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Khwaish immediately cuddled to shaan tucking her head in his
neck and arms around, shaan was caressing her back lovingly. Khanak too came
and cuddled to them, making khwaish sandwich between the two. khwaish started
giggling when both of them started kissing her and in between to each other ;)
Their trance was broken by the ring tone of khanak’s iphone,
she released khwaish from her embrace and started moving towards her iphone, but
before her khwaish crawled and reached the end of their bed, where it was kept,
to take her mumma’s phone. she saw the screen and immediately screamed showing
her ecstasy , it was showing ‘Jai’s ‘ pic ….indicating that ‘jai’ is calling and
little one understood it , as they taught her
that if someone’s pic is flashing when phone rings, it means that person
is calling to them.
Khwaish (looking towards shanak): mama………….mama……..
Khanak : aww……..mama ka phone hai ??
Khwaish jumped up happily , took her mumma’s iphone,
extended her little hands towards her mumma, asking her to take the call as she
wants to talk to her mamu…..
Shanak amused seeing her reaction and smiled loving, khanak
moved towards her to take her in her embrace and kissed her temple and then
took her iphone to attend the call……….
Khanak( whispering in khwaish’s ear) : say ‘ jai shri
krishna‘ to mama
Khwaish looked at her mumma, trying to understand her words
and then frowned her eyebrows “hmm??”
Khanak smiled at her and make her sit in her lap and kept
the call in loud speaker so that they all can talk together….
Khanak : good morning
bhai…
Jai: gud morning sweetie…………..many many happy returns of the
day to both of you
Shanak: thank you so much jai….
Khwaish who was waiting for her turn, can’t wait more and
she squealed loudly, showing her presence to her mama, ……….. Indirectly saying
that she too presents here, so wants him to talk to her first.
Jai smiled widely hearing the little one’s voice so early in
the morning …..
Jai : hey cutie-pie …….. meri gudiya kaisi hai ??
Khwaish was only giggling and clapping showing her happiness
as an answer and listening her mama’s talk intently.
Jai felt like taking the little one in his embrace and hug
her tightly, her cute voice and giggles tempts him more to see her and love her.
Jai : shaan open the Skype , I want to see my gudiya ..
Shaan smiled knowing very much that how much he miss khwaish
and not only he, every members of their family miss her, after she returns from
Delhi.
Shaan: as you wish
boss, give me a minute
Shaan immediately connect his laptop and set the laptop in
front of khwaish so that jai can see her and also they both came closer taking
khwaish in between, so that they all can talk together. Shaan’s hand around
khanak’s waist and khwaish sitting in between them on shaan’s lap , and khanak
was leaning on shaan………. The picture looked like a perfect family, it was actually
a perfect, and jai too felt proud and happy to see his little sister happy
Khwaish once saw jai , she jumped happily more on his lap ,
clapping her hands …..
Jai: gudiya……… muahh ( giving her flying kiss)
Khwaish too respond him by giving him flying kis making the
people aroung amused by her reaction.
Jai : gudiya ….kya kar rahi thi ? itni jaldi uth gayi thi meri
gudiya ??
Khwaish expression changed immediately and become sad, which
was noticed by jai ……..
Jai : kya hua gudiya ?
Khwaish : diya ……dhum ………diya ……… dhum ………..
( she was trying to
say “ gudiya dhum ho gayi “ ……..means she
fall down )
Her answer makes jai frown and shanak looked each other knowing
very well now what would be jai’s reaction.
Jai : kya hua tha meri gudiya ko ?
Khwaish repeated her words but jai still didn’t understand,
so he asked shanak what she is saying …..
Shaan : jai , she is saying that “gudiya dhum ho gayi thi “
Jai panicked knowing that such a small figure fall down, how
much pain she must have felt ……
Jai: awwiiiee…….. meri choti si gudiya girr gayi thi ??...
kaise ???? …..yeh mumma -papa khwaish ka bilkul dhyan nai rakhte ………hai na ?? ,……….
Khanak …shaan….. Where were you both??........how she fall down ……..and did you
guys take her to doctor... what did he say?
Shaan : hold on jai ……..take a deep breadth
Khanak giggled and took the little one in her embrace
Khanak : bhai , she is fine , it’s just that she was going
to see her new toys , which shaan bought for her yesterday, but while getting
down from bed , she falls down. But she didn’t have hurt anywhere we have seen her
and see she is perfectly fine in front of you …..so now don’t panic.
Jai : how cant I panic , you both are busy among yourself
and are not taking proper care of my niece……… gudiya , tu na mama ke paas aa ja
, mumma-papa ko na rahne de akele…..dono ko ek dusre se fursat hi nai milti ki
meri gudiya ka khyal rakh sake
Khanak : lol………..haan haan ja gudiya , phir mama aayenge
next flight se wapis , tujhe chodne ,,,,,,phir bolenge ………..rakho apni shaitan gudiya ko apne paas he.
Jai : what do you think that I can’t handle her ? ….. if I can
handle you , then I can handle any child , because no one can be more stubborn
than you .
Shaan giggled hearing the duo’s convo and khwaish was
confused looking all of them trying to understand what’s happening.
Khanak ( to shaan) : why are you laughing so much …….. You
also think that I am stubborn??
Shaan : arrey maine toh kuch bhi nai kaha
Khanak : kahne ki jarurat bhi nai hai , yeh tumhari hassi
sab kuch baa rahi hai
Shaan : had hai yaar …………..kuch bolo toh musibat , kuch na
bolo toh musibat
Jai : now you both stop arguing and take proper care of
khwaish , next time , I mean it,………. if something happened to my little gudiya , then I won’t spare you
both
Shanak : haan bhai , we will take good care of your niece ………..now
happy ??
Jai: khwaish ,……….guddiya ……….nani yaad kar rahi thi aapko
Khwaish (happily): nani …….. nani……….
Jai : nani abhi mandir gayi hai ,...... jai ..... jai karne , ayegi na
tab mein nani se baat kara dungi gudiya ki , hai na …..
Khwaish then leaned backward tucking her back on shaan’s
chest. Shaan circled his other arm
around her as one was circled around khanak.
Jai : so what’s the planning for tonight? ;)
Shaan: buddy, everything done last night now am too tired to
do anything tonight :P
Jai laughed loudly and Khanak blushed profously hearing their
talk and that too in front of her brother. She slapped his arm playfully
Khanak : have some shame, you are talking to my bro
Shaan : Excuse me , he is my buddy before your brother and
he too is married to understand .
Khanak (nodded her head hopelessly): it’s true …….. Men are
dog
Jai and shaan laughed loudly hearing her accusation, shaan
gripped his hold around her more tightly taking her more closer and kissed her cheeks………..
Khanak blushed profusely and immediately tried to freed
herself from his grip
Jai : kuch toh sharam karo , choti si baby ke saamne toh
control karo ……
Khanak(taking khwaish from shaan’s lap): You guys carry on , I am going to feed her …………..
khwaish mama ko ‘tata ‘ karo ( say ‘bye’
to ’mama’)
Khwaish did it and also gave a loving flying kiss to her
mama………
Khanak : mama ko bolo jaldi aana………..khwaish ko yaad aati
hai
Khwaish (nodding her head and jumping on khanak’s lap): aanaa
All three of them smiled seeing the little one and jai too
gave her a loving kiss “bye bye meri choti si gudiya” :*

Awesome, beautiful splendid n many many praising adjedtives Suchi
ReplyDeleteafter long time i read khwaish n u made my day a wide smile spread on my face sach from start to the end i was smilling
:) now coming to d update
Awww!!!!! Shanak neh khwaish koh sandwhich banadiya and in between thy were kissing each other :D dono kabhi nahi sudrenge
Jai kah phone n khwaish became so happy hw cute she crawl to take her muma's phn i loved it
shanak talk to Jai, lovely yaar n hw can khwaish left back she giggle sweetly to Jai how sweet
Skype part was so good yaar u made be blush blush blush :) Really shaan was talking to Jai like dis lolzzz he's tired to do anything at night omgeee!!!
really have some shame shaan n jai khanak is der
awww!!! khwaish tried to explain her Jai mama keh she fall down bt Jai didn get it
later khanak told him
i loved d update Suchi beautiful part
awaiting for more upcoming parts take ur time to update bt do update sweetie
thank you so much dear for the lovely and sweet reply :))))
Deletewill try to update next part soon
finally read your update today
ReplyDeletewow supub update as always cute update
sorry for later comment
THANK FOR LIKING IT :))
DeleteAND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUGGESTING JALIS FOR READING IT :*
hi :)
ReplyDeletei m a huge shanak fan just like you
i got to know about this ff today thanks to khushbu :)
khwaish wowww what a name and what a cute little baby awwwwww
khwaish is everything about shanak's cute sweet little baby girl
she is soooo sweet and attractive that everyone like her love her in an instant aww i love khawaish muuaahhh :D
never heard or read such sweet story before
u r a brilliant writer
this story is totally diff from others love it soooo much beautiful :D
i hv read 10 parts in one go will read other parts soon and in 10 parts i m loving it so much that i m getting addicted to it
shanak's bond with their daughter is soo sweet they love her so much and khwaish too love her parents soo much :D
i m writing this comment on this part bcoz i doubt that u ll get to know about my comment if i had wrote it in part 10 :)
update next part soon :D
hey
Deletethank you so much for the wonderful reply and loving my cutie - pie :)
first when i started writing KHWAISH, i never thought to write it more than one update but after that i wrote more parts and now it feels as if she is attached with my life, i keep on imagining her as if she exist in real and just whatever nuisance of her came to my mind , i just wrote it down , frankly i am not a writer at all
and just like shanak , she is my jaan too ;)
anyways thank you so much for reading and liking KHWAISH
no worries , wherever you comment , i will get the notification through email , so don't worry , comment wherever you want :)
love you for the wonderful reply
as now i am free , will try to update frequently
awww thank u so much for ur warm welcome
Deletei hv read 30 prts now i m quite fast na hehehheh
but jo story mujhe achhi lagti hain use khatam kiye bagair main reh nahi sakti hehehhehe
waiting for next update
loving khwaish sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :)
and loving shanak more love how u concentrate on shanak's romance too love their hot and sizzling romance keep them coming :)
lol, you know i want to write hot sizzling updates but end up writing my cutie-pies nautanki , in new update or say anniversary updates i want to writ whole for shanak but whenever i start writing , i end up writing of khwaish masti , that is the updates get delayed :P
ReplyDeletesorry for that , will try to be focus from now on wards :DD