Shaan : cant you open it fastly ?
Khanak : You do one thing , before entering the building , give me a call then i will keep it opened for you till that time , everyday ..............
Shaan entered inside nodding hopelessly and gave her his laptop bag to keep it aside and went to sit at couch streching his legs on the centre table and rest his head on the back of the couch . khanak came from kitchen with a glass of water and kept it on the centre table . She sit beside him and kept her hand on his forehead caressing it lightly...
Khanak : Headache ??
Shaan : hmm........... Where is khwaish ??
Khanak : she went with Parul (Aarush's mom )
Shaan looked towards her while she was pressing his forehead and gave her a little smile . She looked at him with worried look , as if worried for him .
Khanak : How is it now ? Can i do something more ?
Shaan ( with a naughty smile and rolling his tongue inside cheek ) : ya , actually you can do a lot
Khanak ( little confused , raised her eyebrows ) : what ??
Shaan leaned towards her and dragged her towards him, placed her on his lap ,................................... khanak understood his intentions and blushed profusly
Shaan kept looking at her and her changing expressions and waited for her to look at him , after few seconds when she saw him doing nothing but looking at her with a naughty smile , she whacked his arm and hugged him tightly , he respond back , carssing her back......
Shaan : Gosh ! when will you stop being so shy , even after so many years of our marriage , but you are still the same , become so shy as if i am touching you first time
Khanak : You knew it already , then why you have to ask everytime .
shaan started rubbing his nose with her ears , sending sensational feeling to her , making her go week in her knees and she tighten her grip on him and raised her hand to caresed his hair . he started kissing her neck and shoulders , she clutched his hair and moaned when he deepened his kiss on her collar bone and then he moves towards her cheeks , temple, forehead , eyes , nose and then lips sooth each other, kissing each other mindlessly ..............she was busy in untying his tie knot and his hand was travelling all over her body parts , which added fuel to their feeling , their romantic trance was broken hearing the door bell , they moved away quickly to respond the intruder , shaan moved towards the bedroom.
Shaan went to have a quick shower and entered the washroom ,after taking the towel from the cubboard
and khanak quickly straighten her hair and jeans top and moved towards the door . There she saw her little doll smiling widely after seeing her mom and raised her both arms as if asking her to take me quickly , Please............Khanak smiled and hold her and gave a kiss on her soft cheek and hugged her tightly
Khanak : Aaa gaya mera bamaash bachaa .................. masi ko jyada tang toh nayi kiya ??
Parul (smiled, caresed khwaish's back) : arrey nayi , bilkul bhi nayi ki
Khanak : Dono( Aarush and Khwaish) ne jyada jhagda toh nayi kiya ??
Parul : nayi , aarush toh tha hi nayi , mein usko yahan se leke gayi , but neeche sab bachee khel rahe the toh woh bhi gaya , aur phir maine aur khwaish ne khub masti ki .
Khwaish chirped quickly showing her ecstasy......making both the ladies smiled too
Parul : arrey , kabse bas ' pa pa pa ' bol rahi hai , toh phir mein usse wapis leke aa gayi
Khanak : haan , uske papa ka time hai na aane ka , toh iss badmaash ko pata hai , ek din bhi agar shaan ko late hua office se aane mein toh phir toh bas , pura ghar sir pe utha leti hai , phir jab tak uske papa isse baat nayi karte , shaant he nayi hoti
Parul ( smiling ) : oh ok , ............. mujhe laga pata nayi kya ho gaya isse , jo aise kar rahi hai .....................kitna samajhta hai par isko, My God !
Khanak ( squeezing khwaish ) : haan , yeh papa- beti ka kya connection hai , yehi dono jaane , rah hi nayi sakte alag bilkul , mujhse jyada toh isse miss karte the , when i was in Delhi
Parul laughed and then raised her eyebrows towards her collar bone ............ : ya, i can see that .................... waise , i think its good na , that today i took her with me for some time , but i think i brought her at wrong time ,...................... tch , i m so sorry *wink*
Khanak 's cheeks become red and she looked away hidding her blush .......
Parul smiled and then wishpered : Bye, have a nice time
Khanak smiled too and they said their bye . Khwaish again started chanting and raised her one hand showing way towards their room " pa pa pa pa "
Khanak : Beta , papa bathroom mein hai , abhi aap mumma ke saath chalo , apan papa ke liye coffee banate hai , phir chalenge , hai na ?
Khwaish was looking towards her , giving her cute expression's as if trying to understand her mumma's words
Khanak came to kitchen , holding khwaish in her arms and placed pan above Gas for boiling milk , she opened fridge to take out milk, but it was kept behind other bowls , she placed khwaish on the floor , so that she can take out the milk .
Khawaish quickly turned back as soon as khanak kept her on floor and crawled fastly towards their room and as soon as she entered the room at the same time shaan too came out and saw her little angel coming inside the room , he smiled broadly and went ahead to pick her up from floor and take her in his arms, kissed her cheeks and then hugged her tightly .
Shaan : Kahan tha mera baby ?? Papa kitna miss kiye aapko , hmm ?
Khwaish just leaned over him, wrapping her little hand around him and keeping her head over his shoulder .
Shaan was caressing her back lovingly and keep talking to her
Khanak heared their sound and turned back to see khwaish , as she gets busy in making coffee , she didnt find her , nodded her head hopelessly .................she moved towards the room too taking his coffee and some snacks .
Khanak : baba re , bilkul sabar nayi hai isme , jaise he maine isse choda turant bhag ke aa gayi yahan , aur parul bhi bol rahi thi ki kab se bas ' pa pa pa ' ki rat laga ke rakhi thi .....
Shaan smiled lovingly caresing his little cutie-pie and khwaish giggled hearing her mumma's accusition .
Khanak gave him coffee and pulled khwaish's cheek lovingly " Bamaash baby " .
Super Duper cute Update Suchi :)))
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Description with awesome write up !!! loved it totally. after a damn tiring day Khwaish came out to be a refreshing Treat for me :)
WOW Shaan & Khwaish together. cant even tell you how much i was missing Shaan & Khwaish together. but you granted our Wish today :D thank you :))) Khwaish & uske Papa cutest pair. loved the magic you create with this Baap beti. loved her Pa pa pa pa chanting a lot. babies asie hi cutie pie hote hain sach much. they wait for papa for lovingly. mera toh nazar utarne ka maan karta hain jab bhi main Vrish ko bhaiya ke liye wait karte dekhti hu toh :))
Sorry i was So happy abt Shaan & khwaish that i forgot to write about the First half of the Update :) Sorry. Loved the start. Shaan was too tired when he came home but getting golden opportunity to spend a quality time with Wifey ;) how can he leave the chance ...... ;) ;) headache hus chu mantar & janab started Romancing with Wifey. Loved it. loved Shanak totally :))he dialogue remind me of Trespro ...."Gosh ! when will you stop being so shy" perfect TP ♥ loved the whole detailing of their intimate moment ♥ total blush worthy ;) Shaan is sper naughty :))
Parul's Entry Seprate our love birds :P LOved the way Parul tease Khanak :)) Loved this new character. Khwaish came home just for papa & when khanak took her to kitchen so that shaan can get freshen up but khwaish was too quick & reached Badroom ♥ you know this reminds me of my cutie pie. whenever we used to tell him his dad is in wash room....My poor baby used to sit outside & bang door continuously. poor bhaiya have to came out quickly :P :P
Loved the moment Spend bt Shaan & his gudiya together :) Super cute yaar. loved the way khanak chided her & Khwaish reaction was tohhh ....Mashallah ♥
Loved the part totally Suchi :*
Huggsss .......Continue soon
Love you
Pranjal.
thanks a lot for the lovely comment pranjal
Deletei m gladthat you liked their romance , lol .........i m so poor in describing the details
ya , cutie pie is so impateitent and especially when it come to her father , if he is at home then she just want to be with him at every waking minutes
will write more soon
thanks again
thank u suchi for dhamaka diwali with out cutie pie:)
ReplyDeletefabulous update i love it to the core i had read many times at night
and still couldn't get enought of it
u have penned khanak's house hold work very realistic i loved it to the core :) and all moments all shanak n Khwaish :D
her folding of clothes when her cutie was not with her was like i m watching her on screen
bell rang and woh bhi continuously patience khanak ka love patience lolzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thora sabra karo tumari sweetheart jaldi darwaza kholegi heheheehh
she opened the door knowing who was at the door, shaan entry and direct can't u open the door fast heheheheheeh!!!!!!!!!!! loved khanak's reply yeah he should have inform her he is coming then khanak would open the door before he knocked like in baghbaan rofl!!!!!!!!!!
beautifull written khanak's way to make her husband feel good after work
and asked him headache i was ayeeee!!!!!!!! hayeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! i saw its romantic in that rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!
shaan missing his cutie pie asking for her and khanak pressing his forehead to get him relief from his headache, how worried she was looking at him tired and said she is with Parul but shaan is shaan never miss to give naughty smirk to his wife heheheheheh!!!!!!!!!
awww!!!!!!!!!!!! khanak said what she can do more heheheheheheh khanak tum pas gayi omgeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! shaan drag her on his lap and khanak shyly hug him
how romantic was that ;)* Blush*
khanak is shy even after so many years of their marriage, she feels like he touched her for the first time ayeeeee!!!!!! hayeeeeee!!!!!!! and shaan told her that heheheheehh!!!!!!!!!!
shaan is totally in romancing mood today ;)and khanak respond with equal
passion to his kiss and then they were disturbed at the bell
cutie pie came back missing her papa how sweet she said pa pa pa !!!!!!!!!!! i love it :)))when khanak called her bamaash bhacha and khwaish reaction like knows what her mom said how cute is that :D
Parul and khanak's little conv was awesome yeah parul u came at bad timing but maaf kiya kyuki u came with khwaish was missing her so much finally khwaish agayi :D aweeeee!!!!!!!!
kitchen part was adorable khanak put khwaish down to take out milk from a fridge and she crawl to her room
she enter the room and shaan came out from shower, he picked his baby that was cute, father daughter moments is penned beautifully i love it to the core khwaish lean over his dad and curled her arm around his neck
she khanak heard them and she too moved to her room baap beti were playing and khwaish giggled hearing her mumma's accusition.
i loved it i loved it i loved it :D
suchi u penned it beautifully mwaaahhhhhh!!!!!!! <3 i was lost in the update ke then it ended n i was like khatam hogaya, i wanted to read more
please update soon jaldi jaldi
loads of love and hugs
Thanks a ton dear
ReplyDeletelol, seriously ur comment made me blush more , than i had while writing , hehehehe
i m glad that you liked d update and hope ur wish of shanak romance and shaan and khwaish is fulfilled :)
well, keep reading for more romance, nok-jhok , cute moments with khwaish , and whatever else you want , let me know ;)
*huggss*
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