(Credit goes to deepali for making it for khwaish , thank ypu so much deeps , love you )
They reached back to Hyderabad after spending beautiful time
with their family. Reached home during late at night, khwaish has already slept
on their way, and khanak is holding her securely in her arms, covered her with
soft blanket, so that she has proper and peaceful sleep.
After reaching home , khanak take out the bed cover from
their bed and kept down khwaish taking
care that she don’t wake up , otherwise it will be difficult to make her sleep
again and they are not in condition to entertain her at this hour of night .
The morning rays peeped through curtains and reached shaan’s
eyes , he opened his eyes fully in a surprise
and wondered about the time, he
immediately reached to his iphone kept on the side table of the bed , it
shows 7 : 00 AM , he sighed and then
kept his head back on pillows , but suddenly a thought strike to his mind that why didn’t his alarm
clock ticked today at her usual time ,
he turned to her side and found her still sleeping like a cute and innocent child
, he smiled seeing her and raised his hand to cares her , but as he touched her
,his expression changed suddenly in a shock, he immediately stir khanak and
asked her to touch her , she also got worried
and looked back at him with pale expression .
Khanak : shaan she is burning with high fever.
Shaan didn’t say anything but immediately moved out of bed
and went to have cold water and a cloth from washroom and asked Khanak to bring
milk for her.
Khanak unlocked the main gates of their flat and take the milk
packets kept outside their gates, came to kitchen and boiled it. Shaan started
putting wet cloth dipped in cold water on her forehead, but she was still
sleeping innocently without making any sound, khanak came with a bottle of milk
after cooling it, and took her in her lap, and started feeding her, after few minutes Khwaish
opened her eyes when her temperature starts
decreasing , shanak heaved a breath of great relief, khanak keeps on caressing
her head and talking to her. After she finishes her milk, khanak took her in
her arms and started patting her back.
Shaan then take her from khanak and kept her in his lap
Shaan : Sweetie kya hua ? aaj papa ko uthaya nayi ? See I got so late today.
Khwaish didn’t said anything but just looked at him and then
leaned her head towards his chest , kept sitting there without doing or saying
anything, shaan keeps on talking to her , but she didn’t respond and was
sitting lazily in his lap. Khanak by that time brought morning tea and coffee
for them, and took the tray towards the balcony to sit their and to change her
mood by showing her random things,birds, moving vehicles, but she just looked towards the direction they
asked her to look and then turned her
head again and keeps looking to them sitting on their lap rotating her pretty
eyes here and there.
Seeing the response of their so lively and chirping child
since morning, who now became totally silent, makes them more worried and tensed,
they were feeling emotional to see her response. It was their everyday routine
to start their morning with her elated voice and she keeps on buzzing whole day.
Shaan started taking his coffee and gave her one biscuit and
asked her to dip it in his mug but she
didn’t , she just keep holding biscuit in her hand , and moved towards khanak ,
hugged her , and then lay her head in her lap . Khanak cares her head lovingly,
and khwaish again closed her eyes. Khanak took her
inside and kept her on the bed , covered her with blanket , set the
temperature of AC, but didn’t switched it off as she knows that her daughter can’t
sleep without AC and is so much like her father in this matter.
Shaan too came after them, khanak looked at him with almost
teary eyes, shaan hugged her and asked her to relax, and it must be due to
change in weather. He asked her to be ready by 11 AM to visit Khwaish’s doctor and
then he will have to go back to the office as he is having one important
meeting.
They took her to the doctor, who asked them to give her prescribed
medicine timely and it was nothing to worry ….. Due to change in weather and
environment children responds like that.
Shaan dropped them and went to his office again. Khanak took
care of Khwaish whole day, and keeps on playing with her to uplift her mood,
but all in vain, she just sits quietly and leaned on khanak’s lap and she keeps
on caressing her back, forehead and head with love and affection.
It was evening when khanak’s phone ringed, she looked the
screen and it was jai’s. Khanak answered it. She told him about khwaish’s
health which worried jai too and he asked her to give phone to khwaish, khanak,
takes her phone near her ear and tells her
Khanak : sweetie , see jai mama wants to talk to you
Khwaish looked at khanak and khanak asked her to hold the phone,
jai starts speaking, and khwaish smiles lightly hearing his voice, which surprises
khanak. Khanak smiled too and hugged her and kissed her forehead lovingly and
finally she got relieved to see that her daughter smiled atlast, as they both
are worried to see her like that, the house seems to be so dull, soulless without
hearing their daughters chirping voice, she thanked jai for calling her and
talking to khwaish and rhyming the poems for her which he used to tell her in
Delhi, as she starts laughing hearing them as if understood everything.
Khanak: Bro, it seems
that she was missing you ………. I was feeling terrible to see her like this since
morning, but now she is smiling and playing little, I hope she gets back to her
normal self back soon
Jai : don’t worry khanak , she is a child and its normal for
them to fall ill, don’t take tension ,
by tomorrow she will be fine and again starts her masti , and makes you run
after her for everything .
Khanak : jai ,earlier I used to complain about her acts but
today when she is sitting quietly , don’t know why I felt terrible and though
she is sitting with me whole day but I felt that she is not in home today ,
suddenly home seems to be so dull.
Jai: I can understand
sis, I m missing her a lot, and to uplift your mood I have a news for you
Khanak : Whats that ?
Jai : next week I will visit you guys , may be for rakhi
Khanak : Wow ! Thats wonderful bro, I am so happy and my
little girl would be more happy to meet her mama here.
Jai: I am excited too
After having their little more talk about some here and
there topics, they bid their ‘goodbyes ‘and kept the phone back.
Shaan came back from office and khanak told him about
everything that how jai’s call make her change in her mood and finally her
temperature starts decreasing too . Shaan felt happy to hear it , he was as worried as khanak was , he has an
important meeting today otherwise he would have taken off for the day but cant
, still he makes sure to call khanak and enquire about khwaish’s health after
every hour.
Shaan bend forward to hold khwaish from bed took her in her
arms and kissed her cheeks and forehead lovingly “Sweetie, how are you “, …………..Khwaish
responds him by hugging and kissing his cheeks too…….. “Papa”
Shaan hugged her tightly and kissed her hairs “My little doll,
…………..Papa’s khwaish“
Suchi :'( :'(
ReplyDeleteKyun yaar aisa kiya my power puff girl is not feeling well :( thats unfair yaar. watching her being quite & ill is really tuff yaar, but you have written it beautifully.
I just loved your detailing wow you are fantastic yaar, the way you have discribed their every little moment in the start is fab U are a beautiful writer :) Shaan woke up early but late than usual & got worried as khwaish didn’t wake him up at usual time but they checd & she was having a fever :’( kya yaar aisa kyun kiya, I feel so sad whenever I read this part yaar :(
Loved the way u have described the whole scenario. Shanaks concern khanak super worried shaan handling things patiently he immediately started putting wet cloth on her forhead :) I just loved the details. Actually yaar life becames so slow & upset if a kid is not feeling well. Us mein jaan basti hain puri ghar ki shaitaniyaan, mushkrahat, ronaa, chilna everything is adorable. Thought we scold them whenever they do mischief but miss it & want it the most whenever child is dull.
Thank Fully Doc said its just due to climate change. Yaar whenever I read this part I always feel sad :( Shaan had to go to office, poor shaan its so difficult for him to go to office when khwaish is not feeling well. Loved the way u described the routine of ma beti I short.
Yiippeeeeeee Jay Mama did magic & my cutie pie started talking & laughing a bit. I just loved the bonding shared by Mama bhanji. They both are super adorable & jab saath ho toh super mastikhor :P Bro sis convo is very lovely very real & beautifully written & yiippeee Jay will be back soon for rakhi ,,,,,,,,,,Yiiippeeeeeeeeee I am so happy :)
Last part is super cute, Shaan & his doll that moment was superb I was smiling like idiot while reading it :P
Superb part
Love you for it ………………Muaahhhhhhhhh
thanks a ton pranjal for beautiful comments :)
ReplyDeleteLol, i seriously left speechless to read your reply and wonder that whether i actually these things :P
Thanks for the encouragement and motivation :))
Love you too