part....

    Love u...
    Deepali

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