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Shaan was surprised to
hear it and looked back at khwaish with lovingly and hugged her tightly “ Aww,
my sweet heart , i love you so much “ .
Khwaish snuggled near his neck and hugged him tightly; shaan
caressed her back with love and affection. khwaish turned back to look at Aryan , who was still
holding the boll and looking at the duo , she stressed her hand and bend down
to take the boll from him , but he immediately turned away his hand, she
screamed again “ aaahhhhhh “, ……………“ bupp “ …………, shaan smirked to this but
then make a fake angry expression and stared towards khwaish.
Shaan : Khwaish ???
Aryan ran towards sunil and sat near him , while Khwaish
looked back at shaan when she realized the stern tone of his father and
immediately make an innocent face, shaan felt like laughing out loudly but
struggled hard to continue stern look on his face and not to encourage her acts
.
Shaan : bahut badmaash hoti ja rahi hai na ?
Khwaish again raised her hand towards aryan and with her
acts tried to explain him that, he is not giving her boll, which she was asking
him, since so long.
Shaan : Aapke paas , itne saare toys hai na , unse toh nayi
khelna hai , but jo iske haath mein dekhoge wahi chaiye hota hai , aapko , hai
na ?
Khwaish then didn’t said anything and looked towards khanak
, struggled to get down from shaan’s hold and then crawled back towards khanak,
who was still sitting on grass and
immediately snuggled her face in her lap and started crying, khanak immediately hold her and try
to cajoled her but all in vain. shaan kept standing awestruck to see his less
than a year daughter’s reaction, when he
spoke to her with little louder voice , smiled
sheepishly to see khanak’s stern look ,
for making her cry. He moved towards them, again hold her in his arms “ I m so
sorry beta, so sorry “.
Khwaish keep on crying, khanak asked him whether she ate
anything or not, he nodded in denial,
Shaan: Mom, had made
the cerelac, its kept there you bring it
.
Khanak turned to move
towards the group but stopped as she saw madhavi is bringing the bowl herself.
Madhavi : Aww…… my
doll , papa ne rula diya meri choti si gudiya rani ko ? , chalo now dadi will beat
papa: D
Khwaish raised her head to see back at madhavi with moist
eyes and face red in colour .
Madhavi : Papa ki pitaayi karun ?................ “ bupp “ ,
Karun papa ko ?
Khawaish immediately
giggled and shaan relieved to see her
smiling face yet again as he was feeling guilty to make her cry early in the
morning and that when she didn’t have anything since she woke up .
Shaan hugged her again and kissed her cheeks and wiped out
her tears.
Shaan: badmaash ko itna mazza aaya na ki ab dadi papa ki
pitti karegi , hmm ? , saitan kahin ki J
Madhavi : shaan, dare you tell anything to our princess now , ek toh subah subah rula diya, bechari
nanhi se bacchi ko..............Shaan didn’t said anything but just kept on smiling holding
khwaish and listening to his mom’s accusation for making her granddaughter cry,
and khanak was busy in feeding khwaish without saying anything as her MIL is
doing the task which khanak does in her
absence :P .
After making her feed cerelac . Khanak took khwaish from shaan, patted her back for few minutes
to make her sleep as its her morning ritual that after getting up , she wakes up shaan , then they
both play and have their morning coffee, milk or cerelac and also biscuit
dipping play of father and daughter. And then after doing so much task she
sleeps.
Khanak make her sleep on one diwan , kept at the side of the
hall for dadi , as dadi feels comfortable to sit on it than at sofa ,……………… kept
cushions around khawish, so that she does fall while tuning in the sleep, madhavi and khanak moved towards kitchen for preparing
breakfast , dadi towards the temple . Shaan sat with sunil who was telling him
about their business and upcoming project, expansion, deals, and also about
their mergers this year.
Madhavi : Khanak , Savita kab ayegi ?
Khanak : Mom, ma will come with jai in the afternoon
Madhavi : okk, then I will call her and ask her to have lunch with us .
Khanak : Ya, that would be great .
Madhavi called to sharma’s and asked them to have lunch with
them, which they excepted immediately as they were wishing to spent more time
with khwaish and shanak ,and jai was more happy as he will get some more time
to spent with his little niece .
Madhavi : they are coming for lunch, you tell me about their
choices , I will take care of everything , you
go and do your packing as khwaish is sleeping now, after she woke up ,
you wont get much time , hmmm ?
Khanak : Ya Mom, after breakfast I will go and pack our
stuff , nothing significant to keep as such . BTW , khushboo bhabhi or Bhaiya
nayi aaye abhi takk ?
Madhavi : today is khusboo’s sister ‘s marriage anniversary
, so they were hosting party in some water park , Akshay nd Khushboo had left early in the morning .
Khanak : Aryan ??
Madhavi : she never
take him along with them, so today also she didn’t .
Khanak felt hurt and pitty for Aryan, but she cant do
anything except to feel sorry for him , and also didnt felt right to speak
anything against khushboo bhabhi’s behavior towards Aryan with madhavi , as she
knows that madhavi herself is aware that khushboo is wrong .
Madhavi and khanak layed
breakfast on the dinning table and they all have their food along with chit chatting.
In The Afternoon ………..
Khwaish came back from her room after taking her bath and
other morning rituals with shaan , who was holding her in his arm .khanak was
busy in doing packing as after breakfast she helped madhavi for lunch , though
madhavi keep on asking her that she will take care of everything but still khanak insisted to let her help…………. after that khwaish too woke up and her daily rituals
started which kept khanak busy .
Aryan was playing
with his remote control car and his toys were spread in the whole area. Khwaish
was elated to see the moving car, she giggled seeing it and tried to get down
from shaan’s holds to get the car, but shaan didn’t let him slip down and hold
her tightly as he knows that if she get down, then again the whole morning
fiasco will repeat.
But still her daughter is more stubborn, to stay quite when
she already decided what to do :P
Khwaish tried more and shaan had to let her …………… but he
asked Aryan to take away his car this time to avoid the second round of war between them for car . ………….Aryan
stopped playing, took the car and immediately ran towards his room to keep it
their safely.
Khwaish saw this and immediately sat on her knees, raised
her both hand and screamed again “ AAAhhh ………….“.She keeps on whining and shaan was busy in cajoling her,
then a familiar voice from the main door of the house make khwaish stopped from
her whining mode .she looked towards the direction of the voice and giggled to
see the person, surprising shaan again from her change in mode from whinning to
giggling and he thought that how can a child less than a year understands
things so well .
Jai : Khwaish :D

Muaaahhhhh for the awesome Part 13
ReplyDeleteAwesomest update dear Frankly speaking your writing is so natural that I feel as if tere ghar mein chota baby hain & U watch & observe her antics regularly that is the reason you penned down it so naturally ……….But yaha toh I know you Hats off to you this is soo perfect & natural I have seen vrish growing up & you are Perfect *claps*
Lol Khwish is my rocking cutie pie har manna hamare dictionary main nahi hain so she decided to give bro her peace of mind again Lol poor Aryan is soo scared of this Rawdy little khandelwal angle that he kept running here & there looking for a rescue
Shaan scolded khwish slightly to stop her naughtiness & our princess started crying as she couldn’t resist her Papa scolding her :’( Ohh my poor babay I felt like going there & giving her tight hug she immediately don toward Mom tocamplain abt papa.
I loved the whole sence described beautifully Specially dadi poti sense, Madhavi asking khwish to clam dowm & doing action to scold shaan ,,,,,,,,,,very well written Loved the way u described their daily rituals & khanak helping madhvi preparing lunch *perfect*
Khwish ahain looking for Aryan’s Car & this time shaan asked Aryan to take the car along with him to his room …….Lol I was laughing crazily at this ……..Perfect bacche aise hi hote hain .,,,,,,,,mera bhi mera & tera bhji mera attitude rakhne wale
Felt seriously very bad for Aryan I feel like chillaoing on khushboo but she will not listen madam high society veryy bad rey poor child has no precious moment to get remember whole life spent with Mummy papa
Khwish crying as she wanted the toy & suddenly the sound of her special friend stopped her from crying super cute
Will comment on part 14 after reading Superb Superb Superb
Love you Suchi ,,,,,,,,,,,Keep writing
huggs for the beautiful reply pranjal :)
DeleteLol , ya she is so stubborn .........if parents are stubborn then their children is double then them , mummy papa dono ka asar hai usme :P ...........she never gives up and when she saw that she is getting attention then she becomes more naughty .kids are just attention seeker ;)
Yup , i personally feel emotional everytime while writing aryan's part but cant help as i wanted to show the other side of the coin too ,
Not all parents are like Shanak, but may be now a days parents like Akshay and khushboo are more than shanak, so i think its a life and we have different people around us.
thanks for loving khwaish
Love you
aryan to zarur pitega ek din khwaish se...!!! aise ladki se uska pala jo nahi pada kabhi...
ReplyDeleteawee!! shaan ne danta princess ko??? fake dant se asli wala rona agaya khwaish ko... and then shaan ko iski saza toh milne he thi.... good job madhavi... bacho ko hasna a jata hai if u scold mom dad...
khanak ki baaton ko seriously lena chaiye khushboo ko... she should spent time with aryan.. baccha hai woh abhi aqbhi.. such things affect a lot to the growing age of children...
khwaish ne phir se zagda mol liya aryan se... Aryan beta tu apne toys ko kamre mai he rakha kar... princess ke nazar padhe unpe toh tu gaya...
wow!! jai ke entry!! looking forward to it...
sorry yaar!! am too lazy at commenting... comment karne ka sochte hun aur padhke wapas bhul jate hun kya likhna tha...
i loved it... aur pls consider writing a blog...
thanks yaar!!
love u
Deepali