Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Khwaish Part 8

( the credit for above creation goes to deepali , thanks deeps for making it )
 
 
Short History of Akshay and Khushboo's life :

Khushboo Khanadelwal,........ The wife of Akshay Khanadelwal( brother of Shantanu Khanadelwal). She lives her life like a free bird. Akshay too gives her freedom to live her life as she wants , he generally dont interfere in her decisions. She belongs to high class society, therefore,Living a carefree life , partying , attending various functions keeps her busy. She also contributes in different charities,but in all this she ignores one thing and that is to take care of her only child 'Aryan'.Aryan came into thier life just after an year of their marriage and now he is three years old,aryan is taken care by one of the governess , who looks after him all the 24hrs. Khushboo just sees him whenever she comes home, but never care to sit with him and play with him or to feed him. Little Aryan was taken care by governess since childhood, so even he didn't have much attachment with Khushboo and whenever he cries, some or other artificial things is given to him to make him stop crying , all this had made him so stubborn and the result is that now whatever thing he wants he wont buzzed unless he gets it. Akshay remains busy with his business , so he didnt able to spend much time with Aryan except Sundays , so Aryan had some attachment with his father.

Aryan spent his most of the time with Madhavi and Sunil, who loves him a lot . Madhavi many times tries to explain Khushboo to take care of Aryan and to spent time with him as these moments of childhood of their child wont return back ever in her life , but Khushboo didnt took it seriously and then madhavi also didnt interfere much,she can only do is to give as much love as she can to Aryan. Aryan also loves his grand parents more than his own parents.

Shanak and Khwaish Arrival at Khandelwal House :

Shaan and Khanak along with Khwaish came inside the House, madhavi gets elated seeing them and move towards them to hug them and after exchanging their well being she moves towards khwaish to take her from shaan , but khwaish turned and hugged shaan tightly ,as if not wanting to go in the arms of people she didnt know. Shaan smiled at her this act and than caressed her back and asked her to see at him . khwaish looked at him with an innocent look.

Shaan : sweety , she is dadi , " Jai karo "

Khwaish looked at Madhavi and then back at shaan and shaan repeated his words " jai karo "........ Khwaish joined both her hands and with her sweet voice whispered " Jai ".

Madhavi caresed her head lovingly and give her blessings, again she asked her to come to her , khwaish again turned away , madhavi laughed at this and asked them to come inside. khanak gave Madhavi all the sweets, fruits, gifts sent by her Ma and also the gifts which she brought for everyone from Hydrabad .
Madhavi chided her lovingly as there is no need to bring those things , for her its the biggeset gift that her son and daughter-in-law came to meet them. 

Khanak Asked her about Aryan , madhavi called him from his room where he was playing games on Ipad. Aryan came out of his room, madhavi asked him to touch the feet of his Chacha and chachi which he did as he generally listens what madhavi and sunil tells him to do . Shaan and khanak hugged him instit and kissed him lovingly . Khanak gave him a pack of Chocolate boxes. Aryan moved towards Khwaish and touched her cheeks lovingly and asked madhavi who she is, as he is meeting khwaish for the first time .

Madhavi : she is your little sister .

Aryan : my sister ??

Madhavi : haan

Aryan : kahan se aayi hai yeh ??

everyone laughed loudly at his question and khwaish was looking at everyone with confused expression as if asking what made them laughed so much .

Madhavi : she came from Hydrabad with chacha and chachi .

Aryan moved towards khwaish and again touched her cheeks , khwaish smiled sweetly looking at him, then aryan pulled her hands forcefully , shaan hold khwaish suddenly in the process and khwaish became irritated with aryan and then she screamed loudly at him . Startled Aryan moved and sit with madhavi  ,everyone laughed at this.

Madhavi : my god ! she is truly the Piece of Khandelwal Family , how loudly she screamed at him that even he got scared for a while.

Khanak : Mom, she just cant bear if any one other than her father squeezed or irritate her . one little boy living in our building, used to come to play with her, he plays nicely with her but one day he just holds her hands forcefully to stop her from catching the ball, she screamed so loudly at him that poor boy never came back again from next day and even if he comes with his mom , he maintains far distance from her .

Everyone laughed loudly hearing this , shaan kissed his little daughter and called aryan again. he moves towards shaan but didnt touched khwaish this time.

Shaan : sweety , say hello to bhaiya.

Khwaish looked innocently at shaan and shaan asked her to say hello to aryan . khwaish stretched her hands and aryan too stretched it and they both shake their hand.

Madhavi asked shaan and khanak as to what they will have , Khanak moved towards kitchen to give orders to the servants and came back taking khwaish's milk bottle in order to feed her.

khanak put her in her lap and started feeding her, aryan came towards them and placed his hand on her forehead , khwaish left the nipple of the bottle and kept looking at him for a while before taking the nipple again. aryan again placed his hand on her head and caressed it again , khwaish again got irritated and she started whining this time , khanak consoled her and asked her to be quite , madhavi called aryan and asked him to sit with her till she finishes her milk. shaan moved towards his room to freshen up. after feeding khwaish , madhavi asked khanak to go to her room and rest for a while and will call her for lunch.

Khanak took khwaish along with her as she has slept after drinking the milk.
Shaan opened the door when he heard the knock , khanak wondered as to why he kept the door close, she raised her eyebrows as if asking what he was doing , shaan smiled at her question and opened the door fully for his sweethearts to enter their room . Khanak got surprised to see the room decorated with balloon and soft toys and attractive and decorative candles.

Khanak : Aww ! ...........papa did so much for his little sweetheart but she is sleeping, tch.

Shaan : dont worry , Papa also did it for mamma , if she likes it , than the little girl would loved it too.

Khanak : Mamma loves it

Shaan and khanak moves inside , khanak placed khwaish in between the bed and after placing her their she moves towards shaan

Khanak : Why all this decorations and all ?

Shaan : to welcome my both sweethearts in their room .

Khanak : one of the sweetheart is impressed.

Shaan : if one is impressed , other will definitely be impressed too, because bigger one is difficult to handle than the smaller one.

Khanak whacked his arm and hugged him lovingly , he placed his hand at her back and kissed her forehead lovingly.

After an hour ...........

Madhavi asked one of the servants to call them for lunch , by that time she also called khushboo to return back for lunch if her meeting was over ,akshay and Sunil too came to join them for lunch.

Khanak and shaan along with khwaish came to drawing room of the house , and everyone hugged each other and exchanged their well beings . Lunch has been laid down on the big oval shaped dinning table containing various dishes of different types according to the tastes of the people. Khanak took a bowl, put rice and dal in it and came to the drawing room to feed khwaish, while others sat to have their food in between the family talk. Madhavi just sat with them but didn't have her food as she waited for Khanak so that she didn't feel alone , khanak asked madhavi to have her lunch but madhvi didnt .

Khushboo : Khanak give khwaish to shanti (The governess of Aryan ), she will make her eat along with aryan. you come and join us.

Khanak : Nayi bhabhi, she wont eat with anyone except me .

Khushboo : How you do all this , see she is making your sari dirty by smearing it with food.

Khanak : so what bhabhi , once her eating is finished i will go and change it 

Khushboo : uff ! your pretty sari is becoming dirty. i can never tolerate if aryan does it with me , that is why i never feed him.

Khanak : Bhabhi, i can buy other sari , but cant buy these moments again spent with my daughter , each and every moment spent with her is special for me other than anything else in this world.

Khushboo : You and your Over The Top dialogs .

Khanak laughed it off , but every other person present their felt proud of Khanak. They realize that what is modernity,  Its not the Physical way of presenting yourself before the public is what you called as Modern but its your own thought and deeds which makes you modern.

Khwaish crawled upwards and reached to the height of khanak and hold her from his pallu and then smiled widely and kissed khanak on her lips , khanak became emotional at this and hugged her lovingly as she don't need to give any other proof to anyone that why she is doing all the work of khwaish by herself, as her daughter has unknowingly said every thing to them without uttering a word but just by her action that what is the bond the three of them share and how happy they are in there little world.

Khanak : Mamma's sweety pie :*







4 comments:

  1. Suchi darling.

    Muaahhhhhh for this super cute & emotional update. I loved it yaar. It was amazing

    i felt really bad for aryan yaar. Little kid had nt received love from his mother. I hated khushboo so much yaar. A three year old kid seems jhanjat to her.

    Love shanak & khwish soooooo much. My litte angle doesnt like any one touches her hand forcefully. Lol she scared aryan. Loved my power puff girl & her screaming. She is super cute.

    One of the best moment in update was when shaan decorated his room for His sweet heart & little angle. He wanted to welcome them properly so he decorated whole room with candles, flowers & toys. Wow so amazing yaar he is the sweetest.

    Loved madhavi here. She knows the importance of parents to be with child in their childhood But sadly khusboo doesnt undestand it & that is the reason aryan is close to his grandma. Loved khwish's antics when she saw dadi. Loved her "jai" to dadi. She is super cute.

    Hated khushboo she even advised khanak to give khwish to governess. Loved Khanak's answer to her. Loved khanak

    the best moment was the kissy award by angle to mummy. Loved that moment. End was super cute.

    Suchi u cant stop writing ever. Warna main teri jaan le lungi. U are brilliant writer. Love u sweetie for this.

    i'll be Waiting for the next part & dont u dare do any nakhras i want u to right more & u cant refuse. i want my khwish daily

    brilliant write up suchi. Love u for this

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    1. Oops Sorry Forgot to write LOvedd LOveddddddddd Lovedd Aryan :) Pic is So Perfect Dear Awesome !!

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  2. thanks for loving aryan pic :D
    itni mahnat se dhunda maine perfect match of khwaish's brother ...... the kids of Khandelwals :D

    yaar seriously maine kabhi nayi socha tha that i can write and people will love it to this extent , i started it with an OS but because of you all its now in this stage and especially the dhamki you and deeps gives me to write otherwise you will kill me :O ....lol, because of that fear i keep on writing :P

    lol, i am waiting for that day when you guys will tell me to stop this non-sense and torture ;)

    Love you for comments :*

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  3. Suchiiiiii!!! yet beautiful part........ i so so loved it...
    the history you gave abt akshay an khushboo was so beautifully described... Aryan needs mamma pappa's love and he is not getting it... Madhvi nad sunil are doing best as grand parents....

    loved the way you described shanak entry in khandelwal house... little princes doesn't knw dadi... bache tend to behave so.. and i love watching the confuse expressions they give.. i could imagine khwaish... how cute she must have looked....

    aryan and khwasih part was amzing... baccho ko excitment ho jati hai apne se chote baccho ke dekh kar... and wat aryan did was so cute... and khwaish ke reaction bhi... pure ma pe gayi hai apne... chillane lagi...:P

    shaan decorated the room.. so sweet of him...and the convo was beautiful... both the sweethearts are lucky to have shaan....

    and the last dinner part was fab... khanak telling abt wat it is to spend time with the kid was superb... khushboo should learn from it... the amzaing mom khanak is....

    finally again i would say... i love it so very much... dare you stop writing it... century toh marne padege tuze....

    thanks and lots of love for this khwaish...

    love u
    Deepali

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