Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Khwaish Part 14


She keeps on whining and shaan was busy in cajoling her, then a familiar voice from the main door of the house make khwaish stopped from her whining mode .she looked towards the direction of the voice and giggled to see the person, surprising shaan again from her change in mode from whinning to giggling and he thought that how can a child less than a year understands things so well .

 Jai : Khwaish 

She gets ecstatic to see him and giggled to see jai approaching towards her with quick steps , and stretched his hand to ask her to come to him , she leaned towards him as if asking him to hold her , he did it and hugged and kissed her lovingly , then he swayed her in air upwards , while she keeps on giggling , spreading her beautiful laughter in the house . Jai then keeps on  talking to her that how much he missed her since she left , as if she is going to understand everything , she keeps on giggling and holding him , curled her little hand around his neck for support , shaan was surprised to no end to see how his daughter is becoming the ‘Jaan’ of almost everyone that no one can do anything but to love her and to play with her, ……..but  it’s her charm and naughtiness which attract people towards her , if someone is good with her and play nicely without irritating her with their squeezing hug or kisses , then she plays nicely with them too but if anyone does something or other which irritates her , then she never  liked to play with that person , no matter how much they try , all this things about her amused everyone whoever listens it from khanak or from shaan . 

People witnessing the scene between jai and khwaish were surprised to see the cute moment shared between them and smiled widely to see the bond developed between them in just few days . Savita too came behind Jai , but was stopped in her way to see how jai and khwaish ‘s meeting with each other . She then moved towards madhavi ……..hugged her . And then they all sat in the hall exchanging their well being.

Sunil : When will Mr. Sharma return back ?

Savita : he will be back by Tuesday . 

Everyone was then busy with talking to each other while khwaish was still in jai’s hold and shaan was sitting beside them, khanak moved towards kitchen to serve some juices and snacks .Shaan  unaware of her move , looked around to locate her but didn’t able to locate her , after few minutes madhavi asked one of the helper who was serving water , to call khanak from kitchen , shaan looked around to see if anyone is noticing him,  but none as everyone was busy in their own act. Dadi, sunil, savita and madhavi is having their own talk , jai and khwaish is busy in playing with each other and Aryan didn’t came out from his room since he went , he got up and moved towards the kitchen .

He moved inside with slow steps and snaked his arm around her waist and gave a deep kiss in her neck  immediately before she could understand anything , after getting back to her senses , she hold his hand which was on her tummy and tried to detach herself from his hold

Khanak : jerk , have some shame , what if someone will come inside ?

Shaan : so what ? m I doing some crime ? You are my wife and I have every right to do whatever I want.

Last line which he said with his husky voice gave a Goosebumps to her and she blushed hard but then immediately composes herself

Khanak : yes , it’s a crime to do this in kitchen .

Shaan : Really ?

Shaan : where it is written to not do it in kitchen ?  where should we do it then ? * wink *

Khanak : Jerk ! shut up and go out , and let me do my work , people are sitting outside, what will they think about us?  

Shaan : I don’t care , you are irritating me now , since morning I m seeing you doing all this ………..instruct  all this to ravi( Khandelwal's servant ) , and you come and sit with all.

Khanak : okk baba , let him back and I will instruct him .

Shaan : good

Then one of the servant came in the kitchen and shaan moved  little away from her , khanak  instructed helper  what all should be served , and then they both came out from kitchen .

Older people was still busy in discussing some issue , while jai then raised his eyes to see where shaan flew away , quickily his glance moved towards him as  he  saw  him coming out from kitchen with khanak , he  nodded hopelessly remembering that shaan isn’t change a bit.  

Jai : Dude , where did you escaped  suddenly ?

Shaan  said nothing but smiled sheepishly and then winked, jai smiled widely seeing it and nodded again . Just then Aryan came out of his room , and he moved towards jai .

Jai : hey champ ! where were you ?

Aryan : Jai chachu,  aap kahan they ?

Jai : mein apne ghar pe tha .

They did ‘Hi5’ and then jai moved giving space to Aryan to sit beside him too, Khwaish was looking all this with blank expressions, she tilted towards Aryan and  jerked her hand towards him “bupp” , everyone in the room diverted their attention towards her again and laughed loudly , but savita and jai being unaware of actual reason just smiled.

Madhavi : Gosh ! Aryan ko toh yeh thappad maar ke hi rahegi aaj .

Jai : Arrey baba re , itna gussa kyun aaya meri choti si gudiya ko ?

Shaan : Its all because of you jai  , I didn’t know that you are so naughty  and made her naughty and stubborn too .

Jai and everyone laughed loudly hearing the accusation by shaan .

Jai : Why ? what did i did ?

Madhavi : shaan , you yourself is more stubborn and so is your daughter now, I am happy to see it, now you will realize it how difficult it is to tackle such child.

Shaan smiled sheepishly

Jai : Exactly , it’s in her blood , both father and mother are stubborn , and so the child have to be.

Shaan :  still , she is surprising me to end since yesterday with her acts,  its all because of you only , aaj koi mila nayi usse masti karne wala toh  subah se toh bechare Aryan ke peeche padi hai . Pahle boll ke liye ladey aur abhi just tumhare aane se pahle car ke liye.

Jai chuckled hearing it : Aww…………… iseliye bhaiya ki pitti ho rahi hai ?

Jai  to Aryan : Beta , yeh dekho aapse choti hai na,  toh aap isse  dedo na apne toys khelne ke liye , phir woh  aapke saath acche se khelegi  aur pyari bhi karegi.

Aryan : chachu , yeh  mere toys le leti hai,  jo bhi mein leta hoon, wahi use bhi chahiye .

Jai : arrey beta , dekho woh  bas thodi derr toh khelege , phir toh chali jayegi shaan chachu ke saath wapis hydrabad .

Aryan : But yeh chillati bhi hai aur mujhse jhagda bhi karti hai , mein nayi dunga .

Jai : acchha , agar who aapko pyari karegi toh aap use khilaoge ?

Aryan : haan  

Jai cant stopped himself from laughing out loudly at the way Aryan is defeating himself as if whatever he is doing is all justified, because of her behavior towards him,  he then looked towards khwaish who was listening to the convo between jai and Aryan attentively as if going to understand everything. Jai hold her again, and raised her from his one leg to keep her in his other leg beside Aryan, kissed her forhead  : “ sweety , bhaiya  se shake hand karo “

Khwaish didn’t raised her hand, just looked towards jai for some time and then towards Aryan.

Jai : Mera , good girl baccha hai na , chalo bhaiya se shake hand karo aur pyari kar do .

Aryan raised his hand first , and moved towards khwaish , jai keeps on repeating the sentence , then finally she raised her hand too to shake it with him .

Jai : ab , ek pyari bhi kar do bhaiya ko .

Khwaish tilted towards Aryan and reached to his cheek and touched her soft pink lips on his cheek and came back to her own position.

Jai : Good girl , sabki baat sunti hai , hai na ?

Jai squeezed her lovingly and gave a soft peck on her hair and then hold her strongly in his embrace.

Shaan : not bad buddy.

Jai and everyone chuckled hearing it.

Shaan and khanak looked at each other, smiled and felt proud that their daughter listens to other people too other than her own parents.

2 comments:

  1. Excellent Update sweet heart

    super Duper cuteee ...........I reminded of the relation I share with Vrish I miss him now i am speechless will comment in a while
    This was really touching part Dear

    Muaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for this amazing update

    LOve you for this U are emmensly talented yaar I was so touched taht i couldnt wrote comment at that time as i knew i will not be able to justify it So writing it now

    The start it self discribed the bond between Jai & Khwish Princess was Super happy to see mama standing at door smiling at His One & only princess ,,,,,,,,,,I loved the way she started jumping to go to Mama & she started telling Mama as if "Godi le lo pleaseeeee"
    Aweeee So so sooooooooooooo Cute

    Shaan getting surprised to her explained brilliantly U know this is very natural when kids visits other place they learn lot from there as kids have awesome grasping power they immidiately get attached with the people if they gets love & dare if u try to scold them they will just not look at you again ....pass aana toh bahot durr ki baat hain ..........

    Lol i remeber once i scolded vrisheen so loudly coz he was climbing kitchen balcany & it doesnt have grill ......Gosh he started crying so loaudly & he decided that bua is angry & will scold me again So he didnt came to me whole day as he was upser with me coz i scold him baba rey usko manana kitni mehnat karni padi thi

    Loved the way Jai made her sit with Aryan & finally war shaant huyi with cute si pyarri & hand shake ,,,,,,,perfect this sense has discribed soo beautifully that i am actually specchless to write about it U are brilliant

    The convo between Jai & shaan was super awesome Lol these guys are true buddies never left the chance to tease each other, Very cute & Madhavi's line ............Perfect as yeh line har ma apne bete ko bolti hain that he was naughtyest in his childhood & now he will understand how difficult it is Brilliant

    Shaan stealing moment & use time in Roamncing with wifey was super cute loved their Convo & Khanak's Jerk .....hheheheh amazing Jai's expression was awesome when he saw him coming out of the kitchen ,,,,,,,,,,,,,Very cute

    Lol Aryan is sooo sweet the way he camplained abt Little sis to Fav Jai chachu was excellent ,,,,,,,,LOl the way he defended his side was awesome & our gundi is back when she saw HER manu interacting with the bro who is not giving his toys to her & baal baal bacha aryan warna is baar toh padni hi thi

    LOved the way Jai made her do things & be nice to Aryan & he also talked to aryan & asked him to share his toys cuteeeeeeee The best part was Aryan & jai both are in delhi so they must be meting often & it showed from their convo the comfert level between Aryan & jai explained amazingly

    Kudos to you darling for writing it sooo brilliantly ..........LOved it to the core ........Last time was touchy the way Shanak looked at their jaan with pride in their eyes ,,,,,,,,,,Perfect moment

    LOved loved loved it

    This goes in my Fav list ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Muaaahhhhhh

    Waiting for the next part ab

    LOve you

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    1. Wow! i was speechless to read your comment on this part
      Frankly i was bit confused whether i can give the justice of bonding between jai and khwaish. I mean i am poor at expressing in words what i wanted to convey , but you guys are amazing that you find it worth reading
      And the way you connect khwaish with vrish , i just feel ecstatic every time that my characters are very close to real life and children actually does these things.

      how jai and aryan bonds is explained in next update .....hope you like it ;)


      huggs for the beautiful responce ........muahh

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