Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Khwaish Part 20



( thank you so much deeps for the lovely siggy)


Next day as usual cutie-pie woke up early and sat beside shaan patting his chest to woke him up since last 10 minutes but he was still sleeping, without showing any  interest to woke up . she moved little upward and then lean down  on him  and placed her head above his chest and  lied down there leaning over him , he still didn’t moved and she became tired to wake him up , so she then started patting his cheeks , chanting “ papa ………papa “

Shaan opened his eyes lazily wondering what’s happening around and there she is in front of him showing her little teeth signifying that how happy she is to at last succeed in waking up  her father after doing the tedious job since last 30 minutes. As they slept very late at night, he was just not interested to woke up but his little daughter had made him awake and he knows that now he has no option other than to woke up and play with her.

Shaan( taking khwaish above him) : motu , itni jaldi kyun uth jata hai roj ? tera weekend kyun nayi hota ? roj subah subah papa ko utha deti hai , badmaash

Khanak : motu pichale aadhi  ghante se utha hua hai aur tabse tumhe utha rahi hai

Shaan moved his neck to see khanak ,” how do you know ?”

Khanak : I was awake and was looking her acts, first thing she did  is to pat you for waking up and you are sleeping so peacefully. Poor girl had a tough time

Shaan : if you were awake then why didn’t you entertain  her and give her company or why didn’t you take her to jai , he must have woke up ?

Khanak : I was feeling too lazy to woke up and take her to jai and why should I ? She wanted to play with you, so I was just watching her antiques  and it was so hilarious , she was continuously patting you here and there but all in vain and at last she patted your cheeks with full force and there you are .

Khanak was laughing loudly while explaining her naughty daughter’s acts to woke up her dad  and shaan was embarrassed hearing them, he turned his neck “ Youuuu , stop laughing now , you will get nice punishment for it and  laughing at your husband ? Didn’t anyone taught you to respect your hubby and not to laugh at him.

Khanak : Aww, is it ? Tch , why didn’t anyone has taught me this till date , neither  ma nor your mom , taught me to not to laugh at poor hubby ,

She giggled more and khwaish was just looking towards them wondering whats the issue now, and  as usual she was looking to them sitting silently above shaan waiting for them to finish up their issue and get free to give her some attention. But they were busy in their own teasing and accusing each other digging out all the previous solved cases again , and then hearing them enough khwaish at last screamed loudly “ ahhhhhh……..ahhhhhh”. They both looked at her wondering what happen to her suddenly and then laughed loudly seeing her frustrated face showing clearly that how irritated she is. Shaan hold and brought her little above and gave her a kiss on her cheeks “ motu, bahut badmaash ho gayi hai, hai  na ?”

Shaan was still holding her above him, talking to her and khanak by that time moved towards the washroom for freshen up and then after she returned , she took khwaish from him and take her out of the room giving shaan instruction to got up and come out as Jai must be awake and waiting for them .

Jai was sitting outside at the sofa reading newspaper; he smiled seeing khanak and khwaish

Jai : Gud morning Sweetie – pie

Khwaish beamed with joy seeing jai and immediately bend down towards him as if asking him to take her in his arm and he obliged lovingly,  kissed her forehead and cheeks “ Meri choti si gudiya “
Khanak moved towards kitchen for making morning tea and coffee for all and then they have their morning tea and coffee along with jai , shaan and khwaish’s masti  but khanak got up to do her work quickly and the preparations for rakhi. As it was Rakhi so her maid has also taken a leave and she had to do other household things too – cleaning and dusting and washing the dishes.

After finishing up her work, She took a quick shower today, asking shaan to give bath to khwaish today, as she had to do preparations for breakfast, lunch and for rakhi too.  Shaan nodded her saying that he will do. She came out of the bathroom and moved towards the dressing room for wearing her sea green color sari, having silver lace and sequence at the border, she has kept it specially for some occasion  and today she was very excited to wear it. As shaan and jai is at home so she is not worried for khwaish, ……….. she always had to think before wearing any heavy work sari that its sequence and stones will hurt her little baby, so since last 10 month she generally avoid wearing heavy work cloths and prefer something light or thread work clothes which won’t hurt her little child. She looked gorgeous in it. She was combing her hair when she looked through the mirror, that shaan is looking at her awestruck. She smiled inwardly and started having Goosebumps all over her. shaan came towards her and snacked her arms on her waist placing his chin above her shoulders and gave a deep kiss on her neck .

Shaan : you look Gorgeous 

Khanak : leave me

Shaan : why ? You are my legal wife; I have every right over you

Khanak blushed profusely and turned around facing him and curled her arms around his neck leaning her head on his chest.

Khanak : Leave me , khwaish will come and will again screamed seeing us lost in our world

Shaan laughed loudly, “don’t worry! She is busy with her mama and giving him company “

Khanak : Go outside before they came here..........Plsss

Shaan after giving her a scorching kiss on her lips moved outside .  she too came after getting ready  and started preparing breakfast and does all the rakhi preparation so that  after having breakfast they can tie rakhi . She asked jai and shaan to get ready by that time.

She prepared all the favorite dishes of jai – Cutlet, Aloo poha , and halwa  for breakfast.

Jai : khanak , if you keep making such dishes for me than I will start searching my new job here and will come daily at your home for such lovely food .

Shaan : Why you have to live in other house , you can live here too

Jai : no thanks buddy , I don’t want to be an intruder in your personal life and its better to leave separately before you guys yourself ask me  or kick me to go away .

Shaan hit him lovingly and they all laughed loudly, Jai was holding khwaish and feeding her few bites of halwa, which she took happily and also trying to hold few things from the table but they stopped her in time taking it back from her hand , before she spread everything in floor  or above jai.

They finished up there breakfast with full fun and masti and khwaish too was giggling seeing them laughing, oblivious about the matter.

Khanak arranged rakhi  in a silver plate having  Krishnaji’s pose  carved in it. It was given to her  by shaan’s dadi , Dadi got that silver plate in her own marriage from her own Mother - in - law . She gifted it to khanak after Khwaish's birth.

Khanak  arranged rakhi, roli, raw rice and a small glass for wetting roli to put ‘tika’  and a box of sweets.  She came out of the pooja room towards the hall where the trio was enjoying and kept the thali on the centre table . Khwaish gets excited to see thali and immediately bend forward to hold the things from it but jai hold her in the middle taking her away from it “ nayi gudiya mumma maregi “

Khwaish looked towards khanak with an innocent look as if asking whether she will really scold him , khanak laughed seeing her cuteness took her in her arms and kissed her cheeks lovingly “ aww, mera bacha , mumma kaise maar sakti hai meri choti si pari ko , hai na ? mumma toh gudiya ko sirf pyaari karti hai :*

Khwaish smiled getting the love from mumma and then khanak gave her back to jai and she sat in front of him for tying him rakhi on his wrist. She put roli first on his forehead and then spread raw rice above his head , Jai moved his wrist in front and she tied rakhi on it. Khwaish was looking first to khanak and then to jai wondering what’s happening and giving the cute confused expression , Jai when saw her looking at him , he smiled and gave her a peck on her hairs lovingly . shaan was sitting in another sofa and was looking the bro-sis lovingly .

Khanak : Here it is your favourite sweet – Cake

Jai : Thank You so much sister. I know why you are doing all this and buttering me since last night by making all my favourite dishes, but I m sorry this time no gift but only cash ;)

Khanak : Hmph,all my hard work of two days wasted , you should have told me earlier that you are giving cash this time , at least I wouldn’t have spent so much of energy in preparing all those dishes

Jai and shaan laughed loudly at this

Jai : how mean of you ?

Khanak : everything is fair for rakhi gift

Jai holding her ears : Shaitan , le apna gift .

Khanak took a box of square shape covered with red velvet cloth, she opened it gently and there it is the elegant bracelet with the perfect matching of her sari’s color – sea green color with the diamonds embedded in white gold .

14K White Gold Emerald & Diamond Ring
Khanak opened her mouth in a perfect oval shape showing clearly that how much she loved it. Jai became happy seeing the smile and the expression of his only sister .

Khanak : jai , it’s so lovely and expensive too

Jai : you don’t have to worry for that , cant I  give this much to my only sister.

Khanak hugged him for the wonderful gift “ You are the bestest bro in the world

Jai hugged her back “ I know “

she took khwaish in her arms and placed her in her lap sitting beside jai to make her tie rakhi too to jai .

Khanak : Gudiya bhi rakhi bandhegi na mama ko ?

Khanak took  Khwaish’s third finger and smeared it in roli and then she make her stand in her lap and jai tilted forward so that the little girl can put tika over his forehead . Everyone smiled seeing  the confused expression of khwaish as if  wondering what these people are making her to do.

Khanak does everything again holding khwaish’s hand and then tied rakhi above jai’s wrist.  Jai put his hand inside his pocket and take out the envelope containing Rs. 10000 and gave it to khwaish , which she took it immediately and then tried to open it wondering whats inside. After seeing it from every angle, She kept it on khanak’s lap and moved forward to hold khanak’s box, kept at the centre table, holding it closer to her, everyone laughed at seeing her .

Jai : Gosh ! yeh toh pakki marwadi hai , kitni jaldi se samjha isko ki jyada costly kya hai , aur dekho envelope rakh ke box utha liya  

Khanak loved to tease and irritate khwaish too , so to play along see tried to take it back from her hand with no force but just to irritate and tease her child .

Khanak : nayi, yeh mera gift hai , aapka yeh hai , aap isse rakho

Khwaish tried all her force to not let the box back to mumma and after little play when she got frustrated she screamed loudly “ ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………”

Everyone laughed loudly hearing her voice ad khanak immediately left the box and hugged her lovingly

Khanak : aww, sweetie mumma ka sab aapka hi toh hai , jab aap bade ho jaoge tab sab aapke hi toh kaam aayega na ….

Khanak  kissed her forehead lovingly  and then she asked shaan to tie rakhi by khwaish as he has no sister and ragini is out of India so Khwaish will tie him rakhi this year . Shaan gets excited and happy that this year his wrist won’t be empty and his daughter will tie him rakhi .

Khanak again took khwaish’s hand in her and started making her doing all the rituals, shaan took khwaish in his lap and squeezed her lovingly and kissed her forehead, everytime she finishes her one or other task . Khanak became frustrated as khwaish too become busy in playing and giggling along with him,  and it took almost 10 minutes to just putting tika over him

Khanak : Khwaish , Papa ko bol “ oh ho “ papa mujhe mera kaam toh karne do , phir mein aapke saath hi khelungi

Khanak insited her many time to do ‘ oh ho ‘ to show jai, but khwaish was just not ready and showing any interest . Khanak then gave up

Khanak : Badmaash

After completing the rituals, shaan take out his valet and gave a Rs. 5000 note to khwaish which she took it immediately

Khanak : kitne kanjoos ho tum , kum se kum thoda toh aur de dete

Shaan : dena kya , meri beti hai , sab ussi ka hai , yeh toh bas ek shagun ke rupee diye hai maine

He bend down and kissed khwaish’s hair

Shaan : khwaish say ‘ oh ho ‘ to mumma

Khwaish immediately  raised her palm and placed it on her forehead surprising khanak to no end that when she was telling her to do so many times, she didn’t and shaan just said it once and she did  it immediately .

Khanak became furious at them “ Hmph,……………tum dono ko mein acche se batati hun ab ,………. aur yeh chutanki( to khwaish) , ……………tu ab aana nayi mere paas , …………………jab bhi bhuk lagegi tab rahna papa paas aur unhi se sona , mein kuch nayi karungi ab tum dono ka “

Shaan : Arey  motu , jaldi se sorry bol de mumma ko , nayi toh tujhe toh kuch nayi but mujhe toh khana bhi nayi milega aur mein toh tere jaise ro bhi nayi sakta ki mumma  daya karke de degi .

Jai laughed loudly listening the convo 

Jai : Hey you Papa-beti , Dare you both trouble my little sister 

Khanak hugged jai lovingly " Thank you so much bro for taking my side , see how much these two creatures trouble me whole day "

Jai : Aww, dont worry , i am at your side.

Khanak smiled lovingly and hugged him again teasing Khwaish that she is sitting with her Mama , khwaish looked at them with innocent face and then after staring them for few seconds she raised her neck to look up to shaan , who gave a wide smile to her and bend down to kiss her forehead .

Shaan: Aww, my cutie-pie , mama is loving mumma and not my little baby. Okk, say sorry to mumma 

Khwaish did  it lovingly by giving a flying kiss to her very innocently. khanak  smiled lovingly seeing her , took her in arms and kissed her lovingly. They spent their rest of the day chatting and doing masti , they didn’t went outside as they  just wanted to sit and enjoy at home and not to visit any public places or to roam around the city.

It was the time for jai to leave for Delhi , khanak  again became emotional  and jai hugged her tightly and kissed her forehead . They bid their good byes and moved ahead to be back to their normal routine .


18 comments:

  1. Awesome update Suchi :) beautiful Write up :)

    This was amzingness ki hadh yaar, I just loved reading the part, & I am reading it again & again whenever I get time :) LOL since morning I tried thrice to write my comments but everytime felt ki comment mein time barbaad karne se behtar hain ek aur baar update padh lu. & This lalchipan caused late comments :P Sorry.

    I just loved the way u have designed this little cutie pie. Her antics., Words, expressions, Nautankis are so cute & Adorable ki I always feel ki Is FF se usko bahar nikal ke apne pass rakh lu. She is ubber cute, she is an angle.

    Loved loved loved loved loved this superb & Long part :) U really made Rakhi suoer special. This was written amazingly :) I can so feel the Love, care tease, masti of Bro-sis, Best buddies & Specialllyu Khwaish with Mama & Papa. Too too tooooooooooo Cutee :)

    Morning sence was beautiful finally she woke up papa. Lmao @ hee sream between Mom papa’s talks :) she is such an attention seeker but kids are like that only. Majaal hain unke room mein hote huye hum kisi aur ko attention de de :P bawaal khada kar denge who :) Shanak morning Convo was treat to read So refreshing & Lovely.

    Jay was ready early & was waiting for them Loved the moments Spend by Mama bhanji :) loved the way u have described t heir relation, I always get excited whenever there is jay’s entry :) Morning activities detailing of Khanaks routine & her saree wow I loved it :) beautifully described *claps*

    Shanak romantic moment was awesome. Khanak wore heavy work saree after 10 months loved your detailing here Perfect :) Rakhi tying was cute & Very touchy :) khanak aragned everything in sliver palte given BY Dadi ……..LOL I remembered MRM shaan here, want to ask why not Madhavi, khushboo & she gave to khanak toh iska matlab madhavi didn’t have it. LOL u cant give same answer here like MRM. Naya answer de :P LOL kidding ;)

    Loved your detailing over the every ritual of Rakhi :) Their Nok jhok over Rakhi gift was super cute & gift is gorgeous :) LOL frankly I kept looking at it For a while :P its awesome. WOW little angle also tied Rakhi to Mama & papa :) that was super cute & Khwaish picking up the Box was awesome :) LOL even I tease Nikki & Bhaiya ki Vrish pakka marwadi hain acchi cheese hi uthata hain :P U know when he was of 12 days naa tab use ghar laye the hospital se & samne wale jo bhaiya hain who first time vrish ko dekhane aaye along with their relative, toh unke relative ne use 100 rupees diye toh who aise hi the later bhabhi took it & side mein rakhe but jaise hi bhaiya ne 1000 ka note rakha is se pakad liye & we were laughing like crazy ki kya hain yeh & since that day I tesed vrish & bhabhi a lot. LOL main toh bolti hu he is Marwadi Gujarati ka combo is se paisa nikalwana matlab lohe ke chane chabana :P

    Khwaish & Khanak moment was super cute. Mom teasing little pricess, Shaan & khwaish masti while campleteing rituals were awesome & Best was Oh ho sence. I so loved it :) Ruthana manana was awesome :) But why jay left so early :( ek do update rok leti toh kya jata tera amma :( Humph

    Sorry bahot bada reply ho gaya with my phlatu talks ……….But update was fantastic :) Loved it ………..Muaaahhhhhhhh

    Huggsss ……….Continue soon

    Love you

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    1. Thank you so much for the reply pranjal :)
      Dont say sorry and dare you say it as ' Faltu '

      Lol @ your curiosity that why dadi give it to khank and not khushboo - its because dadi gave it on khwaish's birth to khanak and not to khusboo because at the time of Aryan , she had already gave her Full Set , so she wanted to give this special plate to Khanak along with other gifts .

      Lol, ya she is truly a marwadi aur kuch bhi kaho kahin na kahin woh dikha hi detein hai apni baniya giri ;).........lol, can you imagine a marwadi is saying all this to herslf :P ........hehehe

      Huggss for liking it

      Love You

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  2. Awesume update Suchi!!!!
    yaar!! tu na cutie pie ko bhej kyu nahi dete mere ghar!!!

    she is getting cuter day by day!!! aur jo tune morning ritual describe kiya tha that was so cute... khwasih kabse utnae ki koshish kar rhai thi shaan ko...:) awwee!! how cute it must be... i feel ki ispe koi movie ban jaye toh video dekhne mai kitna mazza ayega...
    i feel blessed to be the part of khwasih!!!!:)))

    wow!!! shanak ki shaitaniyan nahi khatam hoti...:P cutie pie ko competion dete hai mom dad...:)

    the saree description was superb... i love sea green color.. and woh bracelet toh bohot beautiful tha...

    aur sabse best was rakhi sequence... tune itna superb describe kiya pura ritual.... i mean just amazing.. am speechless...
    and khwasih ne rakhi bandhi shaan aur jai ko... wow1!!

    aur that "oh ho" wala was hillarious... kitni cute lagti hogi khwasih aise karte time... i just can't imagine... mere imagination se bhi zyada cute hai khwaish...:))))

    i jsut loved this rakhi special... it was truely a very speacial one...

    thank u so much ....
    update next part soon...

    Deepali

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    1. lol deeps , i know how much you want to meet Khwaish but i wish i could fulfill your wish :(

      lol, you seriously want t see a movie on her :O .........hehehe , go ahead and finance it , we will ask pranjal to do something on it by taking the help of her brother and Aryan's role would be played by Vrish ;) ........heheh, i hope pranjal mujhe maare na ab :P

      lol @ " wow!!! shanak ki shaitaniyan nahi khatam hoti...:P cutie pie ko competion dete hai mom dad...:) " ................so cute , loved it ;)

      i m glad that you like the rakhi special and i was able to stand somewhat at your expectations

      'Oh ho " wala part is mine favourite too :D

      Huggss for this cute comment :)

      Love You

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  3. Super Adorable part !!!

    Read it last night....Read it again today...

    You have mentioned so cutely each and every act in detail that it seems that they are right in front of us.
    Khwaish pats Shaan to wake him and that was really sweet an act. Naughty Khanak was aware and awake but she doesn't stop Khwaish.....lol...Shaan's irritation was justified :)))

    The Rakhi tying part along with teasings was so cute !! Khwaish is the central heroine and everything rotates around her !!

    The Gift Jai gave to Khanak was nice. Baeutiful pic you have added to make it clear for readers...

    Very nice......Loved it !!!
    Keep writing more :)))))

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    1. Sorry for short comment. Am stuck in something so can't write more abhi :(
      will compensate next time..........pakka :))

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  4. its okk , dont say sorry :)

    loved that you read and commented too

    super cute it was

    Thank you so much :))))

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  5. Sorry for spamming but I came here hoping for an update :)))))

    So......next update kab milega ???

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    1. lol, would love if anyone would spam here :P

      will try to update pretty soon :))

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  6. Wonderful part Suchi:)

    Loved how Khwaish was trying to wake Shan up and Khanak was pretending that she was asleep.....cutie pie doesn't have any idea what weekend is :P......Shan and Khanak's fighting always a treat to cherish :)

    Khwaish's activities were described amazingly that I could visualize them....and it felt so real too:)

    Rakhi part, the gift Jai gave to Khanak and Khwaish, how the little one was trying to possess Khanak's one, and how Khanak was teasing her daughter loved them to the bits...

    Please continue soon:))

    Love,

    Cherry

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    1. PS: Thanks Deep for wonderful siggie <3 <3........sorry Suchi for my late reply:(

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    2. thank you di for reading and for the wonderful reply :))

      lol, ya cutie - pie don't know what is weekend and what is weekdays but she only knows to get up early and spent beautiful time with her papa , before he leaves for his office.

      shanak always had to fight for everything, and as deepali said they gives competition to khwaish in their cuteness

      thanks a lot for liking ' Khwaish's activity and to know that you guys found her activity real makes me so happy :D

      lol, khanak and khwaish's fight for gift is my favorite part too in this update :P

      huggs and love :*

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  7. Hello read all parts..wonderful story loved it..Khwaish is so cute.
    waiting for next part..

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    1. hey pooja

      thank you sooooo much for reading and replying back here that you liked this story :))))

      and thank you again for liking and finding khwaish cute.

      will try to update soon :))

      Thanks again for the reply

      love

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  8. SPAMMING FOR UPDATE :))))))

    May I please know when can we expect an update here ????????????????

    Suchiiii diiiiiii,

    Please write ..........it's over a month !!!!

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  9. Haww..... App mujhe 'diii' kyun bol rahe ho ? ? ? ?

    Lol. ......, I have forgotten about it :p
    thanks to my gmail , where i got emails of comments in my blog , nayi toh mein dekh he nai pati thi :|

    ummm.... About update :| , pata nayi kab dungi ya phir kabhi likhungi bhi ya nai ;)

    anyways thanks all for making me write and reading and commenting on my stupidity :D

    love u all

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  10. Hiiiii Suchi :)
    thank God u opened this blog
    i m really sorry i read all updates in one go last month but couldn't comment
    where to start with Khwaish, she is a darling of shanak mine sweety pie
    i love all updates from the start
    every action of hers is very sweetly penned i have no words n m speechless yaar where to start
    loved the bonding of khwaish with Jay her sweet mama
    loved her little baby fight with Khushboo's son
    i m feeling very bad for him his parents are busy n they don't time for him
    khwaish antics with khanak n shaan is amazing the way she woke her dad in the morning and let her mom sleep as she takes care of her at night
    i loved that
    khwaish saabki khwaish i loved her so much
    when shaan touch her she wake up and khanak start scording shaan it is very sweet
    khwaishi love her naughtiness when she was at her nani's house, she splash water all over her room and same same action she did with khanak lolzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was like watching doing all
    shanak ki khwaish, cute si khwaish
    loved the way she played with his dad before he leave for work
    Suchi m love this tale its awesome :)
    please do continue soon
    waiting for it for long time

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  11. hey heer

    thanks for d wonderful reply and loving my cutie-pie , KHWAISH

    will update soon

    sorry for blocking d blog

    cant type much from mobile but m glad to know that u read and liked it

    take care

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