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Next day as usual cutie-pie woke up early and sat beside
shaan patting his chest to woke him up since last 10 minutes but he was still sleeping,
without showing any interest to woke up
. she moved little upward and then lean down
on him and placed her head above
his chest and lied down there leaning
over him , he still didn’t moved and she became tired to wake him up , so she
then started patting his cheeks , chanting “ papa ………papa “
Shaan opened his eyes lazily wondering what’s happening
around and there she is in front of him showing her little teeth signifying
that how happy she is to at last succeed in waking up her father after doing the tedious job since
last 30 minutes. As they slept very late at night, he was just not interested to
woke up but his little daughter had made him awake and he knows that now he has
no option other than to woke up and play with her.
Shaan( taking khwaish above him) : motu , itni jaldi kyun
uth jata hai roj ? tera weekend kyun nayi hota ? roj subah subah papa ko utha
deti hai , badmaash
Khanak : motu pichale aadhi ghante se utha hua hai aur tabse tumhe utha
rahi hai
Shaan moved his neck to see khanak ,” how do you know ?”
Khanak : I was awake and was looking her acts, first thing
she did is to pat you for waking up and you are sleeping so
peacefully. Poor girl had a tough time
Shaan : if you were awake then why didn’t you entertain her and give her company or why didn’t you
take her to jai , he must have woke up ?
Khanak : I was feeling too lazy to woke up and take her to
jai and why should I ? She wanted to play with you, so I was just watching her
antiques and it was so hilarious , she
was continuously patting you here and there but all in vain and at last she
patted your cheeks with full force and there you are .
Khanak was laughing loudly while explaining her naughty daughter’s
acts to woke up her dad and shaan was embarrassed
hearing them, he turned his neck “ Youuuu , stop laughing now , you will get
nice punishment for it and laughing at
your husband ? Didn’t anyone taught you to respect your hubby and not to laugh
at him.
Khanak : Aww, is it ? Tch , why didn’t anyone has taught me
this till date , neither ma nor your mom
, taught me to not to laugh at poor hubby ,
She giggled more and khwaish was just looking towards them
wondering whats the issue now, and as usual
she was looking to them sitting silently above shaan waiting for them to finish
up their issue and get free to give her some attention. But they were busy in
their own teasing and accusing each other digging out all the previous solved
cases again , and then hearing them enough khwaish at last screamed loudly “
ahhhhhh……..ahhhhhh”. They both looked at her wondering what happen to her
suddenly and then laughed loudly seeing her frustrated face showing clearly
that how irritated she is. Shaan hold and brought her little above and gave her
a kiss on her cheeks “ motu, bahut badmaash ho gayi hai, hai na ?”
Shaan was still holding her above him, talking to her and
khanak by that time moved towards the washroom for freshen up and then after
she returned , she took khwaish from him and take her out of the room giving
shaan instruction to got up and come out as Jai must be awake and waiting for
them .
Jai was sitting outside at the sofa reading newspaper; he
smiled seeing khanak and khwaish
Jai : Gud morning Sweetie – pie
Khwaish beamed with joy seeing jai and immediately bend down
towards him as if asking him to take her in his arm and he obliged lovingly, kissed her forehead and cheeks “ Meri choti si
gudiya “
Khanak moved towards kitchen for making morning tea and coffee
for all and then they have their morning tea and coffee along with jai , shaan
and khwaish’s masti but khanak got up to
do her work quickly and the preparations for rakhi. As it was Rakhi so her maid
has also taken a leave and she had to do other household things too – cleaning
and dusting and washing the dishes.
After finishing up her work, She took a quick shower today, asking
shaan to give bath to khwaish today, as she had to do preparations for
breakfast, lunch and for rakhi too. Shaan
nodded her saying that he will do. She came out of the bathroom and moved
towards the dressing room for wearing her sea green color sari, having silver
lace and sequence at the border, she has kept it specially for some
occasion and today she was very excited
to wear it. As shaan and jai is at home so she is not worried for khwaish, ………..
she always had to think before wearing any heavy work sari that its sequence and
stones will hurt her little baby, so since last 10 month she generally avoid
wearing heavy work cloths and prefer something light or thread work clothes
which won’t hurt her little child. She looked gorgeous in it. She was combing
her hair when she looked through the mirror, that shaan is looking at her awestruck.
She smiled inwardly and started having Goosebumps all over her. shaan came
towards her and snacked her arms on her waist placing his chin above her
shoulders and gave a deep kiss on her neck .
Shaan : you look Gorgeous
Khanak : leave me
Shaan : why ? You are my legal wife; I have every right over
you
Khanak blushed profusely and turned around facing him and
curled her arms around his neck leaning her head on his chest.
Khanak : Leave me , khwaish will come and will again
screamed seeing us lost in our world
Shaan laughed loudly, “don’t worry! She is busy with her mama
and giving him company “
Khanak : Go outside before they came here..........Plsss
Shaan after giving her a scorching kiss on her lips moved
outside . she too came after getting
ready and started preparing breakfast
and does all the rakhi preparation so that
after having breakfast they can tie rakhi . She asked jai and shaan to
get ready by that time.
She prepared all the favorite dishes of jai – Cutlet, Aloo
poha , and halwa for breakfast.
Jai : khanak , if you keep making such dishes for me than I
will start searching my new job here and will come daily at your home for such
lovely food .
Shaan : Why you have to live in other house , you can live
here too
Jai : no thanks buddy , I don’t want to be an intruder in
your personal life and its better to leave separately before you guys yourself
ask me or kick me to go away .
Shaan hit him lovingly and they all laughed loudly, Jai was
holding khwaish and feeding her few bites of halwa, which she took happily and
also trying to hold few things from the table but they stopped her in time
taking it back from her hand , before she spread everything in floor or above jai.
They finished up there breakfast with full fun and masti and
khwaish too was giggling seeing them laughing, oblivious about the matter.
Khanak arranged rakhi in a silver plate having Krishnaji’s pose carved in it. It was given to her by shaan’s dadi , Dadi got that silver plate in her own marriage from her own Mother - in - law . She gifted it to khanak after Khwaish's birth.
Khanak arranged rakhi, roli, raw rice and a small glass for wetting roli to put ‘tika’ and a box of sweets. She came out of the pooja room towards the hall where the trio was enjoying and kept the thali on the centre table . Khwaish gets excited to see thali and immediately bend forward to hold the things from it but jai hold her in the middle taking her away from it “ nayi gudiya mumma maregi “
Khanak arranged rakhi, roli, raw rice and a small glass for wetting roli to put ‘tika’ and a box of sweets. She came out of the pooja room towards the hall where the trio was enjoying and kept the thali on the centre table . Khwaish gets excited to see thali and immediately bend forward to hold the things from it but jai hold her in the middle taking her away from it “ nayi gudiya mumma maregi “
Khwaish looked towards khanak with an innocent look as if
asking whether she will really scold him , khanak laughed seeing her cuteness
took her in her arms and kissed her cheeks lovingly “ aww, mera bacha , mumma
kaise maar sakti hai meri choti si pari ko , hai na ? mumma toh gudiya ko sirf
pyaari karti hai :*
Khwaish smiled getting the love from mumma and then khanak
gave her back to jai and she sat in front of him for tying him rakhi on his wrist.
She put roli first on his forehead and then spread raw rice above his head , Jai moved his
wrist in front and she tied rakhi on it. Khwaish was looking first to khanak
and then to jai wondering what’s happening and giving the cute confused
expression , Jai when saw her looking at him , he smiled and gave her a peck on
her hairs lovingly . shaan was sitting in another sofa and was looking the
bro-sis lovingly .
Khanak : Here it is your favourite sweet – Cake
Jai : Thank You so much sister. I know why you are doing all
this and buttering me since last night by making all my favourite dishes, but I
m sorry this time no gift but only cash ;)
Khanak : Hmph,all my hard work of two days wasted , you
should have told me earlier that you are giving cash this time , at least I wouldn’t
have spent so much of energy in preparing all those dishes
Jai and shaan laughed loudly at this
Jai : how mean of you ?
Khanak : everything is fair for rakhi gift
Jai holding her ears : Shaitan , le apna gift .
Khanak took a box of square shape covered with red velvet
cloth, she opened it gently and there it is the elegant bracelet with the
perfect matching of her sari’s color – sea green color with the diamonds embedded
in white gold .
Khanak opened her mouth in a perfect oval shape showing
clearly that how much she loved it. Jai became happy seeing the smile and the
expression of his only sister .
Khanak : jai , it’s so lovely and expensive too
Jai : you don’t have to worry for that , cant I give this much to my only sister.
Khanak hugged him for the wonderful gift “ You are the
bestest bro in the world
Jai hugged her back “ I know “
she took khwaish in her arms and placed her in her lap
sitting beside jai to make her tie rakhi too to jai .
Khanak : Gudiya bhi rakhi bandhegi na mama ko ?
Khanak took Khwaish’s
third finger and smeared it in roli and then she make her stand in her lap and
jai tilted forward so that the little girl can put tika over his forehead .
Everyone smiled seeing the confused
expression of khwaish as if wondering what these people are making her to do.
Khanak does everything again holding khwaish’s hand and then
tied rakhi above jai’s wrist. Jai put
his hand inside his pocket and take out the envelope containing Rs. 10000 and gave it to khwaish ,
which she took it immediately and then tried to open it wondering whats inside. After seeing it from every angle, She kept it on khanak’s lap and moved forward to hold khanak’s box, kept at the centre table, holding it
closer to her, everyone laughed at seeing her .
Jai : Gosh ! yeh toh pakki marwadi hai , kitni jaldi se
samjha isko ki jyada costly kya hai , aur dekho envelope rakh ke box utha liya
Khanak loved to tease and irritate khwaish too , so to play
along see tried to take it back from her hand with no force but just to
irritate and tease her child .
Khanak : nayi, yeh mera gift hai , aapka yeh hai , aap isse
rakho
Khwaish tried all her force to not let the box back to mumma
and after little play when she got frustrated she screamed loudly “ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………”
Everyone laughed loudly hearing her voice ad khanak immediately
left the box and hugged her lovingly
Khanak : aww, sweetie mumma ka sab aapka hi toh hai , jab
aap bade ho jaoge tab sab aapke hi toh kaam aayega na ….
Khanak kissed her
forehead lovingly and then she asked
shaan to tie rakhi by khwaish as he has no sister and ragini is out of India so
Khwaish will tie him rakhi this year . Shaan gets excited and happy that this
year his wrist won’t be empty and his daughter will tie him rakhi .
Khanak again took khwaish’s hand in her and started making
her doing all the rituals, shaan took khwaish in his lap and squeezed her
lovingly and kissed her forehead, everytime she finishes her one or other task
. Khanak became frustrated as khwaish too become busy in playing and giggling along with him, and it took almost 10 minutes to just putting tika over him
Khanak : Khwaish , Papa ko bol “ oh ho “ papa mujhe mera
kaam toh karne do , phir mein aapke saath hi khelungi
Khanak insited her many time to do ‘ oh ho ‘ to show jai, but khwaish was just not ready and showing any
interest . Khanak then gave up
Khanak : Badmaash
After completing the rituals, shaan take out his valet and
gave a Rs. 5000 note to khwaish which she took it immediately
Khanak : kitne kanjoos ho tum , kum se kum thoda toh aur de
dete
Shaan : dena kya , meri beti hai , sab ussi ka hai , yeh toh
bas ek shagun ke rupee diye hai maine
He bend down and kissed khwaish’s hair
Shaan : khwaish say ‘ oh ho ‘ to mumma
Khwaish immediately raised her palm and placed it on her forehead
surprising khanak to no end that when she was telling her to do so many times, she didn’t and shaan just said it once and she did it immediately .
Khanak became furious at them “ Hmph,……………tum dono ko mein
acche se batati hun ab ,………. aur yeh chutanki( to khwaish) , ……………tu ab aana nayi mere paas
, …………………jab bhi bhuk lagegi tab rahna papa paas aur unhi se sona , mein kuch
nayi karungi ab tum dono ka “
Shaan : Arey motu ,
jaldi se sorry bol de mumma ko , nayi toh tujhe toh kuch nayi but mujhe toh
khana bhi nayi milega aur mein toh tere jaise ro bhi nayi sakta ki mumma daya karke de degi .
Jai laughed loudly listening the convo
Jai : Hey you Papa-beti , Dare you both trouble my little sister
Khanak hugged jai lovingly " Thank you so much bro for taking my side , see how much these two creatures trouble me whole day "
Jai : Aww, dont worry , i am at your side.
Khanak smiled lovingly and hugged him again teasing Khwaish that she is sitting with her Mama , khwaish looked at them with innocent face and then after staring them for few seconds she raised her neck to look up to shaan , who gave a wide smile to her and bend down to kiss her forehead .
Shaan: Aww, my cutie-pie , mama is loving mumma and not my little baby. Okk, say sorry to mumma
Khwaish did it lovingly by giving a flying kiss to her very innocently. khanak smiled lovingly seeing her , took her in arms and kissed her lovingly. They spent their rest of the day chatting and doing masti , they didn’t went outside as they just wanted to sit and enjoy at home and not to visit any public places or to roam around the city.
Jai : Hey you Papa-beti , Dare you both trouble my little sister
Khanak hugged jai lovingly " Thank you so much bro for taking my side , see how much these two creatures trouble me whole day "
Jai : Aww, dont worry , i am at your side.
Khanak smiled lovingly and hugged him again teasing Khwaish that she is sitting with her Mama , khwaish looked at them with innocent face and then after staring them for few seconds she raised her neck to look up to shaan , who gave a wide smile to her and bend down to kiss her forehead .
Shaan: Aww, my cutie-pie , mama is loving mumma and not my little baby. Okk, say sorry to mumma
Khwaish did it lovingly by giving a flying kiss to her very innocently. khanak smiled lovingly seeing her , took her in arms and kissed her lovingly. They spent their rest of the day chatting and doing masti , they didn’t went outside as they just wanted to sit and enjoy at home and not to visit any public places or to roam around the city.
It was the time for jai to leave for Delhi , khanak again became emotional and jai hugged her tightly and kissed her
forehead . They bid their good byes and moved ahead to be back to their normal
routine .


Awesome update Suchi :) beautiful Write up :)
ReplyDeleteThis was amzingness ki hadh yaar, I just loved reading the part, & I am reading it again & again whenever I get time :) LOL since morning I tried thrice to write my comments but everytime felt ki comment mein time barbaad karne se behtar hain ek aur baar update padh lu. & This lalchipan caused late comments :P Sorry.
I just loved the way u have designed this little cutie pie. Her antics., Words, expressions, Nautankis are so cute & Adorable ki I always feel ki Is FF se usko bahar nikal ke apne pass rakh lu. She is ubber cute, she is an angle.
Loved loved loved loved loved this superb & Long part :) U really made Rakhi suoer special. This was written amazingly :) I can so feel the Love, care tease, masti of Bro-sis, Best buddies & Specialllyu Khwaish with Mama & Papa. Too too tooooooooooo Cutee :)
Morning sence was beautiful finally she woke up papa. Lmao @ hee sream between Mom papa’s talks :) she is such an attention seeker but kids are like that only. Majaal hain unke room mein hote huye hum kisi aur ko attention de de :P bawaal khada kar denge who :) Shanak morning Convo was treat to read So refreshing & Lovely.
Jay was ready early & was waiting for them Loved the moments Spend by Mama bhanji :) loved the way u have described t heir relation, I always get excited whenever there is jay’s entry :) Morning activities detailing of Khanaks routine & her saree wow I loved it :) beautifully described *claps*
Shanak romantic moment was awesome. Khanak wore heavy work saree after 10 months loved your detailing here Perfect :) Rakhi tying was cute & Very touchy :) khanak aragned everything in sliver palte given BY Dadi ……..LOL I remembered MRM shaan here, want to ask why not Madhavi, khushboo & she gave to khanak toh iska matlab madhavi didn’t have it. LOL u cant give same answer here like MRM. Naya answer de :P LOL kidding ;)
Loved your detailing over the every ritual of Rakhi :) Their Nok jhok over Rakhi gift was super cute & gift is gorgeous :) LOL frankly I kept looking at it For a while :P its awesome. WOW little angle also tied Rakhi to Mama & papa :) that was super cute & Khwaish picking up the Box was awesome :) LOL even I tease Nikki & Bhaiya ki Vrish pakka marwadi hain acchi cheese hi uthata hain :P U know when he was of 12 days naa tab use ghar laye the hospital se & samne wale jo bhaiya hain who first time vrish ko dekhane aaye along with their relative, toh unke relative ne use 100 rupees diye toh who aise hi the later bhabhi took it & side mein rakhe but jaise hi bhaiya ne 1000 ka note rakha is se pakad liye & we were laughing like crazy ki kya hain yeh & since that day I tesed vrish & bhabhi a lot. LOL main toh bolti hu he is Marwadi Gujarati ka combo is se paisa nikalwana matlab lohe ke chane chabana :P
Khwaish & Khanak moment was super cute. Mom teasing little pricess, Shaan & khwaish masti while campleteing rituals were awesome & Best was Oh ho sence. I so loved it :) Ruthana manana was awesome :) But why jay left so early :( ek do update rok leti toh kya jata tera amma :( Humph
Sorry bahot bada reply ho gaya with my phlatu talks ……….But update was fantastic :) Loved it ………..Muaaahhhhhhhh
Huggsss ……….Continue soon
Love you
Thank you so much for the reply pranjal :)
DeleteDont say sorry and dare you say it as ' Faltu '
Lol @ your curiosity that why dadi give it to khank and not khushboo - its because dadi gave it on khwaish's birth to khanak and not to khusboo because at the time of Aryan , she had already gave her Full Set , so she wanted to give this special plate to Khanak along with other gifts .
Lol, ya she is truly a marwadi aur kuch bhi kaho kahin na kahin woh dikha hi detein hai apni baniya giri ;).........lol, can you imagine a marwadi is saying all this to herslf :P ........hehehe
Huggss for liking it
Love You
Awesume update Suchi!!!!
ReplyDeleteyaar!! tu na cutie pie ko bhej kyu nahi dete mere ghar!!!
she is getting cuter day by day!!! aur jo tune morning ritual describe kiya tha that was so cute... khwasih kabse utnae ki koshish kar rhai thi shaan ko...:) awwee!! how cute it must be... i feel ki ispe koi movie ban jaye toh video dekhne mai kitna mazza ayega...
i feel blessed to be the part of khwasih!!!!:)))
wow!!! shanak ki shaitaniyan nahi khatam hoti...:P cutie pie ko competion dete hai mom dad...:)
the saree description was superb... i love sea green color.. and woh bracelet toh bohot beautiful tha...
aur sabse best was rakhi sequence... tune itna superb describe kiya pura ritual.... i mean just amazing.. am speechless...
and khwasih ne rakhi bandhi shaan aur jai ko... wow1!!
aur that "oh ho" wala was hillarious... kitni cute lagti hogi khwasih aise karte time... i just can't imagine... mere imagination se bhi zyada cute hai khwaish...:))))
i jsut loved this rakhi special... it was truely a very speacial one...
thank u so much ....
update next part soon...
Deepali
lol deeps , i know how much you want to meet Khwaish but i wish i could fulfill your wish :(
Deletelol, you seriously want t see a movie on her :O .........hehehe , go ahead and finance it , we will ask pranjal to do something on it by taking the help of her brother and Aryan's role would be played by Vrish ;) ........heheh, i hope pranjal mujhe maare na ab :P
lol @ " wow!!! shanak ki shaitaniyan nahi khatam hoti...:P cutie pie ko competion dete hai mom dad...:) " ................so cute , loved it ;)
i m glad that you like the rakhi special and i was able to stand somewhat at your expectations
'Oh ho " wala part is mine favourite too :D
Huggss for this cute comment :)
Love You
Super Adorable part !!!
ReplyDeleteRead it last night....Read it again today...
You have mentioned so cutely each and every act in detail that it seems that they are right in front of us.
Khwaish pats Shaan to wake him and that was really sweet an act. Naughty Khanak was aware and awake but she doesn't stop Khwaish.....lol...Shaan's irritation was justified :)))
The Rakhi tying part along with teasings was so cute !! Khwaish is the central heroine and everything rotates around her !!
The Gift Jai gave to Khanak was nice. Baeutiful pic you have added to make it clear for readers...
Very nice......Loved it !!!
Keep writing more :)))))
Sorry for short comment. Am stuck in something so can't write more abhi :(
Deletewill compensate next time..........pakka :))
its okk , dont say sorry :)
ReplyDeleteloved that you read and commented too
super cute it was
Thank you so much :))))
Sorry for spamming but I came here hoping for an update :)))))
ReplyDeleteSo......next update kab milega ???
lol, would love if anyone would spam here :P
Deletewill try to update pretty soon :))
Wonderful part Suchi:)
ReplyDeleteLoved how Khwaish was trying to wake Shan up and Khanak was pretending that she was asleep.....cutie pie doesn't have any idea what weekend is :P......Shan and Khanak's fighting always a treat to cherish :)
Khwaish's activities were described amazingly that I could visualize them....and it felt so real too:)
Rakhi part, the gift Jai gave to Khanak and Khwaish, how the little one was trying to possess Khanak's one, and how Khanak was teasing her daughter loved them to the bits...
Please continue soon:))
Love,
Cherry
PS: Thanks Deep for wonderful siggie <3 <3........sorry Suchi for my late reply:(
Deletethank you di for reading and for the wonderful reply :))
Deletelol, ya cutie - pie don't know what is weekend and what is weekdays but she only knows to get up early and spent beautiful time with her papa , before he leaves for his office.
shanak always had to fight for everything, and as deepali said they gives competition to khwaish in their cuteness
thanks a lot for liking ' Khwaish's activity and to know that you guys found her activity real makes me so happy :D
lol, khanak and khwaish's fight for gift is my favorite part too in this update :P
huggs and love :*
Hello read all parts..wonderful story loved it..Khwaish is so cute.
ReplyDeletewaiting for next part..
hey pooja
Deletethank you sooooo much for reading and replying back here that you liked this story :))))
and thank you again for liking and finding khwaish cute.
will try to update soon :))
Thanks again for the reply
love
SPAMMING FOR UPDATE :))))))
ReplyDeleteMay I please know when can we expect an update here ????????????????
Suchiiii diiiiiii,
Please write ..........it's over a month !!!!
Haww..... App mujhe 'diii' kyun bol rahe ho ? ? ? ?
ReplyDeleteLol. ......, I have forgotten about it :p
thanks to my gmail , where i got emails of comments in my blog , nayi toh mein dekh he nai pati thi :|
ummm.... About update :| , pata nayi kab dungi ya phir kabhi likhungi bhi ya nai ;)
anyways thanks all for making me write and reading and commenting on my stupidity :D
love u all
Hiiiii Suchi :)
ReplyDeletethank God u opened this blog
i m really sorry i read all updates in one go last month but couldn't comment
where to start with Khwaish, she is a darling of shanak mine sweety pie
i love all updates from the start
every action of hers is very sweetly penned i have no words n m speechless yaar where to start
loved the bonding of khwaish with Jay her sweet mama
loved her little baby fight with Khushboo's son
i m feeling very bad for him his parents are busy n they don't time for him
khwaish antics with khanak n shaan is amazing the way she woke her dad in the morning and let her mom sleep as she takes care of her at night
i loved that
khwaish saabki khwaish i loved her so much
when shaan touch her she wake up and khanak start scording shaan it is very sweet
khwaishi love her naughtiness when she was at her nani's house, she splash water all over her room and same same action she did with khanak lolzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was like watching doing all
shanak ki khwaish, cute si khwaish
loved the way she played with his dad before he leave for work
Suchi m love this tale its awesome :)
please do continue soon
waiting for it for long time
hey heer
ReplyDeletethanks for d wonderful reply and loving my cutie-pie , KHWAISH
will update soon
sorry for blocking d blog
cant type much from mobile but m glad to know that u read and liked it
take care