Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Khwaish Part 13

(Loved it a lot deeps , love you )
Shaan was surprised to hear it and looked back at khwaish with lovingly and hugged her tightly “ Aww, my sweet heart , i love you so much “ . 

Khwaish snuggled near his neck and hugged him tightly; shaan caressed her back with love and affection. khwaish  turned back to look at Aryan , who was still holding the boll and looking at the duo , she stressed her hand and bend down to take the boll from him , but he immediately turned away his hand, she screamed again “ aaahhhhhh “, ……………“ bupp “ …………, shaan smirked to this but then make a fake angry expression and stared towards khwaish.

Shaan : Khwaish ???

Aryan ran towards sunil and sat near him , while Khwaish looked back at shaan when she realized the stern tone of his father and immediately make an innocent face, shaan felt like laughing out loudly but struggled hard to continue stern look on his face and not to encourage her acts .

Shaan : bahut badmaash hoti ja rahi hai na ?

Khwaish again raised her hand towards aryan and with her acts tried to explain him that, he is not giving her boll, which she was asking him, since so long.

Shaan : Aapke paas , itne saare toys hai na , unse toh nayi khelna hai , but jo iske haath mein dekhoge wahi chaiye hota hai , aapko , hai na ?

Khwaish then didn’t said anything and looked towards khanak , struggled to  get down from shaan’s  hold and then crawled back towards khanak, who was still sitting on grass  and immediately snuggled her face in her lap and started  crying, khanak immediately hold her and try to cajoled her but all in vain. shaan kept standing awestruck to see his less than a year daughter’s reaction,  when he spoke to her with little louder voice  , smiled sheepishly to see khanak’s  stern look , for making her cry. He moved towards them, again hold her in his arms “ I m so sorry beta, so sorry “.

Khwaish keep on crying, khanak asked him whether she ate anything or not, he nodded in denial,

Shaan:  Mom, had made the cerelac, its kept there  you bring it .

 Khanak turned to move towards the group but stopped as she saw madhavi is bringing the bowl herself.

Madhavi : Aww……  my doll , papa ne rula diya meri choti si gudiya rani ko ? , chalo now dadi will beat papa: D

Khwaish raised her head to see back at madhavi with moist eyes and face red in colour .

Madhavi : Papa ki pitaayi karun ?................ “ bupp “ , Karun papa ko ?

Khawaish  immediately giggled  and shaan relieved to see her smiling face yet again as he was feeling guilty to make her cry early in the morning and that when she didn’t have anything since she woke up .
 Shaan hugged her again and kissed her cheeks and wiped out her tears.

Shaan: badmaash ko itna mazza aaya na ki ab dadi papa ki pitti karegi , hmm  ? , saitan kahin ki J

Madhavi : shaan, dare you tell anything to our princess  now , ek toh subah subah rula diya, bechari nanhi se bacchi ko..............Shaan didn’t said anything but just kept on smiling holding khwaish and listening to his mom’s accusation for making her granddaughter cry, and khanak was busy in feeding khwaish without saying anything as her MIL is doing the task which khanak does  in her absence :P . 

After making her feed cerelac . Khanak took khwaish  from shaan, patted her back for few minutes to make her sleep as its her morning ritual that after  getting up , she wakes up shaan , then they both play and have their morning coffee, milk or cerelac and also biscuit dipping play of father and daughter. And then after doing so much task she sleeps.

Khanak make her sleep on one diwan , kept at the side of the hall for dadi , as dadi feels comfortable to sit on it than at sofa ,……………… kept cushions around khawish, so that she does fall while tuning in the sleep, madhavi and khanak moved towards kitchen for preparing breakfast , dadi towards the temple . Shaan sat with sunil who was telling him about their business and upcoming project, expansion, deals, and also about their mergers this year. 

Madhavi : Khanak , Savita kab ayegi ?

Khanak : Mom, ma will come with jai in the afternoon

Madhavi : okk, then I will call her  and ask her to have lunch with us .

Khanak : Ya, that would be great .

Madhavi called to sharma’s and asked them to have lunch with them, which they excepted immediately as they were wishing to spent more time with khwaish and shanak ,and jai was more happy as he will get some more time to spent with his little niece .

Madhavi : they are coming for lunch, you tell me about their choices , I will take care of everything , you  go and do your packing as khwaish is sleeping now, after she woke up , you wont get much time , hmmm ?

Khanak : Ya Mom, after breakfast I will go and pack our stuff , nothing significant to keep as such . BTW , khushboo bhabhi or Bhaiya nayi aaye abhi takk ?

Madhavi : today is khusboo’s sister ‘s marriage anniversary , so they were hosting party in some water park , Akshay nd Khushboo had  left early in the morning .

Khanak : Aryan ??

Madhavi :  she never take him along with them, so today also she didn’t .

Khanak felt hurt and pitty for Aryan, but she cant do anything except to feel sorry for him , and also didnt felt right to speak anything against khushboo bhabhi’s behavior towards Aryan with madhavi , as she knows that madhavi herself is aware that khushboo is wrong .

Madhavi and khanak  layed breakfast on the dinning table and they all have their food  along with chit chatting.

In The Afternoon ………..

Khwaish came back from her room after taking her bath and other morning rituals with shaan , who was holding her in his arm .khanak was busy in doing packing as after breakfast she helped madhavi for lunch , though madhavi keep on asking her that she will take care of everything but still khanak  insisted to let her help…………. after  that  khwaish too woke up and her daily rituals started which kept khanak busy .

 Aryan was playing with his remote control car and his toys were spread in the whole area. Khwaish was elated to see the moving car, she giggled seeing it and tried to get down from shaan’s holds to get the car, but shaan didn’t let him slip down and hold her tightly as he knows that if she get down, then again the whole morning fiasco will repeat.

But still her daughter is more stubborn, to stay quite when she already decided what to do :P
Khwaish tried more and shaan had to let her …………… but he asked Aryan to take away his car this time to avoid the second  round of war between them for car . ………….Aryan stopped playing, took the car and immediately ran towards his room to keep it their safely.

Khwaish saw this and immediately sat on her knees, raised her both hand and screamed again “ AAAhhh ………….“.She keeps on whining and shaan was busy in cajoling her, then a familiar voice from the main door of the house make khwaish stopped from her whining mode .she looked towards the direction of the voice and giggled to see the person, surprising shaan again from her change in mode from whinning to giggling and he thought that how can a child less than a year understands things so well .

Jai : Khwaish :D

3 comments:

  1. Muaaahhhhh for the awesome Part 13

    Awesomest update dear Frankly speaking your writing is so natural that I feel as if tere ghar mein chota baby hain & U watch & observe her antics regularly that is the reason you penned down it so naturally ……….But yaha toh I know you Hats off to you this is soo perfect & natural I have seen vrish growing up & you are Perfect *claps*

    Lol Khwish is my rocking cutie pie har manna hamare dictionary main nahi hain so she decided to give bro her peace of mind again Lol poor Aryan is soo scared of this Rawdy little khandelwal angle that he kept running here & there looking for a rescue

    Shaan scolded khwish slightly to stop her naughtiness & our princess started crying as she couldn’t resist her Papa scolding her :’( Ohh my poor babay I felt like going there & giving her tight hug she immediately don toward Mom tocamplain abt papa.

    I loved the whole sence described beautifully Specially dadi poti sense, Madhavi asking khwish to clam dowm & doing action to scold shaan ,,,,,,,,,,very well written Loved the way u described their daily rituals & khanak helping madhvi preparing lunch *perfect*

    Khwish ahain looking for Aryan’s Car & this time shaan asked Aryan to take the car along with him to his room …….Lol I was laughing crazily at this ……..Perfect bacche aise hi hote hain .,,,,,,,,mera bhi mera & tera bhji mera attitude rakhne wale

    Felt seriously very bad for Aryan I feel like chillaoing on khushboo but she will not listen madam high society veryy bad rey poor child has no precious moment to get remember whole life spent with Mummy papa

    Khwish crying as she wanted the toy & suddenly the sound of her special friend stopped her from crying super cute

    Will comment on part 14 after reading Superb Superb Superb

    Love you Suchi ,,,,,,,,,,,Keep writing

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    1. huggs for the beautiful reply pranjal :)

      Lol , ya she is so stubborn .........if parents are stubborn then their children is double then them , mummy papa dono ka asar hai usme :P ...........she never gives up and when she saw that she is getting attention then she becomes more naughty .kids are just attention seeker ;)

      Yup , i personally feel emotional everytime while writing aryan's part but cant help as i wanted to show the other side of the coin too ,
      Not all parents are like Shanak, but may be now a days parents like Akshay and khushboo are more than shanak, so i think its a life and we have different people around us.

      thanks for loving khwaish

      Love you

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  2. aryan to zarur pitega ek din khwaish se...!!! aise ladki se uska pala jo nahi pada kabhi...
    awee!! shaan ne danta princess ko??? fake dant se asli wala rona agaya khwaish ko... and then shaan ko iski saza toh milne he thi.... good job madhavi... bacho ko hasna a jata hai if u scold mom dad...
    khanak ki baaton ko seriously lena chaiye khushboo ko... she should spent time with aryan.. baccha hai woh abhi aqbhi.. such things affect a lot to the growing age of children...

    khwaish ne phir se zagda mol liya aryan se... Aryan beta tu apne toys ko kamre mai he rakha kar... princess ke nazar padhe unpe toh tu gaya...
    wow!! jai ke entry!! looking forward to it...
    sorry yaar!! am too lazy at commenting... comment karne ka sochte hun aur padhke wapas bhul jate hun kya likhna tha...

    i loved it... aur pls consider writing a blog...
    thanks yaar!!
    love u
    Deepali

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