Thursday, November 28, 2013

Khwaish Part 39

(credit heer for the beautiful creation)




Khwaish immediately cuddled to shaan tucking her head in his neck and arms around, shaan was caressing her back lovingly. Khanak too came and cuddled to them, making khwaish sandwich between the two. khwaish started giggling when both of them started kissing her and in between to each other  ;)

Their trance was broken by the ring tone of khanak’s iphone, she released khwaish from her embrace and started moving towards her iphone, but before her khwaish crawled and reached the end of their bed, where it was kept, to take her mumma’s phone. she saw the screen and immediately screamed showing her ecstasy , it was showing ‘Jai’s ‘  pic ….indicating that ‘jai’ is calling and little one understood it , as they taught her  that if someone’s pic is flashing when phone rings, it means that person is calling to them.

Khwaish (looking towards shanak): mama………….mama……..

Khanak : aww……..mama ka phone hai ??

Khwaish jumped up happily , took her mumma’s iphone, extended her little hands towards her mumma, asking her to take the call as she wants to talk to her mamu…..

Shanak amused seeing her reaction and smiled loving, khanak moved towards her to take her in her embrace and kissed her temple and then took her iphone to attend the call……….

Khanak( whispering in khwaish’s ear) : say ‘ jai shri krishna‘  to mama

Khwaish looked at her mumma, trying to understand her words and then frowned her eyebrows “hmm??”

Khanak smiled at her and make her sit in her lap and kept the call in loud speaker so that they all can talk together….
Khanak : good morning  bhai…

Jai: gud morning sweetie…………..many many happy returns of the day to both of you

Shanak: thank you so much jai….

Khwaish who was waiting for her turn, can’t wait more and she squealed loudly, showing her presence to her mama, ……….. Indirectly saying that she too presents here, so wants him to talk to her first.

Jai smiled widely hearing the little one’s voice so early in the morning …..

Jai : hey cutie-pie …….. meri  gudiya kaisi hai ??

Khwaish was only giggling and clapping showing her happiness as an answer and listening her mama’s talk intently.

Jai felt like taking the little one in his embrace and hug her tightly, her cute voice and giggles tempts him more to see her and love her.

Jai : shaan open the Skype , I want to see my gudiya ..

Shaan smiled knowing very much that how much he miss khwaish and not only he, every members of their family miss her, after she returns from Delhi.

Shaan:  as you wish boss, give me a minute

Shaan immediately connect his laptop and set the laptop in front of khwaish so that jai can see her and also they both came closer taking khwaish in between, so that they all can talk together. Shaan’s hand around khanak’s waist and khwaish sitting in between them on shaan’s lap , and khanak was leaning on shaan………. The picture looked like a perfect family, it was actually a perfect, and jai too felt proud and happy to see his little sister happy

Khwaish once saw jai , she jumped happily more on his lap , clapping her hands …..

Jai: gudiya……… muahh ( giving her flying kiss)

Khwaish too respond him by giving him flying kis making the people aroung amused by her  reaction.

Jai : gudiya ….kya kar rahi thi ? itni jaldi uth gayi thi meri gudiya ??

Khwaish expression changed immediately and become sad, which was noticed by jai ……..

Jai : kya hua gudiya ?

Khwaish : diya ……dhum ………diya ……… dhum ………..
( she was trying to say “ gudiya dhum ho gayi “ ……..means  she fall down )

Her answer makes jai frown and shanak looked each other knowing very well now what would be jai’s reaction.

Jai : kya hua tha meri gudiya ko ?

Khwaish repeated her words but jai still didn’t understand, so he asked shanak what she is saying …..

Shaan : jai , she is saying that “gudiya dhum ho gayi thi “

Jai panicked knowing that such a small figure fall down, how much pain she must have felt ……

Jai: awwiiiee…….. meri choti si gudiya girr gayi thi ??... kaise ???? …..yeh mumma -papa khwaish ka bilkul dhyan nai rakhte ………hai na ?? ,………. Khanak …shaan….. Where were you both??........how she fall down ……..and did you guys take her to doctor... what did he say?

Shaan : hold on jai ……..take a deep breadth  

Khanak giggled and took the little one in her embrace

Khanak : bhai , she is fine , it’s just that she was going to see her new toys , which shaan bought for her yesterday, but while getting down from bed , she falls down. But she didn’t have hurt anywhere we have seen her and see she is perfectly fine in front of you …..so now don’t panic.

Jai : how cant I panic , you both are busy among yourself and are not taking proper care of my niece……… gudiya , tu na mama ke paas aa ja , mumma-papa ko na rahne de akele…..dono ko ek dusre se fursat hi nai milti ki meri gudiya ka khyal rakh sake

Khanak : lol………..haan haan ja gudiya , phir mama aayenge next flight se wapis , tujhe chodne ,,,,,,phir bolenge ………..rakho apni shaitan gudiya ko apne paas he.

Jai : what do you think that I can’t handle her ? ….. if I can handle you , then I can handle any child , because no one can be more stubborn than you .

Shaan giggled hearing the duo’s convo and khwaish was confused looking all of them trying to understand what’s happening.

Khanak ( to shaan) : why are you laughing so much …….. You also think that I am stubborn??

Shaan : arrey maine toh kuch bhi nai kaha

Khanak : kahne ki jarurat bhi nai hai , yeh tumhari hassi sab kuch baa rahi hai

Shaan : had hai yaar …………..kuch bolo toh musibat , kuch na bolo toh musibat

Jai : now you both stop arguing and take proper care of khwaish , next time , I mean it,………. if something happened to  my little gudiya , then I won’t spare you both

Shanak : haan bhai , we will take good care of your niece ………..now happy ??

Jai: khwaish ,……….guddiya ……….nani yaad kar rahi thi aapko

Khwaish (happily): nani …….. nani……….

Jai : nani abhi mandir gayi hai ,...... jai ..... jai karne , ayegi na tab mein nani se baat kara dungi gudiya ki , hai na …..

Khwaish then leaned backward tucking her back on shaan’s chest. Shaan  circled his other arm around her as one was circled around khanak.

Jai : so what’s the planning for tonight? ;)

Shaan: buddy, everything done last night now am too tired to do anything tonight :P

Jai laughed loudly and Khanak blushed profously hearing their talk and that too in front of her brother. She slapped his arm playfully

Khanak : have some shame, you are talking to my bro

Shaan : Excuse me , he is my buddy before your brother and he too is married  to understand .

Khanak (nodded her head hopelessly): it’s true …….. Men are dog

Jai and shaan laughed loudly hearing her accusation, shaan gripped his hold around her more tightly taking her more closer  and kissed her cheeks………..

Khanak blushed profusely and immediately tried to freed herself from his grip

Jai : kuch toh sharam karo , choti si baby ke saamne toh control karo ……

Khanak(taking khwaish from shaan’s lap):  You guys carry on , I am going to feed her ………….. khwaish mama ko ‘tata ‘ karo  ( say ‘bye’ to ’mama’)

Khwaish did it and also gave a loving flying kiss to her mama………

Khanak : mama ko bolo jaldi aana………..khwaish ko yaad aati hai

Khwaish (nodding her head and jumping on khanak’s lap): aanaa

All three of them smiled seeing the little one and jai too gave her a loving kiss “bye bye meri choti si gudiya”  :*


8 comments:

  1. Awesome, beautiful splendid n many many praising adjedtives Suchi
    after long time i read khwaish n u made my day a wide smile spread on my face sach from start to the end i was smilling
    :) now coming to d update
    Awww!!!!! Shanak neh khwaish koh sandwhich banadiya and in between thy were kissing each other :D dono kabhi nahi sudrenge
    Jai kah phone n khwaish became so happy hw cute she crawl to take her muma's phn i loved it
    shanak talk to Jai, lovely yaar n hw can khwaish left back she giggle sweetly to Jai how sweet
    Skype part was so good yaar u made be blush blush blush :) Really shaan was talking to Jai like dis lolzzz he's tired to do anything at night omgeee!!!
    really have some shame shaan n jai khanak is der
    awww!!! khwaish tried to explain her Jai mama keh she fall down bt Jai didn get it
    later khanak told him
    i loved d update Suchi beautiful part
    awaiting for more upcoming parts take ur time to update bt do update sweetie

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    1. thank you so much dear for the lovely and sweet reply :))))

      will try to update next part soon

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  2. finally read your update today

    wow supub update as always cute update

    sorry for later comment

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    1. THANK FOR LIKING IT :))

      AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUGGESTING JALIS FOR READING IT :*

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  3. hi :)
    i m a huge shanak fan just like you
    i got to know about this ff today thanks to khushbu :)
    khwaish wowww what a name and what a cute little baby awwwwww
    khwaish is everything about shanak's cute sweet little baby girl
    she is soooo sweet and attractive that everyone like her love her in an instant aww i love khawaish muuaahhh :D
    never heard or read such sweet story before
    u r a brilliant writer
    this story is totally diff from others love it soooo much beautiful :D
    i hv read 10 parts in one go will read other parts soon and in 10 parts i m loving it so much that i m getting addicted to it
    shanak's bond with their daughter is soo sweet they love her so much and khwaish too love her parents soo much :D
    i m writing this comment on this part bcoz i doubt that u ll get to know about my comment if i had wrote it in part 10 :)
    update next part soon :D

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    1. hey

      thank you so much for the wonderful reply and loving my cutie - pie :)

      first when i started writing KHWAISH, i never thought to write it more than one update but after that i wrote more parts and now it feels as if she is attached with my life, i keep on imagining her as if she exist in real and just whatever nuisance of her came to my mind , i just wrote it down , frankly i am not a writer at all

      and just like shanak , she is my jaan too ;)

      anyways thank you so much for reading and liking KHWAISH

      no worries , wherever you comment , i will get the notification through email , so don't worry , comment wherever you want :)

      love you for the wonderful reply

      as now i am free , will try to update frequently

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    2. awww thank u so much for ur warm welcome
      i hv read 30 prts now i m quite fast na hehehheh
      but jo story mujhe achhi lagti hain use khatam kiye bagair main reh nahi sakti hehehhehe
      waiting for next update
      loving khwaish sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :)
      and loving shanak more love how u concentrate on shanak's romance too love their hot and sizzling romance keep them coming :)

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  4. lol, you know i want to write hot sizzling updates but end up writing my cutie-pies nautanki , in new update or say anniversary updates i want to writ whole for shanak but whenever i start writing , i end up writing of khwaish masti , that is the updates get delayed :P

    sorry for that , will try to be focus from now on wards :DD

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